Reviews For Loose Ends
Reviewer: more_awake Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Cathy
Date: July 02, 2013 05:26 pm Title: Cathy
Psh, Cathy, you SHOULD be sorry! haha
I really liked this, but I have to say that I loved the descriptions of Jim interacting with the kids the most. A giggling Philip and a twirling Cece couldn't get any more adorable. And this part summed everything up perfectly: “I’m not mad at you. Not anymore. But just know that you wanted to break that,” she says gesturing towards Jim, who is loading two giggling kids into the grocery cart.
Thank you for this :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Any chance I get to write a Jim with the kids I take it! I love reading and writing Halpert family togetherness! I'm so happy you liked it!