Date: August 05, 2009 10:26 pm Title: Round and Full
I've already said it, but I'll say it again....I'm just loving this story!! And I wanna take Jim home with me right now! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Ollie!
I hear the NBC store will be selling Attentive!Jims this fall, just in time for the Christmas season!
Date: August 05, 2009 02:46 pm Title: Round and Full
This chapter is just beautiful and adorable. Like everyone else, I just loved the "assistant to the pregnant person." But you did such a great job overall with Jim and with their relationship. I love the little details like his rubbing her belly while he wakes her, and his comments like "Just seeing you so round and full..." and “Surrounded by beautiful women? I think I can live with that.” But the last line, “I can't wait to meet you.” Well, that just killed me. I love your Jim.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I love him too. I'm not sure if we'll see some belly-rubbing Jim for realsies, but it's fun to imagine it here!
Thank you so much for your kind words :-)
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2009 08:17 am Title: Round and Full
Beeswax, this chap was gorgeous and so full of love. I'm feeling kinda choked up right now. Really.
Author's Response:
Awww. Thanks NanReg. I'm getting choked up thinking about you getting choked up.
I'm so glad you are enjoying this. More to come soon!
Date: August 05, 2009 07:50 am Title: Round and Full
Weeeelll, I tried to review this last night but a big storm came through and just as I hit submit and I lost connection. (dang satellite) Anyway, I don't see that it's here so I'm trying again.
This is so very sweet, and this is one of the best Halpert lines I've seen written in a good while: He held up his hand. “I've got Greenpeace on speed dial, so no worries.” Also loved the "assistant to the pregnant person."
I couldn't help but think as I was reading the prep: gosh Jim, you should have painted the nursery before now. What a slacker!
Looking forward to the next installment
Author's Response:
Ha ha. He's got 5 more weeks! If it took him years to tell Pam that he loved her, I can imagine him being a little behind on the nursery.
Thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing :)
Date: August 05, 2009 05:59 am Title: Round and Full
Your story is cute! I can't wait for more to come, keep up the great work!! =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll do my best to keep the cuteness coming!
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2009 05:09 am Title: Round and Full
Dude this is so amazing and awesome awesome awesome. I love how you have brought back Mark and Vanessa, I really enjoy stories where Mark visits, so yay!
And Pam being so blah about her pregnant body, but Jim finding her so amazing and hot - so perfect.
I hope you continue this because you is awesome... and how many times can I use that word in my review?
AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think it's awesome how many times you use the word awesome in your awesome review.
9 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2009 04:36 am Title: Round and Full
"Greenpeace on speedial" classic Jim. I love that he loves Pam even when she feels unattractive.
I'm glad Mark ended up happy, although come to think of it, he was really only mentioned in one episode. I guess I've been reading to much fanfic with him in it. (If Pam's feelings are what I think they are, we should have some fun action in the next chapter right?)
Author's Response: Hmmm. I don't know. Maybe she's just having an off night? Maybe she's just really tired? Maybe you'll have to wait and see ;-)
Date: August 05, 2009 12:30 am Title: Round and Full
This is a great story - I was very excited to see another chapter added! Assistant TO the Pregnant Person - how adorable is that! You've got a real gift for writing - I can just picture Jim (and John too) saying your dialogue.....very real - Thanks for sharing your talents.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! I try to hear each character's voice as I'm writing and listening to Jim offering to run me a bath or tell me that he's in love with me comes very easily to me for some reason ;)
Date: August 04, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Round and Full
love it. can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm just about to work on chapter 3, so more soon.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 06:15 pm Title: Round and Full
Yeah, so Beeswax? You've officially melted me. Congratulations :) haha Seriously: This is just heaven to read. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Huh. I didn't know that I had the power to melt people. I think I will use this power for good and not evil ;-)
Thanks so much for your warm and fuzzy review. Look for chapter 3 (hopefully) soon!
Date: August 04, 2009 05:59 pm Title: Round and Full
As I said before - I love this chapter oh so very much. You've got such a great tone for them and this chapter just captures it perfectly.
And I want *that* Jim :) ::sigh::
Job well done my friend. Cannot wait to see where else you take our Jam!
Author's Response:
Yes, that Jim is pretty dreamy. To be honest, Mr. Bees was very attentive when I was pregnant. He often ran me baths and listened to my hormonal freak outs. God bless him.
Thanks again for your super beta powers! Oh, and I hope you dream of Attentive!Jim tonight ;-)
Date: August 04, 2009 05:55 pm Title: Round and Full
This is awesome! I'm so glad you are continuing with it in so much detail! The line, "I can't wait to meet you," had me gushing! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I wrote that last line around 1am this morning, so I'm glad it isn't just the musings of a sleep-deprived crazy person!
Thanks so much, Dedeen.
Date: August 04, 2009 05:44 pm Title: Round and Full
Awww. That was so sweet. Yes, I believe that Jim would (will) be THAT perfect. Tending to Pam's every need and lovingly so.
This story is making me even more excited for Season 6 to begin. Only 44 days, 00 hrs, 16 mins, 05 secs! ;-)
Anxiously awaiting Chapter 3!
Author's Response:
Thanks Abigail :-) It's so fun writing Jim because I can make him do whatever I want...with Pam.
Some fun things will be happening in chapter 3, so stay tuned!
Date: August 04, 2009 05:38 pm Title: Round and Full
Have you ever read a story that was just too perfect for words? And then you sit there for a minute reeling at how amazing it was? I just got that feeling reading this, way to go. Looking forward to more of this high-quality perfection!
Author's Response:
Wow. You just made my heart soar with the eagle's nest with your review. What an amazing compliment. Thank you so much, pmh!
I guess I'd better get working on chapter 3!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 05:08 pm Title: Round and Full
Awww. This chapter was sweet, too. It actually took me a few minutes to remember Mark was, but I'm glad you brought him back.
I love that Jim is the assistant to the pregnant person.
I'm glad you're giving them a little girl. If that becomes canon, she'll be a Daddy's Girl for sure.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping that Mark makes a return for the wedding this year. I like the idea of Jim having friends outside of the office.
I also love the idea of Jim having a little girl. ::swoon::
Thanks for your review and stay tuned, there are some exciting things in store for the Halperts in the next few chapters ;-)