10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:49 am Title: disastrous berries
Love the use of that line in this story! Very good idea.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really enjoyed that line and story on the show, so I'm glad to see people liking the way I used it here.
Date: September 01, 2008 06:55 pm Title: disastrous berries
This is an excellent twist on the expiration date!!! Very original!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear you like it!
Date: September 01, 2008 03:00 pm Title: disastrous berries
I really like this! nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Date: September 01, 2008 08:13 am Title: disastrous berries
Man that last one was pretty intense. Jim is quite the guy knowing CPR. I'm looking forward to the last one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It was a hard chapter to write, but I think it came out the way I wanted. The last chapter should be up soon!
Date: August 31, 2008 06:40 am Title: disastrous berries
That was an uber cute representation of that convo! How adorable! :) Can't wait to see what else you have come up with.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
Date: August 30, 2008 09:57 am Title: disastrous berries
Very cute, I'm looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad you are enjoying it. I have most of the story done and I am just working on the editing, so not too long till I update some more.
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 09:30 am Title: disastrous berries
What an adorable story. I liked it very much. I think this is the first story that I've read that worked Jim's expired mixed berry line into it. You did it very well. I'm looking forward to the rest of your chapters. Thanks for the read!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad you like it. I loved how that was the moment Pam realized she liked Jim. I was trying to think of ways to put it in a story and it seemed to work its self well into this story.