Date: February 21, 2010 02:41 pm Title: Prayers That Are Heard
Pam's very funny in her innocence about what heaven is like and how she couldn't really stand it because of unfinished business on Earth.
I love the fact that Ellie can still communicate with her mom. It makes me sad though how Jim is still in pain. Although that last part about him feeling Pam's kiss?? LOVE it!
Please continue soon!
Date: February 21, 2010 12:19 am Title: Prayers That Are Heard
Oh my god, he felt the kiss! That is so cool! I can't wait for more, this is so interesting (albeit, occasionally frustrating...) but awesome, too. Sorry - I abuse the word awesome too much here at MTT (just because I'm trying to channel my inner cheerleading Katy!). Great job, and please get chapter 3 back up so I can reread it! This story is so fresh and creative, I cannot get over how delighted I am to read something that has never been written about before. Long live new ideas!
Date: January 17, 2010 09:31 pm Title: Another Door
I'm really enjoying this. I love how different this is. Love the idea (still) of Ellie seeing Pam, but Jim being so oblivious to it all. I'd love to know if Jim will start sensing Pam.
Your writing is also improving - not that it needed to, but you know :)
Date: January 09, 2010 10:48 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Wow, another beautiful chapter! This was so sad, yet again and for lack of a better word. I was at a funeral today, too, but not at the burial - but really, what a coincidence that I would be reading a story about funerals today! I'm just fortunate that my godfather died of cancer at 75 versus Pam dying at probably 30 from childbirth. What a difference. Anyway, this is a wonderful story, and I can't wait to see how you continue. I love all the flashbacks - keep them up!
Date: January 09, 2010 10:42 pm Title: Lace Curtains in Heaven
Oh my god, that's so sad! I really like this story though, and the idea is wonderful. It's so beautifully written, and heartbreaking all at once. What a combination! For some reason I had originally thought this was about ANGELA wearing Keds, but I'm quite wrong! I'll keep reading right now!
Date: January 08, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Very original, I like it a lot. I can't wait to see Pam watching Jim... and for Ellie to continue seeing Pam... ohh and then Jim maybe realising she's there with him aw!!!
My only criticism, is the exchange between Michael and Jim, I just couldn't see it.
Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter very much and I look forward to reading more :)
Date: January 08, 2010 09:35 am Title: Paintings Among Gravestones
Hi! So, this has to be the first story that I've read that deals with character death that doesn't make me cry my eyes out and stop reading, so thank you. I did get misty eyed, but I want to continue reading this. You're a great writer, and thanks again for creating a story about this topic that I can get through with just misty eyes. I hope you update soon, can't wait to see the rest of this.
Date: January 03, 2010 09:18 pm Title: Lace Curtains in Heaven
I read this hoping it would end up being a near death experience and she goes back in her body. LOL I just hate death stories---not that this isn't absolutely lovely, because it is! I'm just an emotional wuss. haha. But still curious to see what happens next!