Date: December 21, 2009 12:17 am Title: Five
Please say Andy forgets his dramamine and fally prey to sea-sickness!
Date: April 08, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Five
i really hope that writing this story has helped to bulldoze down the wall that is writer's block for you! i've read your other stories, and have hoped you'd update/finish them, and same goes for this one! i can't wait to find out what happens next!
and seriously, what is wrong with jim?? hand spasm? i don't know if you've seen the deleted scenes from "branch wars," but there's one where pam admits she's a little jealous that jim is still going along with michael and dwight to see karen! anyways, i ramble. looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
I think it has and I'll jump onto finishing those once I'm done with this one! (Oh, that's SO what she said.)
And I saw that and surprisingly, it helped me get this idea for Pam's extreme envy and anxiousness when Karen is within boundaries.
Thank you so so much for your kind review. It brightened my dull and rainy morning! I'll work hard and update this and my other stories soon! Thanks a ton (again)!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Five
I really hope Pam rips Jim a new one over this....he really shouldn't have done that after he was reassuring Pam that Karen wasn't a threat. I personally love it when Pam is mad at Jim in fics and I hope that you update this story soon!
Author's Response: Then I hope you'll like where I decide to take this next chapter! : ) Thanks for the review; it means so much! Geez, I say that too much, don't I? I need some new kind of 'thank you' line.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 08:36 pm Title: Five
OOOOH! I hope Pam lets Karen and Jim both have it! Karen is obviously going to do that on purpose, but Jim is just... being annoying? I thought he would know better than to even bother doing something like that - he knows Pam is going to go nuts about it!
Author's Response: Well then, hopefully you will like where I end up take this next chapter! Haha! Thank you so so much for another kind review - you're the best! Naw, that is an understatement. How about... you're bomb.com! Oh, I like that!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Five
NOOOOOOO!!!! STUPID IDIOTIC SLUTTY DUMBO KAREN HAD TO RUIN EVERYTHING!!!!!! GRRRRR IF I COULD GET MY HANDS ON THAT BEOTCH...
Echem, sorry about that, but, seriously, way to leave a cliffhanger! Anyway, the way that you wrote that last little interaction seemed real, and now we will get a chance (I hope *hint hint*) to see Jim work a little of his comforting magic. Btw, I totally cracked up at Michael's first joke, about the muffins. And I am such a loser for doing that. But wtvr, this chapter was great, blah blah blah, I NEED MORE!! :)
Author's Response:
You have such a way with words, Jamgela! Haha! All of your reviews make me laugh and smile! They are so sweet and witty! I love that muffin joke. I cracked up the first time and I immediately saw an image of Michael sharing it with the office. It's almost as good as the joke, "THE FISH IS DROWNING!" Oh, I know. I'm just such a comedian. (; Just playin'.
Anyway, thank you so much for every review you have given me! They are the best, really!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:18 pm Title: Five
Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters, but I have to say they are all good. I am really enjoying this story. By putting everyone on a boat and giving them no escape is just brilliant.
Oh and I love how you can always make me hate a character (Karen in this one, Roy in your other).
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Oh, PokerChips, how much your reviews brighten my day. ( :
I love you you said 'they have no escape'. It made me laugh and it is so true! I, personally, wouldn't enjoy being imprisoned in a boat with Karen either. I love your reviews so much and each one of them are so kind. Thank you so much!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Five
I think this chapter was written really well even though I'm not sure what to think of Pam at the moment. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this next.
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! And hopefully you'll warm back up to her soon! Thanks for sticking with me and giving me so many helpful suggestions! You're the best!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Five
Ok, Karen seriously needs to go overboard! Great story!
Author's Response:
how come i'm getting so many reviews suggesting that? that always makes me laugh. : )
thank you so much for your review! i'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying it!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:00 pm Title: Five
you just had to go there didn't you? ;). karen suX..good chapter.
Author's Response: oh yes, i went there alright. ; ) haha! and I'm glad to hear the chapter turned out well! thanks for the review!