Reviews For Not a Bar Fight
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Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, harsh.  I like.

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2006 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is the perfect reason why Pam didn't call Jim! I love it. And I like Pam's sister too. Is there more to this? Because I'd really like to see more.

cheers.

--Lex 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 19, 2006 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this and I'd love to see you write more -  to see what happens now that Jim knows what Mark said when Mark got the phone call about the cancelled wedding.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2006 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was an interesting premise. I like the explanation you gave for the reason Pam probably never contacted Jim...although I suspect Mark was just venting and it nothing at all to do with Jim..

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2006 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Liking this so far !  I love that you've created a no-nonsense younger sister for Pam.

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 18, 2006 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1

So, Jim has all this resentment, and now he gets a glimpse into why Pam never contacted him?  That would be a helluva slap in the face for him, I'm sure.  Nicely done!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting take on how Jim did not find out.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Jim better speak up! I'm confused - are we supposed to think that Mark thought Pam was a bitch or that Jim really said it or did Pam just say it to get a rise out of Jim here? Pam's anger works for me though and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1

ouch - good start.  Looking forward to chapter 2

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