Penname: dmscranton Real name: Rebeka
Member Since: May 30, 2007

Bio:

I love writing the odd little fics, here and there. I generally avoid the average stuff and often write more emotional pieces.

Feel free to contact me if you need a beta. I'm better with shorter fics, just because apparently I have a short attention span, but I will be more than happy to be your 2nd (or 3rd) set of eyes.


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Reviews by dmscranton
Summary:

The little things were threatening to drive him insane.... a few 55-word chapters on learning to live with the one you love.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 285 Read Count: 14186 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2007 Updated: July 14, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 8
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: At the end of the day...

Aw! I knew he'd come around. That's our boy!

Excellent. 



Author's Response: Yeah, deep down our boy's pretty sensible.  And he's probably aware of how imperfect he is as well.  Thanks for reading, dmscranton!

Summary: Imagine if Michael Scott was President of the United States. Imagine if Leo McGarry was his Chief of Staff. Imagine if you had to do a trademark Sorkin/Schlamme walking and talking scene with Kelly Kapoor. Well, here it is, a West Wing/Office crossover. This is all Azlin's fault.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover
Characters: Dwight/Angela, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael/Jan, Other, Ryan, Toby
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5387 Read Count: 3710 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2007 Updated: July 23, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: That's What She Said

Priceless. For some reason I could actually see this all happening, you just wrote it out so well. Incredible!


Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Summary: With every break-up comes the awkward ritual of returning of each other's things. Here's a glimpse into those awkward moments.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3111 Read Count: 18726 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2007 Updated: July 29, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 9
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: A Favor

Awww, so good, just so good!

And actually I thought of Mose's fic when I read the post-it's...that's really weird. :) 

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 8
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Boxers

I adored this. It's hard to explain why I would like them being broken up when I know they need to be together, but you're doing a wonderful job of creating a world that seems so realistic. It's so Jim, it's so Pam, it's so them even when they're hurting and not together.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you!  That really means a lot!  Thanks so much for reading :)

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 9
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: A Toothbrush

ignoring the bad taste settling in his mouth

Too bad he gave her her toothbrush back ;-)

It was really good, again, of course. I'm craving more, I need more, it's my drug to calm the JAMititis.  

Summary: The documentary about life in Dunder Mifflin Scranton is on the air and fast approaching the second season series finale. The Powers That Be (TPTB) have a great idea to boost the ratings (and hopefully paper sales).
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15924 Read Count: 21098 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2007 Updated: September 05, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 8
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Let's Get It On

It's adorable Mox I love this! I need to go and thank Swedge for that extra push...

Author's Response: hehe - I haven't heard from swedge on whether this has met his expectations, so he might not want to be reminded of his crime against humanity... ;-)  Thanks for reading!!

Hard Kandy by larrymcg Rated: M [Reviews - 12] 2
Summary:

One of Andy's favorite phrases takes on a whole new meaning.

Mose thinks his was "so wrong". He's a wuss.


Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Kelly
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: 55: The Kandy Edition
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1191 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Unfaithful! Love that movie, phew...it's getting warm in here.

A little blunt, but...no um I didn't mean, no uh... 

Once. Again. by pamcasso Rated: K [Reviews - 4] 3
Summary: It's still Casino Night
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50 Read Count: 1403 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2007 Updated: August 12, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 9
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww! How come this isn't how it really happened? I think I'm going to cry...*sniff*

Excellent job, excellent I tell you! 



Author's Response: I know, it soooooooooo should have gone down this way, or better! Thanks a lot for the nice review!

And so it is... by Azlin Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 4
Summary: What if there was no Fancy New Beesly? A return to The Merger, complete with all the angsty-Jam trimmings.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1449 Read Count: 3468 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2007 Updated: August 22, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 9
Date: August 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Just like you said it would be

I loved this azlin, you're an extraordinary writer and I love the angst. This would've been a perfect alternative to S3 and you did a great job of showing how vulnerable Pam truly is. Kudos and Karma all around!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow, what a nice review! I'm flattered that you liked it that much, so kudos and karma right back at ya! This is the part where I say that since it's karma what goes around comes around and then refer you to a Justin Timberlake song with the exact same message. Only I don't want to get that song stuck in both our heads. Um... too late.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Written for both the Pam's Pregnancy and 55 Word challenges. Takes place before The Job.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen, Kelly
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5083 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok this cracked me up! So great, you're wonderful at writing the 55 word challenges, giving just enough detail to fill in what's necessary.

Summary: A different take on the first date and its aftermath

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1457 Read Count: 3142 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it! So heartbreaking and realistic, too bad this was sitting in your documents for so long, but glad it's up now!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks Ms. D :)  Glad you liked it!

Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 66241 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Outlook

Wow Roy and Darryl still friends after all this time. That's pretty amazing.

Good job again Larry. This whole thing is so sad but you're doing a great job of showcasing each character in the perfect light. Very believable.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like these.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: November 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: Memories

Aw Larry you're on a role this week. A yogurt lid, really? So sweet.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: November 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Separation

Aw! You're killing me! Stranger!? Stranger? I think I might cry. :(

It was still good, however terribly depressing. :) 



Author's Response: Awww, I'm sorry, but at least they had a long life together!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: November 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Boredom

Aw. How depressing. Getting old sucks. :(


Author's Response:

Yeah it does :(



Author's Response:

Yeah it does :(

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Success

...and he didn't either. ;)

Good job! Is it morbid I like seeing all of them die? 



Author's Response:

We all knew you were twisted, DM!

 Just kidding! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Smile

Aw so touching. I can see sad depressed lonely Toby doing hard drugs, is that weird?


Author's Response: Not at all! He got plenty of practice in Amsterdam.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Calm

Finally! Updates...ok to the chapter.

I love that Jan stayed with Michael and she was happy. That's so sweet and seems very possible with how S4 is going.



Author's Response:

Thanks, DM! You've been so supportive of this story. I'm glad you liked this chapter.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Rerun

Oh my god. This was perfect! Wow, excellent job. I had to read it twice, and then I went "DUH!".

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed 10
Date: September 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Regret

OMG firthgal will adore you. How very poetic, Larry. I love every single one of these.

Author's Response: Poetic? Wow! Thanks again, DM!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Positive

"...he was just Bob"

He didn't need Vance Refrigeration to make him who he was, Phyllis did that for him. So adorable. 



Author's Response: Thanks, DM! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: DUI

Wow how very Sam Kinison-esque.

Excellent job, again Larry. I like to see how the Schrutes and Halperts are doing these days. 



Author's Response: Thanks, DM! Don't little Schrutes sound so scary? Yikes!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Morning

I loved the ending of that show, I had it on my DVR for months and would watch it over and over still bringing tears to my eyes. I am so glad you're writing this. You are an excellent writer and I know you will do this whole collection proud.

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much. If I even approach your writing skill, then I'll be happy.

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Missing

Ok this was perfect because I can completely believe this. Creed just disappears and no one knows it for a year, crazy spot on! Excellent job again.


Author's Response: Thanks, DM!

Reviewer: dmscranton Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Vacation

Aww! Angela Schrute! Perfect.