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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2008 07:10 pm Title: Right key, wrong door

Eeeeeeeeep I really love this. I can always picture EVERYTHING you write happening.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Right key, wrong door

Wow!  I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before!!  Thank you so much for the honor!  Not to mention the free plug for my story…

Perfectly enjoyable fluff here!  I absolutely can see Jim and Pam spending the whole weekend together and then talking on the phone for his whole drive home. 

My favorite make-me-melt line in this chapter?

Remind me again why it’s still my apartment and not our apartment?

I dunno.  This one just got to me!

 



Author's Response: No problem, it's the least I could do. Plus I've been enjoying Cardiac Care so much.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 02:55 pm Title: Right key, wrong door

Wow!  I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before!!  Thank you so much for the honor!  Not to mention the free plug for my story…

Perfectly enjoyable fluff here!  I absolutely can see Jim and Pam spending the whole weekend together and then talking on the phone for his whole drive home. 

My favorite make-me-melt line in this chapter?

Remind me again why it’s still my apartment and not our apartment?

I dunno.  This one just got to me!

 

Reviewer: dentalhydraplostion Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 01:04 pm Title: Right key, wrong door

Hey you can't go wrong with some good ol' fluff!

Author's Response: Haha, I figured as much.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 06:56 am Title: Right key, wrong door

Oh, I like...so very much. 

“Still here, kiddo.” Jim answered, flicking on his turn signal towards the Scranton exit. Steady clicks filled the car, an oddly comforting song against the relative silence of the road.  Loved that image. 

“You’re the kind of girl I want to come home to.”  And most definitely loved that.

 



Author's Response: Ooh, thanks NanReg. I love seeing what you pick out as your favorite lines. You're awesome!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 06:36 am Title: Right key, wrong door

Fluff is nice.  Very nice.  A story you could grow beets with.

Author's Response: Hahah, you crack me up. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the review, lisahoo :D!

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