Date: August 17, 2008 10:16 pm Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
Great beginning! Very poignant and sad, but not without hope. You also have quite a gift for descriptive language. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for all of your comments! I truly appreciate it! It means a lot to me as a writer and I'm thrilled to hear that you are enjoying it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 10:50 am Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
I officially think this story is fantastic. I'm sad to know there's only one chapter left, but at the same time I'm so looking forward to reading it. Again I'll say, your writing is so emotional, I'm hooked on every sentence. Really, this is a beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow! That really means a lot to me!rnI'm so happy you like it. I'm going to be sad writing the last chapter, but all good things must come to an end. Anyway, thanks so, so, SO much!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2008 09:10 pm Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
I love the mood you've captured here, how they're both alone in a whirlwind. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you so, so much!