Date: November 09, 2023 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the bittersweet nature of this story. The only thing that held back the prose was the variation between tenses. I think you meant to use the present, but kept using past forms instead of the present and future forms. Anyhow, it did not prevent me from enjoying the story!
Date: January 29, 2018 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hard to believe this has only one review! Especially since it was written in 2007? Great story. Pam's gears are turning in a very believable way. This story has a premise of Pam being completely clueless prior to Michael spilling the beans and really digesting it as new. I would imagine she'd be in a bit more of a state of panic, due to her own unacknowledged feelings. The thought of ANY conversation at that particular ripe moment is extremely intriguing!
Date: January 02, 2007 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah! It kind of kills me how in denial she is. Or even how close she is to admitting the truth, but then still thinking it doesn't matter because Roy gives her stability. And her question in the elevator is such a tease, but was very enjoyable to read.