Penname: larrymcg Real name: Larry McGillicuddy
Member Since: May 28, 2007

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Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's Valentine's Day 2008....

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1225 Read Count: 5455 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: What a Day

Excellent job. Loved the final line.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim and Pam’s four First Kisses…and first Last Kiss.  Spoilers through "The Job," unspoiled spec thereafter.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 313 Read Count: 3603 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 04, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: like a river finally reaching the ocean

Outstanding job. Made me cry ... not that I'd admit it to anyone.

Author's Response: Oh, larrymcg! Your secret is safe with me. I'm sorry about the tears, but very, very appreciative of the emotion. Thank you for the nice comment on TWoP, too!

Summary: In the week following their first date, Jim's true colors start reappearing....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10089 Read Count: 38121 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: June 04, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Tuesday

Awww, this is really sweet. I love this whole story. Keep it up!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Thursday

I really love this story. You managed to make it funny and sexy. Great job!

Summary: Jim thinks about how much things have changed in the last year. So fluffy I can't even talk about it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1197 Read Count: 2698 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2007 Updated: June 05, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful story. You did a great job of getting inside Jim's head.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Summary:

The tale of Gentle Pamela and Hansome James aboard the pirate ship Dunder Mifflinia. May contain some bodice ripping and lots of pillaging.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7769 Read Count: 7754 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2007 Updated: June 25, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. I really loved this. Mad Meredith? LOL!

Looking forward to more chapters. Great job.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it! I plan on having many more adventures of Mad Meredith in the story. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great 2nd Chapter. You've got me hooked!



Author's Response:

How nice are you! I would act modest, but let's be honest, I am absolutely thrilled you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yay, great stuff. This is one of my favorite ongoing stories. Loved the stuff with Creedles.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Larry! It means a lot coming from such an established fic writer as yourself! :)

Summary:

Five Little Reminders That Simply Had To Go.


Karen obviously doesn't listen to The Wreckers, or else she would know to "Leave The Pieces" when you go.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1744 Read Count: 2855 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2007 Updated: June 06, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: She's Expunge-Worthy

Very funny stuff here. Definitely fits with Pam's new S3 attitude.

Summary: "I'm sorry. I've been dying to do that all night," he says, but he doesn't look sorry at all.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306 Read Count: 2870 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2007 Updated: June 06, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Like the Movies

Very romantic. Good job!

Summary: Pam changes outfits- and herself. Speculative post-The Job.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10447 Read Count: 62280 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: March 15, 2017
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: I choose you


This is a beautiful story. Heartbreaking and fulfilling at the same time. Excellent job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The rest of the series has been almost unrelentingly fluffy- I thought we needed to inject some reality.

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Ladies Love Cool James.  
Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3317 Read Count: 17112 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: June 07, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Pam, 2007-

Great conclusion. This was a terrific story.

Author's Response: Thanks!    I hope we get to see Jim actually go after a relationship wholeheartedly next season...it would be an interesting change of pace....

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Karen, 2006-2007

Spot on characterization of Karen. Great job.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Stephanie, 2000

Wow, who doesn't hate Stephanie?

BTW, the way you wrote her reminds me of Carla Gallo in 40 Yr Old Virgin



Author's Response:

Wow, who doesn't hate Stephanie?

 

Ah, a question that has yet to be answered.   She is a bit of a bitch, isn't she? 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 8
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Katy, 2005-2006

Wow. More than I ever needed to know about Katy.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kirsten, 1996-1999

Nice start. Kirsten sucks.

Summary:

Angela notices something is different about Pam and talks to her about it.  Post the Job

She strolled (somewhat) casually over to Pam’s desk as she exited the interview and asked her about her smile.


Categories: Present
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 666 Read Count: 2824 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: June 07, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam Pong

Did you intentionally make this Angela-centric story 666 words? If so, that was brilliant.

Author's Response: Ah I didn't think anyone else would notice!  I didn't purposefully but it came out that way and I giggled so I left it! I am so surprised another person caught it! Hee! Thanks for reading! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryA few people run into Jim Halpert at the Super Walmart.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20158 Read Count: 36090 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: By the DVD section, past the Playstation/Xbox Display...


Heh. I have a feeling that Jim and Pam will stop at the first "compromising position". Actually I hope he sees them and recognizes the mistake before she looks at them, lest not both parents be scarred for life.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: July 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chips, Dips, Nachos, and Bastards...

I hate Todd Packer, too. There's nary a redeeming facet about him. Great to see him get what he had coming. 

This was a great story. Wish it wasn't the last chapter, though. I'd love to read more.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Plastic cups, plates, forks, spoons...and oh dear, knives....

That was really nice. I love your characterization of Karen. Good job!

Summary: Five near drabbles about times when Pam and Jim act like kids… aka see the title of the story.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 967 Read Count: 2374 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2007 Updated: June 09, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 9
Date: June 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Five Times Jim And Pam Acted Like Kids

Very cute story. Good job!


Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed

Summary: You know, this would not happen if we had a union. A season two a/u.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Pam/Roy, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11941 Read Count: 33082 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2007 Updated: June 20, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Best chapter yet. This is a terrific story. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10
Date: June 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay! I loved this. Can't wait to see how you finish it up!

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I really love where this is headed. Great job!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam think they are keeping a secret.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4754 Read Count: 28956 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2007 Updated: June 14, 2007
Reviewer: larrymcg Signed
Date: June 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kelly

Hilarious! Great job with Kelly.