Penname: raspberryjam Real name: Abby
Member Since: April 30, 2008

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Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184519 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Music and Sculpture and Pain

love it. great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 8
Date: June 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: A Dark Night Continues

oh so sad. great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: June 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: So Tired

aw sweet jim

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Friday Morning

Yay! I'm pretty sure my day was made when I saw an update on this story!
I do have to say this chapter was a little to heavy for me to follow with the medical terms and everything. but I understand its necessary
now on to the next one :D

Author's Response: Hi, raspberryjam.  This was probably the most jargon-heavy chapter I'll write.  I did want to convey how overwhelming and confusing it is for the family to try to absorb all this information.  There might be little snippets like this in future chapters, but probably not to this extent.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: PDA at Lunch!

Oh YAY!!! I love fluff. Especially in this story. I've been waiting for it all along because I knew it would be good. Great chapter!! :) I can't wait till you update again

Author's Response: Thanks raspberryjam!  I appreciate your confidence in me!  I'm glad the fluff lived up to your expectations.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Interlude

nice chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Guest Accommodations

so cute! I loved how it was funny it was! Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: The Beacon

yay I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: This one may take a day or so.  It won't be too long, though!  Thanks.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Conversations with God, Parents and the Walker Man

I did like this short little chapter, but I like whatever you write! :) Wow if you get a chapter up tonight I shall give you a deserved round of applause

Author's Response:

I'm writing away!  We'll see if I can earn that round of applause.

Thanks for taking the time to leave me a note again!  I look for your comment every chapter!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Friday Night

Ha the girls was very funny and well written. I'm glad Jim finally knows somemore about he and Pam's relationship. I can't wait to read more and see if there is a confrontation! :)

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Fair Dinkum Drongo

!!! I loved this chapter! I can't wait to read the next one. I thought the dialouge was great between jim and pam in the bed. I did think that Angie's was a bit stereotyped but don't take that the wrong way I totally know what you were going for. Great job!

Author's Response: You know I loved this chapter and was really surprised that it got so many fewer reviews than the other recent ones.  Goes to show the value of an editor/beta.  I don't have one.  I think Angie was so over the top it distracted from the rest of the chapter.  I've done one quick revision.  I will probably do another revision later.  I know most people won't go back and re-read it but it'll be a better product.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: She Felt Whole

No! You get the dundie for shortest and sweetest chapter ever. Short and sweet is the best way to go, you know? I thought this was very cute and I like how they are finally getting to relax! :)

Author's Response:

I'm only 5'1", so I definitely subscribe to the theory that short and sweet is the best way to go!

Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Jim

Ah! I think you killed me during this wait! But, miraculously, I came back to life because this chapter was perfect! I'm glad Jim is finally coming to his senses. I can't wait to keep reading :)

Author's Response: You crack me up, raspberryjam!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  Jim's definitely going to come to his senses soon!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: August 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Saturday Morning

aw. a looker! :)

Author's Response: He is, isn't he?

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: February 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Not a Bad Day

Aw! Has it really been 6 months? I don't believe it!

This was an adorable chapter!! I can't wait till Jim realizes who he wants. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, raspberry!  I think we all know that Jim realizes who he wants.  It's just a matter of getting him to admit it, eh?  Glad you liked the chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, raspberry!  I think we all know that Jim realizes who he wants.  It's just a matter of getting him to admit it, eh?  Glad you liked the chapter.

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291553 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: May 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

"Wow." He pretends to be indignant as he informs her sternly, "Need I remind you that I am not a cow, nor is my milk free...?"

^ made my day! :)
loved it!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that; I had a blast writing it!  ;O)

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: What happens if Roy becomes abusive towards Pam?
A sort of AU. Post Christmas Party. Starts a few days after New Years.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Holiday, Horror, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13594 Read Count: 64155 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2008 Updated: June 05, 2008
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Date: June 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aw yay Jim! great chapter, so sad

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review and support! i'm gla dyou're enjoying this!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91635 Read Count: 137322 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: she has your hair

I can just picture the cutest baby when you describe her!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: I'll always love her

aw so sweet. great chapter! so heartfelt

Author's Response: Thanks raspberryjam. It was a hard chapter to write.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: June 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: he would do anything

"When Halpert boys fall we fall hard"
cute. Ok Ill stop with my 20 reviews. great chapter!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: June 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: what's done in the dark will be brought to the light

I liked how the "more than that" was thrown in there :) great chapter!

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: 6 lbs 4 oz bouncing bundle of nerves

oh great sentence to end it with :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate all of the reviews, and I\'m glad you enjoyed what you read.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: fall over 7 times, get up 8

:D this is so sweet. I can't believe how good this is

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Little Beesly

aw this is so good! :D Sorry I didn't check it out sooner, my mistake

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed 10
Date: June 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: stains of our past

I read this chatper once before and it didn't really catch my eye (sorry!) but I saw you on the recent page and I thought I'd give it another try I reread it, and really liked it, and now I'm going to sit down and finally read all of it! :D

Author's Response: I\'m glad you decided to reread. I love new readers.