Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?
Please continue this story. It was so in character and I loved Jim's prank on Dwight. Not to mention the JAM!
Author's Response: I love DWIM interaction too. I'm so glad that I added that little bit in there....it just seemed appropriate for the moment. If you ever write a story and you want to cut some tension....just add a little Dwight/Jim to the mix, it gets the audience going! Ha. Thanks for reading!
I really liked your story. You seem to have a good handle on Jim's character. I liked how it was more realistic than some of the other JAM fics where everything turns out so perectly. i would love to read anything else you might write!
Author's Response: strfsh, you made my day. I just may try again sometime, but next time I would spend more time revising and I'd get a beta, too. Thanks so much for the encouragement.
He ate Frosted Cheerios and watched ESPN highlights in the living room while she sipped her tea silently in the kitchen, contemplating the ways she could tell him she was leaving.
A Pam POV fic, with vague spoilers through season 2, I suppose.
I loved this chapter! Please write more!
Author's Response: I'll get on that! Thanks :)
I absolutely love it. I liked how you made Pam all awkward around Mark. I think that is true to her character and it added something to the story. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: I'll try to, thanks!
A glimpse into the instant messaging history of Jim and Pam. Written with the intention of expanding on what we see on the show, as well as to tie up some loose ends. There will be a conversation for each episode through Season 3.
Definitely feel the same way about Office Olympics--never paid much attention to it before The Job came along. Loving your story so far. You have characterization nailed.
Hey, you had 69 reviews before I reviewed. *giggle*
50 I loved this story and I'm so glad you are writing a sequel to it! Keep up the good work and keep updating! (please.)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, strfsh - more should be coming in a few days...
Real life may not come complete with happy endings, but Jim and Pam find a happily right now.
That was cute and very clever. I really enjoyed it.
"At 11:59, everyone shuffled quickly to their special someone."
"The great 08" hahaha. Great way to end the story. I agree with lisahoo; I could totally see that happening just like your story!
Watching the documentary as a favor for Ryan, Toby learned that almost everyone at Dunder Mifflin could probably sue Michael for something and win big. And he learned a few other very important lessons as well.I really liked your story. I loved how you took all those small moments from the series and focused on how Toby would react to them. Very well-written as well. I especially liked the ending; it's about time Toby gets a girl! Great job!
Ok, I really hated how they weren't together anymore, but I absolutely loved your story. I loved seeing how Pam's character grew through her experiences on the show. And I loved how you took things from the real world (what Jenna said in the interview) and things from the Office world (talking head). I liked the intersection of those two worlds. Your story was really well written and unique with excellent characterization. Great job.
Author's Response: ...i've noticed twice so far people using the word 'hate' in a review. this is a new one for me :) but i jest. i get what you mean. it's difficult to really think about it. thank you so much for the review! i'm all about blending the real and the fictional...