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Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2008 05:35 pm Title: A Touch of BOOM!

'He stood up straight in recognition. “Oi! This is Dunder Mifflin PA! That’s brilliant! And quite the coincidence. Well, has anyone noticed a minor explosion lately? Though,” he added, with a tug of his ear, “mind you, I never saw that bit.”'

Oi!  I squealed at this bit, great chapter ending. Seriously.  Perfect Doctor, tuggin on his ear and all.  Nice bit in the middle, too, with Pam and Jim's little moment.



Author's Response: This was totally my favorite chapter to write, ever. I loved everything coming together! It was so satisfying for me :) I'm glad it was for you too!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2008 10:36 am Title: A Touch of BOOM!

Yay the Doctor!  Rose's MacGuyver bomb is pretty hilarious and I love that Dwight is on to them.  Excellent JAM scene, too.  Boy, this one's really got it all!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I know this chapter was a bit jampacked but I'm trying to cover all my bases! I'm almost done with the next part, just at a bit of a standstill deciding how I want to wrap the story up. It looks like I've made a sequel inevitable! Thanks again for commenting.

Also, I just realized that jam-packed is a pun. it was (mostly) unintended. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2008 10:35 am Title: A Touch of BOOM!

Yay! It's Ten! Also, yes, Marjorie rocks.

Author's Response:

I had this creepy fixation on Marjorie for the longest time, because I totally love the idea that there is a whole new world of the Office that we can't see because those people won't sign release forms. Marjorie's life is on my to-do FIC list.

And yes Ten!! Now he just has to deal with Dwight, reunite with Rose, and solve a mystery. typical day.  

Reviewer: elephant57 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2008 07:52 am Title: A Touch of BOOM!

Oh my god, yay, yay, yay. Now I can't wait.

It was awesome. :D Update as soon as possible, please.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping to post the next part by Friday. There are two more chapters to go! (and the strong potential of a sequel...) :) Thanks for reviewing!

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