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Reviewer: drewbers Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2008 09:50 am Title: mud and tears

Dunder-Mifflin football! Pam and Jim getting muddy! Protective Jim! Great, great, great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice review drewbers! I had the idea of Pam losing her ring and needed a way for it to happen. I like the idea of them all playing football. Glad to see someone enjoyed it.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2008 06:42 pm Title: mud and tears

Great chapter - and this was such an awesome line:  “Don’t say that. Don’t tell me that and expect me to let you go home to him.” Jim said as he pulled her hand away from the car door. "

And congrats on this being your first story here!!



Author's Response: Thanks kaystar! I wasn't sure how people would respond to protective Jim in this chapter, so I'm happy to hear you liked it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2008 07:05 pm Title: mud and tears

I love protective Jim!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this version of Jim. I know he is a calm, even tempered guy, but I'm sure he would protect Pam without question. Thanks for reviewing!

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