Date: February 12, 2019 01:47 pm Title: But I Know I'll Be Fine
Just realized I've never reviewed this even though I've read it multiple times and used it as inspiration for a story. Thanks for writing this; it's really...I was going to say heartwrenching, but let's just say emotionally powerful.
Date: March 05, 2011 07:05 pm Title: Sometimes It's Just Plain Hard
So I was talking so someone about this tonight and I remembered how much I loved this story while you were posting it. So sorry that this review is so late, but I loved every single moment of this story. Such a great job! I cried several times.
Date: August 25, 2010 06:58 pm Title: Sometimes It's Just Plain Hard
I must have read this story 10 times over the past 6 months. Even dreamt about parts of it. You are one of the reasons why I registered because I wanted to let you know how truly moved I was by your story. Thank you very much for this amazing ride.
Date: November 26, 2009 06:14 pm Title: No Life Ain't Always Beautiful, But it's a Beautiful Ride.
Great chapter. I love that we jumped ahead and see Jim still healthy and them with a family. I also like that he finally recognized he needs to be strong for them too. Poor Pam.
Date: November 25, 2009 08:35 pm Title: No Life Ain't Always Beautiful, But it's a Beautiful Ride.
oh my goodness, this is the first chapter i've read in about 3 weeks because of the malware content, and what a great chapter this was! at first i thought i had missed a chapter while i'd been away from the sight then i realized that you had jumped ahead a few years. although that had been a little confusing to me at first i think taking a leap through the story was a good thing - because this story is about the medical issues that jim had because of his heart defect, therefore having them go through that with their son luke (btw, great name, i love it!) was a great idea. i can't wait to see how you will continue, and sadly i think this will be drawing nearer to a conclusion. great chapter!
Date: November 08, 2009 11:14 pm Title: But I Know I'll Be Fine
lol. nice job with the scar - think for a little jim/pam chapter you could turn up the notch on the romance a little and write about how pam loves jim's scar - you know it symbolizes how he's still with her... all that good stuff. just an idea. anyway, great chapter, i liked the part at reception, jim mentioning being around people who were good at and enjoyed their jobs for once! very well thought out, can't wait to read more!
Date: November 08, 2009 11:09 pm Title: But Life Don't Work That Way
aww, now that i read this again, i don't think his speech was cheesy at all, i think he was just speaking from the bottom of his heart... a.k.a. romantic... and very well done! great job!
Date: September 18, 2009 10:54 pm Title: I Could See Your Pretty Face
I'm fairly new to Office fic, so I just read all 13 chapters. This story is very unique and in-character, and you do a fantastic job at conveying their emotions. I liked the way you showed how Jim's illness brought them together, and I loved that Pam was the first one there for him when he woke up in this most recent chapter. Lovely story. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
Date: August 04, 2009 09:34 pm Title: Sometimes It's Just Plain Hard
wow, i just read the entire thing in under an hour. this is truly amazing! i love the perspective, and jim and pam's dialog's are so realistic. great job writing this story, it's a pleasure to read. i don't mean to be intrusive, but have you or do you know somebody who's gone through this before. it's so accurate (not that i really know, though)! anyway, hope you update soon, this is a great story so far!
Author's Response: Aw thanks :) It's not intrusive at all. I'm actually going to start college this year as a pre-med student and I've volunteered at quite a few hospitals during high school. I also have my nursing assistant certification so I've worked pretty close with heart patients. I'm pretty much a medical dork :)
Date: August 04, 2009 06:49 pm Title: And I Wish For Just One Minute
YAY he got a heart!!!
I have been waiting for you to update this and I cannot wait to see what happens when he wakes up - HE BETTER WAKE UP :(
Author's Response: Goodness! Believe me, I love Jim and I think the poor guys been tortured enough ;)
Date: July 07, 2009 12:04 am Title: I Get Tired of Walking All These Lonely Miles
A lovely update. It's so great that they threw him a party, and I love how you described his desire to be at the party, but his exhaustion from his disease. The ending is so bittersweet. Can't wait to see what's next for Jim.