Penname: GreenFish Real name: Nora
Member Since: August 20, 2006

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Summary: What if, instead of the booze cruise, Phyllis was right about the whole office heading to Florida? Jam! Dwight in a Speedo! It doesn't get better than this!

Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21362 Read Count: 43819 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2007 Updated: July 05, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like how you changed around the last bit -- I think it really helped and it made me laugh.  You're doing a great job at this so far.  Can't wait to read more!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim, Pam, and marshmallows.  Done for PuffingNoise's request for JAM and marshmallows.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 515 Read Count: 3838 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2007 Updated: January 30, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: January 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice!  That ending was so cute.  And honestly, the beginning totally made me laugh.  "You seriously eat those?  Like, plain?"  and then... "Doesn't everybody?"

So them.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim have lunch. Spoilers through "The Return," unspoiled speculation thereafter.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 960 Read Count: 4740 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2007 Updated: January 30, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: January 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pure fluff, my friend!  And timely as well.  Man, I cannot WAIT to see Jim and Karen finally broken up for good.  Man!!


Author's Response: Oh, you're not kidding. Go. Away. Karen. Hee. Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured StoryUnlike the others, which are various fantasies and wishes and ifs, this kiss is a when....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1216 Read Count: 3960 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2007 Updated: January 31, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: January 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: what lips my lips have kissed

Yes, this is very lovely.  What a great idea for a story.  Of course Pam imagines what their (real) first kiss will be like.  And I love how she's got these different scenarios because that's very true-to-life.  And I love how Roy is really the only guy she's ever really kissed except for him.  And I just love the little detail of your descriptions.

This had to be my favorite line:   "She likes to imagine whispering “I love you” into his mouth so he’ll feel it before he hears it."

Great job.  I'm glad you decided to post this. 

Peeps by FNB Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 6
Summary: This was inspired by the marshmellow prompt on TWoP yesterday. Just a little Jim and Pam prank.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 919 Read Count: 3953 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2007 Updated: January 31, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: January 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Peeps

Nice job.  I think this story is so cute and funny.  I really get a kick out of the puns, hee.  And pranking Dwight is always dawesome.  Glad I could help!!


Author's Response: Thank you so much for your help!  Glad you liked it!

Summary: Jim and Pam celebrate their new house and its fireplace. Marshmallows are involved.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 888 Read Count: 3453 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2007 Updated: February 01, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Carpet camping.  What an adorable idea!  I love the idea that Pam's never really been camping, it's a nice little detail that I could actually believe.  And the toasted marshmallows... mmmm... you are totally making me hungry, I love those.

Summary:

She points toward the coffee pot, almost reassuring him that it's safe to take, no chance of hands crashing into each other, no touching involved.  Like the coast is clear, and she's telling him to go for it.

Spoilers through The Return.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1566 Read Count: 3579 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2007 Updated: February 01, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhh.  This so captured the perfect, awful tension between them.  I loved it.  Really nice job!  Makes me hurt for both of them.  

Summary: Past Featured StoryHe knows. He knows what month is coming up. He knows what day is in that particular month. He knows what anniversary occurs right before that day. He knows it all too well...
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ryan, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Holiday, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1646 Read Count: 3697 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2007 Updated: February 01, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shot Glass Full of Roses

Awwwww YEA RYAN AND KELLY.  You brought the nicest side to Ryan which is so great.  I really think he is a lot nicer to her than we're led to believe.  I mean, he let her put a candy cane on his nose and feed him fries!  There's something not right there!  The boy ... has it bad.  

Do us part by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 52] 19
Summary:

Phyllis' wedding doesn't turn out the way Pam had hoped . Unspoiled speculation for "Phyllis' Wedding" and AU after that (I assume!).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4050 Read Count: 30686 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The reception

Dude.  This story... is awesome.  What happens??? OMG, did Pam go off with Roy?  Does she go home with him?  Does she regret it later?  What happens?  I don't care if its AU, I gotta know.  This frickin' rocked.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! It's definitely a departure from my norm, which was fun. I actually may have to continue it. We'll see. :)

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The reception

Oooh, she went home with Roy??  Ouch.  I can't wait to see more... I assume you're going to write more...  I love this so far!!

Author's Response: Yeah; everyone I've ever known to break up after a long relationship has had at least one "relapse", so this seemed plausible. And yes, I'll write more. Can't leave 'em hanging like this! Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe sun is too bright when he opens his eyes.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, In Stamford, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1085 Read Count: 5750 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

...and he has never, never been this happy.

Favorite line ever.  Wow.  Your writing is so beautiful and sensory and just lovely.  I like the different stages that Jim goes through.  Very nice work.



Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked that line!  I worried that it might be too smooshy, so it's nice to hear it was good (too, since it was pretty smooshy :P).  Thank you so much for your comment!

Summary:

Five Things, One Shot.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1277 Read Count: 2913 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just LOVE the last one because it totally puts #5 in perspective.  And it's interesting how that one is from Pam's perspective.  You really had the dialogue between Karen & Pam down.  

These are so great.  And true!  I see Karen in all of these...  #4 was just scary.  Poor Jim... 

Summary: Based on Jim and Karen's talking heads from Ben Franklin.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 825 Read Count: 2213 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2007 Updated: February 03, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this a lot... I think it's very realistic.  And by Day 3, I couldn't help but laugh, because you really captured the sense of how women overthink things so much and tend to continue conversations hours, days later.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Written in response to the Evening Coming (aka the Scarf) challenge. Not usually one for prompts, but this one got me thinking.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Challenges: Evening Coming
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1499 Read Count: 7976 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2007 Updated: February 03, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my God, what can I say?  Love.

I love the quiet desperation of Pam, wearing Jim's scarf at night, in her bed, in her car --- just trying to hold onto a piece of what he is, and then -- finally.  Just -- wow.  Great work.  Seriously.



Author's Response: What can you say? I think you just did! I'm glad her desperation came across (and her need to just connect to him, anyway she could.) Thank you GreenFish!

Hourglass by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 53] 20
Summary: Jim and Pam, making me want to tear my hair out.  Mild spoilers/spec for S3 (based on episode descriptions)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3804 Read Count: 18402 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2007 Updated: March 06, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Love unspoken is the loudest sound of all

Oooh... a little foreshadowing?  I'm so interested to find out what happens next!  Yea.  Awesome job so far!!

Author's Response:

Just a tad. ;)  I'm trying to decide what to do.  Do I want to wait till I see an episode to write the "afterwards" or do I want to write the "afterwards" the way I want to see it.

The answer to this question is forthcoming. ;)   So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Parting is all we know of heaven and all we need of hell.

Wow.  This is such a lovely chapter!  Your descriptions and words -- you just -- got right into Pam's head.  I am thoroughly impressed.  And very pleased!  Cannot wait to read more.  

Author's Response: Wow.  Exactly what I was trying to do.  This chapter gave me fits - so I can't tell you how much it means to me to hear you say that.  Thank you so much.

Summary:

Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Meredith, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109602 Read Count: 338369 ePub Downloads: 39
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Who Would You Do? Muppets Version

Wow, OK, I just caught up on where you're at with this story and I have to say, it's really engaging!  Makes me want to play truth-or-dare at work, hee.  Anyway, I especially love your Angela, Phyllis and Meredith!  Meredith is the greatest in this series.  I love how she constantly goads Angela.

Also ... I did not expect the bit about Pam and the sketchbook -- I figured Phyllis was just bluffing about having gossip.  Wow!!  That is juicy!  Also:  everyone really seems to be ragging on Pam and her Dundies kiss a lot.  This seems like this will bite her in the ass.

Looking forward to reading more now... you totally sucked me in .... ahhhh!!



Author's Response:

 

I supposedly have to write 15,000 chapters so I'm putting those Dundies out there as a possible chapter 1500 kinda thing. I'm pretty sure Karen will slug Pam if she tries to kiss Jim. But who knows? I haven't ruled out the possibility of a threesome.

 you totally sucked me in!!! that's what he said!

Bluffing? Bluffing! I've been talking about this gossip for 16 chapters! Do you think I could do a big reveal of "there was nothing"? I'm pretty sure I would be dead now if I had done that! My sister especially is keeping tabs on the situation. Her exact words were "It better be good or else ---- cement boots, babe!" So you know. Death threats keep me typing.

 

 

 

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - not much body hair on Nuns....

This last scene with Michael in Hooters is very funny.  I am, however, a little confused about the whole thing with Angela and Dwight and the HR form.  Why wouldn't have Toby gotten it yet?   Why are they asking him now? 

Also:  Jim and his roommate's "brother" (I love that Dwight knew his roommate's brother's name.  Seriously.)  That was very hilarious, too.  You really played out those scenes in Hooters well.  



Author's Response:

Re: Angela/Dwight/HRForm. Angela and Dwight filled that form out at about 11:15am and gave it to Pam. Pam was holding it until she was sure both Angela and Phyllis completed their Dares. Unfortunately, Phyllis' dare didn't go off as planned so Pam completely forgot about Angela's HR form. That's why it is still at her desk...theoretically. It is now roughly 1:30ish in the Break Room (I always have a 1pm lunch, not sure if that's normal).  Kelly...and Meredith (when she caught on) are quizzing Toby because a) Angela and Pam are not there to stop them and b) Kelly (and Meredith) want to get a little revenge against Angela because she called them whores. In addition, because I LOVE COMPLICATIONS, they think this is the worst possible revenge they could do since they think that Angela and Dwight are not actually going to date. Actually if the truth came out, I think both Pam and Angela would be relieved at this turn of events. I just like imagining how NAUGHTY Kelly and Meredith feel right now. So the only voice of reason trying to stop them is Karen and since they don't seem to interact with her on the show I figured they'd ignore her here. See how simple that all was? Now ask me about something complicated!!! :)   And please... Keep pointing out things that you think are inconsistant, I regularly go back and clean up old chapters!

 

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Kelly and the Pussycats!!!!

Ooooh.  Now it's getting interesting!  Can't wait to hear Karen's response... 

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - SHE'S LYING

Wow.  This just gets more compelling with each chapter.  Jim, FTW with the Post-It note!  Nice!  And Kelly -- whoa, girl.  Take your finger off the caps-lock, wow.  I love the way that you write all the characters in this, how they each have their distinctive voices.  Heh.  Can't wait to see where this goes!  Oh, my!!!

Author's Response: Heh heh heh! "the caps-lock." I giggled the whole time I was typing her caps-lock speech. I HATE when people type in all caps-lock. Drives me bonkers!

Summary: Jim and Pam are finally together, and it's coming up to a year since Casino Night. Pam has plans for its anniversary.....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7214 Read Count: 4414 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: February 04, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You'll see

WOW!  I was totally hoping that Pam was going to propose.  That is so awesome.  My sister got engaged at Niagara Falls, so I was very excited when I got to that part, I was so very happy.  Hee, I'm such a sap.  Yay.

Electricity by sharky Rated: K [Reviews - 39] 10
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam finally gets pushed over the edge when it comes to Jim and his new girlfriend. Post-Ben Franklin.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2772 Read Count: 18141 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: February 09, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Blowing a Fuse

Okay, I know *I* was one of the ones who made a comment about all these Jim/Pam stories, but I really liked this.  You did an awesome job expressing Pam's anger in this situation, and man, would I just DIE to see her and Jim have this conversation -- because I would!  I will read these types of stories repeatedly if they're written well, and I think you did a nice job.  Yea.  (Now, note to Daniels & Co:  please, get ON IT.)

Author's Response: I actually used your comments about making things unique to heart when I wrote this so I'm glad you liked it.

Unravel by girl7 Rated: T [Reviews - 24] 8
Summary: Past Featured Story

This is from Karen's point of view - my attempt at getting into her head and fleshing out just what's going on there. (Perhaps I should clarify that this is decidedly not a Crazy!Karen fic.)

And while it's obviously centered on Karen, Jim and Pam are very much in the background.

It'll ultimately be a two-parter, probably no more than that. Seriously. I mean it this time.


Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7229 Read Count: 8917 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: February 26, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man, something about Karen/Jim fic -- it hurts -- I really give you credit for doing this, because as I'm reading it, I'm just getting possessive about it all.  I don't want Karen to have Jim, I want Pam to have Jim.  You definitely told it convincingly, and I think that's why it hurts so much.  Can't wait to read more.

Summary: Written for the mixtape challenge. Pam makes her move by making Jim a mix CD.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: Mixtape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3310 Read Count: 3165 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2007 Updated: February 05, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha!  This is so cute and fluffy.  I totally squealed when I realized that Jim was going to cancel his Valentine's plans with Karen.  Ooooh boy.  And then her reaction--?  That was priceless.  I would have killed the man if I were her.  I love the songs Pam chose, too.  (That Depeche Mode song?  *fans self*  ... one of my favorites.)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :o)

Summary:

Ensemble five things prompt. Spoilers for the Producer's Cut of The Return.


Categories: Other, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Andy, Dwight, Ensemble, Jim, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 953 Read Count: 2889 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2007 Updated: February 09, 2007
Reviewer: GreenFish Signed
Date: February 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Five Times the Men of Dunder Mifflin Went Drinking at Poor Richard’s

LOL.  These are brilliant.  I particularly enjoyed these two things:  Goldshlager (extra flakes) and "Ryan, what took you so long?" 

Okay, seriously, the fact that you just knew that Dwight was the kind of person who would make a ridiculous request like that (and that awesome little subtle reference to the fight he "got drunk with his laser tag team").  That rocks.  And, on the same token, that you took that hilarious Kelly line from The Secret and actually contextualized it.  I am in love.

The Andy one was also eighty thousand times dawesome.  I love Andy.  I can't wait to see him come back.



Author's Response: I wish I could claim I was a genius for knowing what Dwight would order, but it's from a Dundies deleted scene. He orders Goldschlager (extra flakes), then Hot Sake, then Fosters in the large can, only they don't have any of those things at Chili's, so he settles for "chocolate shake, chocolate sprinkles". However, I will happily embrace the rest of your kind words! I love to hate Andy and have a new appreciation for him after trying to see inside his head. Thanks GreenFish!