Date: September 29, 2009 05:13 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
Oh, how lovely. I especially enjoyed the Highlights comments and the detail about the seats being all messed up - because it's so true! Please keep updating.
Date: September 29, 2009 03:38 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
So glad you're updating again! This was just the little break I needed today. Now I get to go back to finishing things up before I leave this job in ... five more work days!
Love the little detail about the mother covering her child's ears after Pam's comment about getting to sleep with the boss. And her reaction to Jim's "conceived in sin" comment. I think that's a very Pam-like ambivalence.
More please!
9 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2009 06:00 am Title: Hidden Pictures
Kestrel, I remember you and this fic quite well, and I'm happy you're both back :)
They had begun to drive each other’s cars on occasion, which meant that the seats were never quite in the right position anymore. It was frustrating, true, but these mundane little signs of domesticity made him feel a little giddy. Like he was slipping into the comfortable shoes of Jim Halpert, husband and father. That makes me giddy! Also, “Don’t you want out baby to grow up wild and free on a beet farm?” Ha! Awesome : D So glad that you were inspired to write this. Don't be a stranger, OK?
Author's Response: NanReg!! I'd forgotten how much I enjoyed this :). I'm definitely going to try to update more often, and thanks for leaving a wonderful review as always.
Date: September 29, 2009 12:30 am Title: Hidden Pictures
Oh I like this! Thanks for updating! Don't be away so long next time! :-) Those names that Michael came up withfor co-manager...all kinds of awesome.
Author's Response: Hopefully I can update a bit more often as the season progresses. And I had so much fun coming up with those names...thanks for sticking with me!
Date: September 28, 2009 10:16 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
Moreeeeeeeee
Author's Response: Hahaha I'll see what I can do. Thanks for the review :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2009 09:05 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
wow, that was so touching, i love how this went from serious, to silly, to playful, then romantic. fantastic. keep going! i can't wait for an update!
crap, i still have to do homework. darn.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I've been reading through all your lovely, lovely reviews - it means a lot that you took the time to review each chapter! But I hope you still managed to finish your homework? Thank you so much for the positive feedback :).
Date: September 28, 2009 08:39 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
Funny enough - I was just re-reading this story on the bus today on my way back from New York. Fabulous to see a new chapter! Great work!
Author's Response: I'm glad I can help make the bus ride that much shorter :). Thanks so much for the review.
Date: September 28, 2009 08:23 pm Title: Hidden Pictures
YAY! Kestrel is back!!
I don't suppose Pam will allow the cameras to follow her to the OB-GYN, huh? I suppose we should be happy we got the ultrasound.
I hope S6 inspires more from you. Nicely done!
Author's Response: It's lisahoo!! And who knows...all sorts of magical things can happen in the fanfic universe. Thanks for the review :).