Date: April 06, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Three
While I believe the Veggie is the best Quiznos sandwich I really love this story. I think it's a great concept and I wish your chapters wouldn't end. Please give me something to read soon.
Author's Response: I've never had the veggie! To tell the truth I've never even had the one Pam loves in the story. I just went on quiznos.com and looked at the sandwiched. I saw that name and to me it seems like something she would like. Haha! Anyway, thank you so much for your review! It made me smile and I'm glad to hear that you are finding it so enjoyable! I'll hopefully have the next chapter soon. Thank you so much again!
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2008 07:17 am Title: Two
It's really great! Karen totally needs to hook up with some random foreign guy on the cruise... or Creed, that'd be hilarious.
Author's Response: Or Kevin. Although he would probably smush her in the heat of the moment with his weight. Haha! And I'm glad to know you're enjoying this!
Date: April 04, 2008 06:24 am Title: Two
great job so far...can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying this! It's really fun to write! Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up soon!
Date: April 03, 2008 09:41 pm Title: One
Very nice! I have a bad feeling about Karen. Jim is so sweet, I hope there is alot of JAM loving in this story!!!
Author's Response:
I'll just say that there will be lot's of Jam loving in this! : )
Thanks again for your review; they mean so much!
Date: April 03, 2008 09:18 pm Title: One
If this is writer's block, I'm pretty into it. :) Can't wait to find out where this goes!
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you're into this story! That only makes me smile : ) Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2008 01:24 pm Title: One
This sounds like it is going to be very good and will be another one i can't wait to get the next chapter on!
Author's Response: I'm so thrilled to hear that! Thank you so much; it's so kind of you! Hopefully I'll have it up by tomorrow or possibly tonight!
Date: April 03, 2008 10:00 am Title: One
I'm interested to see where this goes!
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! Thank's for the review! : )
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2008 10:16 pm Title: One
This is going to be great. I love the idea of the characters on a cruise. I can see some funny drama and action coming up. Also your Jam is fantastic!! Can't wait for more!! :)
Please tell me Karen isn't coming on the trip too! :)
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness, thank you so much for that review! I'm glad to hear that my Jam is good, too!
And about Karen - You'll just have to wait and see ; )
Date: April 02, 2008 07:49 pm Title: One
Great start. This is already looking like a great story. One that will have me looking for updates all day long. Can't wait for an update, and I love how you ended it with Pam seeing Karen.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! What a great review! It made me smile! I'll hopefully have the next chapter up quickly; I'm aiming for tonight but it may possibly be tomorrow. Thank you again!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2008 07:09 pm Title: One
I really like it so far - a new place/event always gives a bunch of new opportunities for interaction between Jim/Pam and everyone else. Since Karen's dressed like a ho... it would be so amusing if Jim and Pam found out why she was dressed that way while they're on the plane. And it's not because that's Karen's normal vacation attire either - she could be dating Michael (scary, huh?) in an attempt to connect with her inner freaky-diki-ness to try to forget about Jim. You could always have the two of them rooming next to Jim/Pam's room and torture Jam with Karen and Michael's in-cabin antics. Creepy, hilarious and filled with opportunities for Jam banter and Jim's amusing faces.
Author's Response:
You know, that has actually struck me with a great idea! I'll be sure to be thanking you when it appears in an upcoming chapter! You're review is just the kind that I love; with suggestions AND praise. I'm so glad to know that you are enjoying it and your feedback is awesome! Since you happen to have great ideas, I'll be willing to let you see my next chapters if you're willing to beta for me because you seem like you would be awesome. My email is rawrrxxmattie@aim.com (please, don't ask) but if you don't want to that's fine too!
Thanks again for you're awesome review!!
Date: April 02, 2008 06:31 pm Title: One
I'm interested. I think you should get over that writer's block real soon.
Author's Response:
I think I should too! I'm writing this so I can hopefully cured of it soon! I'm trying!
I'm also glad to hear that you're interested in this! Thanks for the review! : )
Date: April 02, 2008 05:42 pm Title: One
I have to say I am interested to see the Karen/Pam interaction in this one. Great concept!
Author's Response: You don't know how excited that makes me to hear that! Thank you for your feedback! Please keep up the gracious support!
Date: April 02, 2008 05:22 pm Title: One
good stuff so far, looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm so happy to know that you are excited for the rest! Please keep up the support!
Date: April 02, 2008 05:17 pm Title: One
Great Chapter! I can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to know you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Date: April 02, 2008 05:02 pm Title: One
Dunh, dunh, DUNH!! Will Karen be a bitch? Will Pam get jealous? Will we get some SMUT!! I think we all know the answer ... OH, YEAH!!!!
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and seeeee (;
I'm glad you're looking forward to what's coming up! Thank you for your review! It means a TON!