Date: September 25, 2009 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gosh this is a great story. It's so dark. I had tears rolling down my cheeks the whole time
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry about the tears though...I got a little misty eyed while writing certain parts though...hehe.
Date: September 24, 2009 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay! i'm looking forward to it!
Date: September 13, 2009 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't say enough how much I love this story (although I must admit that I'm a sucker for anything involving Holly or the Phils being World Champions)....the whole AU thing while staying true the characters is fantastic...keep up the good work...Please!
Author's Response: Holly is seriously the best thing to happen to the office since WWII! And although I'm sad that she's only been in a handful of episodes, in a way, it's easier to write her. Thank you for the review, and I hope you continue reading this fic!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2009 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
"And then we made out."
Love that line! I can definitely see Jim saying that. Poor Pam though!
Author's Response: Indeed, poor Pam. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: September 13, 2009 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
that took me a minute to process, but no hard feelings!
take your time, i'll be waiting for more of this 'a-w-e-s-o-m-e, awesome, awesome is what we (you) are' story!
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!! I just hope this story doesn't disappoint!
Date: September 12, 2009 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! that was really good. i can understand why you might have been hesitant to post this, i mean, it's really different from what most of MTT's content is usually about. nonetheless, it was delightful to read, i like the snippets from 'the real office' and what you came up with using your creative license. also, very well done. anyway, i'll read chapter 2 now - and make sure to keep posting. i love reading something different, yet vaguely familiar every once in a while. it's daring, and kind of like trying something new each day.
great job beermefive!
Author's Response: Yeah...I was actually nervous about posting this story! But I'm really glad you like it so far! Thank you for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohh I like reading stories that haven't been done before. Very interesting premise if I must say. Can't wait to see what you have planned :) Poor Jim, does he want to die so he can go live with Pam in the clouds :(
Author's Response: Thank you! As for Jim...he doesn't want to die. That's a hint as to what's coming...I hope you keep reading! And thank you so much!
Date: September 12, 2009 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really interesting and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Although the thought of a dying and widowed Jim Halpert is a little hard to handle...it's really intriguing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! The premise is pretty depressing right now, but I promise, not all chapters will be depressing! Thanks for reading!