9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2009 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO at the "then we made out," very Jim.
Looking forward to seeing how this ends - sad Pam ds dead lol.
Author's Response: I think "then we made out" would have made a better title for this fic...lol. Thank you for the review! And I won't drag this story out. I'm only planning about seven chapters or so, so you'll find out how it ends soon...I just wish this business trip was over with so I could write in peace...lol. But thanks again for reviewing!
Date: September 12, 2009 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Intrigued... I don't like that Pam's dead, but the flashbacks are nice.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry I killed off Pam...
Date: September 12, 2009 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow, this was even better! i love how you've invented jim's whole world from scratch, very impressive! okay, i need to clean up my house, but keep writing, and i promise to review!
Author's Response: I wish I could update soon. I have a bunch of ideas in my head, but unfortunately I'm on a trip. But hopefully I'll update within this week! Thanks for the review, pamelamorganhalpert! PS sorry I killed you off in this story. :P
9 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooo, this is definitely an intriguing AU. Really liking it, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, I probably won't be able to update this for awhile...I'm on a trip at the moment.
8 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is really interesting, I just...I don't think I'm strong enough for stories this sad. haha. Is Pam the reason Jim doesn't want an operation? Oh...yeah...this story is going to make me cry.
Author's Response: Aw...don't be sad! I promise you that this story will end on a positive note! And as for Jim not getting the operation...well, I left a bunch of hints in the second chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really hope this story doesn't make you cry though...
10 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 08:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey loving this new WIP. I love the way you've started it so far, there aren't enough fics in my opinion with Holly as one of the main characters, hopefully there'll be plenty of her here. Part of me is hoping for a Jim/Holly pairing too!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I think you'll be disappointed to find out that I have no plans for a Jim/Holly pairing...but I hope you keep reading! Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: September 12, 2009 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm rather enjoying this. I love the Jim/Holly banter--it's very realistic and nice. The second use of the line "and then we made out" made me laugh out loud. And you pretty much listed every single one of my favorite bands, so that has won me over even more. Update soon please!
Author's Response: I really wish I could, but I'm actually on a trip all this week. I don't have much time to write, but I'll try to get a chapter up by this Friday...Thank you so much for reading!