sooooo perfect, like always! i am always so excited when i see something by you. this is was delicious - i loved all the little moments you captured between jim and pam. the dialogue between them is always so real and so in character!
favorite part was the end. taking a santa picture with a sonogram? priceless.

thank you for this!

Author's Response: Can't take credit for the sonogram idea...that's totally NBC.com.  I just filled in the blanks a little.  Hearing you say you look forward to my stuff makes my day, because I definitely look forward to yours!!! Thanks so much.

bashert, this was so heartbreakingly beautiful. there were about a million lines i picked out to say were my favorite. if there was ever a story that made me miss the old jim and pam, which i didn't think was possible, this was it.

stellar job!

this was delicious with a captial D!
you've captured Jim and Pam sooooo perfectly here..my favorite sentence was

He wants to buy this moment and put down a mortgage and just move on in because holy mother of God.

so great.
fantastic job!!

Author's Response: thank you with a capital T, kaat! you're too sweet :)

i have never anticipated a story so much, yanana! the characterizations are perfect, the story is so great, and i cannnnot WAIT for the next chapter! update! :)

Author's Response: aw, thanks kaat! and by the way, while reading other reviews, noticed your mention on us sharing the same name (and the best name in the world, obviously). ;) thanks for the review!

there is no other word for it: gorgeous. absolutely gorgeous.

Blanca, this was fabulous! it left me wanting more which is always a good thing and your first person jim is so well-written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you want more, because there is more on the way. And we'll get a chance to see things from Pam's point of view as well.

oooh, guys, this is wonderful! you both write such great realistic first-person. i cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, kaat! We really enjoyed doing this together. We're glad you enjoyed reading.

absolutely perfect fluff! the way you use words is so original and so...delicious. :)

You got Jim needing saving in Febrility..now i think it should be Miss Pamela's turn! Something simple. You do simple SO WELL and i mean that in the best of all possible ways!

Callisto, i'm not sure I've told you yet but I've been enjoying each of these chapters IMMENSELY. You have a way with words and the characters that is pure gold...I cannnot wait for more!

thank you for these beauties :)

lovefool! where have you been?!!?

so happy to see this pop up and just what i needed on a gray winter day full of homework. such a cute little snippet - of course, when it's written by you, i know it's going to be fabulous! I loved everything from Pam's annoyance to the rocky road ice cream and the mental image of sick jim snuggling with his daughter - gahh. perfection. thank youu!

Author's Response: Aw, Kaat, you're the absolute best!  I feel the same way when I see your byline pop up!  Thanks so much for the wonderful words! Hope to see something from you soon!

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wowwwwiee..can't believe i haven't reviewed this yet! so much awesome in this story - the blue ribbon is well-deserved. i'm loving this so much. please hurry up and continue! :)

Author's Response: YAY, thanks so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, more soon. :)

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what a sexy little story. :) why can't the writers take a hint?! loved all the subtle humor - just the idea of them taking daily walks had me squealing. great job!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much kaat. I really am flattered because I love your writing and it's gratifying to me that you liked my little talking head piece. I really appreciate the read and review.

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what a naughty little treat, andtheivy. :) i absolutely loved "you dirty little monster!" great story.