10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 05:00 pm Title: just breathe
OMG...you can't just leave us hanging there. I love the office, but there is no adventure and I love that you've added a little of that into this chapter. hehe...plus you know I love angsty Jim!! More soon please!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:52 am Title: just breathe
WOW, that was intense. I loved the use of flashbacks to tell us how they got to that point. I liked the way it flowed from flashback to present time. Best chapter I think! Post ch.5 soon please!
Author's Response: Man, you read fast...you reviewed a chapter a minute! Ha ha. Seriously though, thanks for all the nice reviews. I appreciate the kind comments.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:51 am Title: snow and the halpert family
Poor Pam, she just can't catch a break. Oh, well at least she has Jim to come to her rescue. Another great chapter in a fun story!
Author's Response: Yeah, Pam is having a hard time staying out of trouble. I'm glad you are enjoying the read! Thanks for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:50 am Title: mud and tears
Dunder-Mifflin football! Pam and Jim getting muddy! Protective Jim! Great, great, great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice review drewbers! I had the idea of Pam losing her ring and needed a way for it to happen. I like the idea of them all playing football. Glad to see someone enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:49 am Title: disastrous berries
Love the use of that line in this story! Very good idea.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed that line and story on the show, so I'm glad to see people liking the way I used it here.
7 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2008 06:42 pm Title: mud and tears
Great chapter - and this was such an awesome line: “Don’t say that. Don’t tell me that and expect me to let you go home to him.” Jim said as he pulled her hand away from the car door. "
And congrats on this being your first story here!!
Author's Response: Thanks kaystar! I wasn't sure how people would respond to protective Jim in this chapter, so I'm happy to hear you liked it. Thanks for reading!
Date: September 01, 2008 07:25 pm Title: just breathe
Well, I certainly love your story. It reminds me a bit of Twilight, Pam the magnet for danger and Jim trying to protect her. Can't wait for the last chapter!!
Author's Response: I haven't actually read Twilight yet, but I do plan to as I have heard so many people talking about it. I'm happy that you like the story and I really appreciate the kind reviews!
Date: September 01, 2008 07:19 pm Title: snow and the halpert family
I'm totally ready to drive into a snow bank if Jim Halpert comes to my rescue.
Author's Response: Ah, now why don't the women ever drive into snow banks and wait for me to rescue them?;) rnThanks for the review and please drive safely!
Date: September 01, 2008 07:05 pm Title: mud and tears
I love protective Jim!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this version of Jim. I know he is a calm, even tempered guy, but I'm sure he would protect Pam without question. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: September 01, 2008 06:55 pm Title: disastrous berries
This is an excellent twist on the expiration date!!! Very original!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear you like it!
Date: September 01, 2008 03:00 pm Title: disastrous berries
I really like this! nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Date: September 01, 2008 10:35 am Title: just breathe
I like the story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: September 01, 2008 08:13 am Title: disastrous berries
Man that last one was pretty intense. Jim is quite the guy knowing CPR. I'm looking forward to the last one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It was a hard chapter to write, but I think it came out the way I wanted. The last chapter should be up soon!
Date: September 01, 2008 07:19 am Title: just breathe
Geez Pam seems a little accident prone. I really love the last two chapters. Both are really good and great individual stories too. Can't wait for the last part.
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess she is pretty accident prone. I hope to get the last chapter up tonight or tomorrow! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: August 31, 2008 06:40 am Title: disastrous berries
That was an uber cute representation of that convo! How adorable! :) Can't wait to see what else you have come up with.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
Date: August 30, 2008 09:57 am Title: disastrous berries
Very cute, I'm looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you are enjoying it. I have most of the story done and I am just working on the editing, so not too long till I update some more.
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 09:30 am Title: disastrous berries
What an adorable story. I liked it very much. I think this is the first story that I've read that worked Jim's expired mixed berry line into it. You did it very well. I'm looking forward to the rest of your chapters. Thanks for the read!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad you like it. I loved how that was the moment Pam realized she liked Jim. I was trying to think of ways to put it in a story and it seemed to work its self well into this story.