8 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Crying
Okay, the image of Toby kneeling in front of her? Heartbreaking. This one was hard to read - the whole suspecting that Toby knows because Jim and Karen had to register is such a horrid thing to consider. :o) Another great chapter - on to the next scenario!
Author's Response: Isn't that horrible to think of? I wish that Toby had actually found her, because I wish I could get a screencap of something...I entirely made up in my own head. So sad.
Date: January 08, 2007 04:20 pm Title: Crying
Sweet, sweet Toby. I love Pam asking if she can redact her crying spell.
Author's Response: Thank You! I have such a soft spot for Toby.
Date: January 08, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Crying
I liked the little burst of humour at the end of this very sad chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you...I couldn't leave the whole thing depressing. :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Crying
Another wonderful chapter. You really have Toby's mannerisms down.
Author's Response: Thank you...I had such a hard time writing his chaper, so it means a lot that you like it!
Date: January 08, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Crying
Sweet Toby.
Author's Response: Thank you!