Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed
Date: October 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Make Someone Happy
I'm pretty nervous about your comment that there will be two different endings...
Their conversation about the gun and Pam's discoveries was very believable and true to the characters.
I have to say, though, I'm shocked she went back to Scranton. I just can't believe she would leave while he was still in the hospital and she wasn't sure of his recovery, even with his mother coming.
I've really enjoyed this story, I'll be sorry to see it end!
Author's Response: I really appreciate your thoughts on this, jkfan9989.\r\n\r\nMy thinking was that Jim would insist she go back to Scranton, as he seems to be doing okay at this point. He sure doesn\'t want Pam sharing too much info with his mom, and it\'s not an ideal way for the girlfriend to meet the mom anyway. Jim\'s just thinking ahead. \r\n\r\n(BTW, Don\'t worry, the endings will be clearly marked, and maybe you\'d prefer Ending A.)\r\n\r\nMany thanks for reading and reviewing!