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Reviewer: crackers4jenn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 09:45 pm Title: Tracks of My Tears

“Where did they get in their fight? Was it in the warehouse, because I didn’t see anything. Oh! Was it in front of your desk, and you were like, sitting there, and they both kept looking at you. With love! And then they would pull some hair. Or, no, boys don’t pull hair. Maybe…”

All 5 of these snippets were lovely, in their own ways, but I laughed out loud at that Kelly part. Too funny.

Good stuff all around, though I'm particular to the Toby one. There's just something about Pam/Toby that brings out the crazy 'shipper in me.

Author's Response: Thank You! :) I get very 'shippery about Pam and Toby as well.  And it means a lot that you liked that one - it was a bugger to write. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Tracks of My Tears

I loved seeing the softer side of Angela - and I liked her understanding of the situation - “I know that love can be…unforgiving sometimes.”

Author's Response: Thank you!  Too bad on the show, we never get to see her softer side.  Although I bet Dwigt sees it sometimes. ;)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 06:13 pm Title: Tracks of My Tears

Oh wow - love the way you wrote Angela here; I can absolutely envision her this way.  And that final line of hers?  Excellent - spot on.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Angela was way too much fun to write.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Tracks of My Tears

So Angela

Author's Response: Thank you!

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