Future fic, but with some imagined back-story for Jim as well.
10 *sighs in contentment* Oh, that's just lovely--yay for Sara!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the great reviews!
8 Interesting idea...can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Stay tuned....
8 Awww...so sweet. And yes, Jim would make an AMAZING dad.
Author's Response: Thanks! He's so good at taking care of Pam and she's not even his...
10 I love the complete silence between them, when so much is being said. Very true to the show, and Reason #732 Why Jim Is Better.
Jim IS better! That cannot be stressed enough. Thanks, Lissa_Maylee! ;)
This story is good, but you need to proofread it. The shifts in POV are especially jarring.
Author's Response: omg! thank you! i was half asleep i didn't even notice i did that haha thanks for the heads up and i'm glad you liked it
10 Great job--I don't really know how to feel! Jim and Pam are so adorable and fluffy, and you succeeded in making me feel bad for Roy, especially here: Roy felt a wry triumph. At least he knew her that well.
I love the 4am phone call to Australia, and I love that Jim brings her to Chili's for a proposal!
Jim and Pam are a couple. He asks a question. She contemplates.9 Tee hee. Such sweet Jam fluff! I love it.
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8 Very nice. I like this, even if it means no confession.
Response to the Overheard challenge. A couple has an important conversation at the bank. 10 That. Rules. I so did not see that coming, but it's perfect! Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
10 Oooh, I like. Darryl is way cool, and there's not enough fic about him. He would make a rockin' fairy godfather.
Someone has to take up the slack...9 Super cute! I love Phyllis, and I can see her missing Jim, too.
Author's Response:
Wouldn't you miss that prank-y boy?
Thanks!
Someone is tired of being sneaky and it's not who you think.
7 Cute!
Author's Response: Thanks
The ten minutes between Jim's confession to Pam and the kiss in "Casino Night", plus the moments immediately after the kiss.
9 Awww....so sweet! Wouldn't it be nice...
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your review!
"Pam would have laughed if it hadn't been so funny." The weekend after Casino Night.
9 *cries*
Seriously, though, this probably could happen. I really hope it doesn't, but it could. Great job with the angst and breaking my heart!
10 The image of them holding hands in bed like that is beautiful and sad. It's hopeful as well, I think. *crosses fingers*
Hopeful - yes. But there's still a lot of pain to sort through.
9 The grossest mommy and daddy ever! lol
Thanks for the fluff to balance out the angst.
9 Oh, dear. I'm very intrigued. I hope she's not really having an affair!
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see...
10 I'm so glad Pam woke up in time! She's got to be very good at rationalizing her own behavior, so I can see this happening slowly. Yay for reunions!
Author's Response: You're so right about Pam! Although I allowed her to have a good excuse for her behavior this time. On the show? Not so much...
Sometimes you double check to see if you can hear a dial tone.
Then again...sometimes you might be too distracted to bother. ;)
10 Tee hee. I would totally listen, too. Yay, Mrs. Beesly!
I really hope the conversation did go something like this...
A hot night and a moonlit lake. That should do it. Oh, and a prank on Dwight.
10 The imagery was beautiful, and the makeout session was hot!
I'd love a second chapter, with Dwight's reaction, and some sort of aftermath to the making-out...?
10 A breast? Pam's getting daring!
Loved the diving knife and the replicator comment--so Dwight!
This is a continuation of The Secret. Maybe he thought she was pretty enough. Maybe he liked that she was plain. Maybe he loved her.9 Oooh...this makes the skiing comment in The Carpet much sadder. I really like the way this could fit in perfectly with the show.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
10 Yay! I love this--wouldn't it be lovely if that happened? I feel like Jim would try one last time, too, because he really is that desperate.
Author's Response: I think he would try one last time, because he's really that in love with her. And I kind of think he would feel like he owes it to Pam too. "You gotta take a chance on something sometime, Pam." Thanks for reading!
Some musings from Pam, post-angst. Just for fun.10 So sweet! I think I might have a new cavity. :-P
This image: Later, when Lily wakes them at four in the morning, Jim brings her to Pam to nurse in bed. They all go back to sleep in a tangle, his arms around them both, surprisingly strong baby fists grasping his perfect, long fingers. This is my family, Pam thinks.
...It makes me all melty inside.
Thanks - we aim to make you melty! (though not necessarily cavity prone.)
10 Aw, so sad. :-( That's why they have to get together, because if they don't, they'll always wonder.
Author's Response: thank you! yes, i think that jim & pam need to get together. yet it would be slightly weird if they did.. that tension would be gone and their realtionship wouldn't be the same..