Reviews For A Little Courage
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Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2020 04:54 pm Title: Prologue: “The Alliance”

Great start! I love these AU where they get together earlier. I also like that you included both POVs. I’m looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 25, 2020 03:09 am Title: Prologue: “The Alliance”

This was sweet, although a little melancholy. I feel for Jim, seemingly trapped in a never-ending cycle of loving Pam but not being able to tell her. Pam too seems trapped. I’m really curious to see how this plays out, particularly the conversation with Jim’s sister you mention in the summary.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2020 07:55 pm Title: Prologue: “The Alliance”

Nice setup, interested in when the thing you mention in the description will happen. I don't envy you trying to write both in first person, but it's an interesting approach. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback.  There will probably be one more prologue chapter and then the spark that starts the story.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2020 06:48 pm Title: Prologue: “The Alliance”

Very interesting set up here. Pam and Roy already on shaky ground seems telling. I liked that you gave us their actual argument. A lot of times it seems like an author will just mention that Pam and Roy fight but we don't actually get the dialogue. I like that here we do. I think it gives a lot more insight to them as characters. I also really like that Pam doesn't back down from Roy. Nice way to show she does have some steel in her spine.

Jim is just as love-lorn as ever. Great internal thoughts for him. His need to be with her yet he feels he has to tread so carefully so as not to rock the boat. You pulled that off really well I think.

Really looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the wonderful thoughts on my story.

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