10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2009 05:00 pm Title: just breathe
OMG...you can't just leave us hanging there. I love the office, but there is no adventure and I love that you've added a little of that into this chapter. hehe...plus you know I love angsty Jim!! More soon please!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2008 09:52 am Title: just breathe
WOW, that was intense. I loved the use of flashbacks to tell us how they got to that point. I liked the way it flowed from flashback to present time. Best chapter I think! Post ch.5 soon please!
Author's Response: Man, you read fast...you reviewed a chapter a minute! Ha ha. Seriously though, thanks for all the nice reviews. I appreciate the kind comments.
Date: September 01, 2008 07:25 pm Title: just breathe
Well, I certainly love your story. It reminds me a bit of Twilight, Pam the magnet for danger and Jim trying to protect her. Can't wait for the last chapter!!
Author's Response: I haven't actually read Twilight yet, but I do plan to as I have heard so many people talking about it. I'm happy that you like the story and I really appreciate the kind reviews!
Date: September 01, 2008 10:35 am Title: just breathe
I like the story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Date: September 01, 2008 07:19 am Title: just breathe
Geez Pam seems a little accident prone. I really love the last two chapters. Both are really good and great individual stories too. Can't wait for the last part.
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess she is pretty accident prone. I hope to get the last chapter up tonight or tomorrow! Thanks for reading and reviewing!