“So,” he says, “What’s changed about you in the week and a half that you’ve been in New York?”
10 Guh. I'd love to see this continued. I know it is probably a one shot though, but the way you captured them was so perfect *sigh*
10 This. This melted me.
“Just be sure, ok? You’re housing some pretty precious cargo, I want to make sure you’re perfect.”
Guh,I can see him doing it.
But,I have to tell you this, because it made me laugh.I got to the part where you sayd she was at the gynecologist office, having her annual exam. Iread it and was like, wtf??? in my head I so read that as anal exam, whch makes no sense, but it made me stop and laugh for a while *has no shame*
Loving this, so glad you're writing, I heart your stories.
10 LOL Viagra Falls, that is awesome.
10 This fic makes me happy. LOL at Jim, baby does't get any of that, right? Oh, pure brilliance :)
10 Oooooooooooooooooh, I loved it. I always wondered if anything like that happened :)
10 I heart your drabble so much :)
10 How have I never seen this little picture, great story behind it too :)
Author's Response: I know, I learned about the picture recently. It just made me love Jim a little more, if that's possible. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. :)
10 You didn't overdo it at all. That was wonderfully written. I hope we get to see more moments like these :) Get writing!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I have a long list of moments I plan to write for this story. :) Thank you for the kind review!
10 Who cares where it came frm, that was beautiful, and made me smile all big like a Cheshire cat ;) MORE of these please :)
10 Yes it was, and ahhhhhhhhhh, she's told him she c an't do it any more. What happens noooow?
10 Ooooooooooooh not what I was expecting, but very very goood :)
Great idea. My only suggestion would be to get a beta. It's always good to have another set of eyes take a look at something,so you don't repeat yourself etc etc :)Please don't take this as a negative feedback, all the best writers on here use betas :)
Season 8 post episode one shots. Like "Harmony" only, they're Season 8. NOW COMPLETE.I forbid you to ever stop writing, especially these great one shots. I don't think you realise just how much we appreciate and love them - how much we appreciate and love YOU! Your fics get me through,and as sad as that sounds, it's true!!!!
This was so unbelievably cute and heartbreaking and magical all at the same time. The image of Pam sitting there, knowing just how lucky she is now to have him, to have this beautiful family... god it makes my heart want to explode. Jim wanting Pam to take the phone with her was also freaking amazing and perfect and something I could see him doing.
Seriously, I am addicted to your writing. I need an intervention, but I refuse ;)
Author's Response: Aw, you're too awesome for words, my dear. I will do my best to stay with my inspiration that I have right now and continue writing these and finishing up that other story too. I am happy you thought it was true to Pam, that she would feel so lucky to have him, I know we don't see any of that on the show, but Pam has such a sweet thoughtful way about her, and I know that she's grateful for her husband and family. Thanks as always for such amazing inspiring support. :)
Like it? I freaking loved it. These are my favourite type of stories you write. You take an awesome deleted scene and create this amazing story out of it.
This still has me laughing, because I can hear Pam saying it so deadpan LOL
“We’ll have to build a gigantic bathtub for you in our mountain house, then.”
I don't know why I like fics where Jim gets an ouchie, but I do. You're awesome sauce.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks :) I think you may be the only one that did like this one lol I saw that deleted scene and thought what was he thinking standing in front of a truck that Dwight was driving. Anyways, thanks so much for letting me know you liked it! :) Oh, and awesome sauce! You watch Parks and Rec too? That show is great, I love it. Not as much as the Office, but I do love it.
There is not one thing I didn't love about these chapter. You actually made me cry at the end. I could totally see this happening when they got home, Pam freaking out, cleaning out the fridge, Jim biting his lip nervously. Awww, LOVE!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure where the over emotional idea came from but I went with it. Sorry to make you cry! I'm happy that you liked this one :) Thank you!
I'm a sick sick person, but I cannot get enough of sick/injured Jim fics. I love how you take something from the show, and add to. You do it SO so so well. Thank you for this.
I was going to make an inappropriate joke about kissing Jim's boo boo better, but I wont ;)
Author's Response: I'm with you, I love when Pam's taking care of Jim in fics, and I love writing them that way. Maybe it's that I've read too many fics in the past where the story insinuated that Pam didn't love Jim as much as he loves her. Whatever the reason that thought's stuck with me, I'm glad you liked this, dearie! :)
God, reading that after the deleted scene has made me so ridiculously happy. Everything you write is so perfectly in character and a pleasure to read 100000 times over :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much dearie! You have no idea how much your help really helps me! Being perfectly in character is so important to me, so it really means a lot to hear that I'm on it ;) Thanks! :)
*HAPPY SIGH* I'm equally devastated by this series finishing as I am about Season 8 being done. I cannot tell you how much I enjoy these little masterpieces of yours. You make an even better episode AMAZING. I hope you continue this for season 9. You make me so happy LOL
Seriously, how do you manage to outdo yourself each and every week.This was so cute. I love the idea of Jim joining them for dinner via skype, and Cece being such a daddy's girl aw :)Also, I love the detail you put inand the continuity within each chapter, like Pam questioning what he ordered for dinner lol. SERIOUSLY LOVE IT
Author's Response: I couldn't get the video chatting idea out of my head, so I went with it and figured Cece must miss her daddy a lot since in my head they're buddies, and I'm thrilled that you liked it so much! I'm hoping that they mention the blood pressure thing again at some point so these don't look too off as I continue, but I think I'll try to find something else for the next update. Thank you so much for all of the support, I really appreciate it, more than you know! :)
OMG how did I miss this when you first updated it? That was so good, like, just the thought of Jim being dorky and writing a poem like that makes my heart want to explode with joy lol. These are seriously amazing. If you could win an award for best fanfic, you'd win. This series makes my week each time you update x
Author's Response: LOL I updated this a few hours before we all met Jenna :) I knew you'd like it! Aw, award for best fanfic - that's so cute, thanks. Does it look like a Dundie? LOL Thanks so much for all of the support! huggie hugs!
*Fist pump* YES, you're back!
This was such a wonderful add on to the episode we got. Jim imagining he'd poisoned the plants cracked me up - something I could totally see him thinking :) Nice bit of smut at the end too, very appreciative of that ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I didn't want the smutt to be too... smutty, so I'm glad you thought it was a good nice bit :) I'm really happy that you liked this chapter. I never wrote in second person before and never posted a story without dialogue so I was nervous about this chapter. I can't thank you enough for all that you do. :)
Last night's episode was hilarious, as was this chapter. Your continuity is also very much appreciated, it's like one story of little stories, does that make sense? But it's nice to see things mentioned on the show or in other chapters followed up. Like Jim's high blood pressure.
Jim's guilt about Pam's parent's was so beautiful. I can imagine him still feeling as though he was a tiny bit responsible, even if he wasn't.
Cece is such a little monkey, but you're writing her just as I imagine her to be. She isn't a naughty little girl, but she's 2 and is competing for her parent's attention.
I really do look forward to your take on each episode - and not only is it now Office Thursday, it is also Indigo & Crimson Thursday :)
Author's Response: Indigo and Crimson Thursday, awww, you're so cute. The more I worry that these are all the same and getting redundant, the more the thoughts come to me. I always write Cece as the perfect child, so it was a challenge to me to make her a little bit of a diva in this chapter. But with any baby, they're jealous of their sibling at least once in a while. I won't make it a trend though, since I don't think given Jim and Pam's temperament that they would have a baby that throws tantrums every single day. I'm glad you're enjoying the continuity, I think it's important to do, so they can all have an underlying backstory of sorts. I do need to change it up a little so I'm thinking of something new and different for Christmas. :) Thanks so much as always, it really means so much to have you in my corner!
Guh, what a perfect holiday ficlet. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this for us. I look forward to each and every chapter you write, and I dunno, seeing them at home like that, and sharing Christmas with the Halperts, that's kinda special :)
Your Cece is adorable, and I want to steal her. Them making cookies as a family and not worrying about the mess they have to clear up is JUST how i see them. And Jim begging Pam to let him give her his Christmas present? That was so perfectly in character. I could totally picture him bouncing on his feet like "PLEASE???""
I could go on and on and point out everything I loved about this, but I'll be here forever :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I wish there were another way to say that, because I really can't thank you enough. :) I'm so happy that you liked this chapter, and I'm so happy that you liked the gifts and Cece and all that I incorporated into it. I really love writing little Cece, and it's so nice to see that she's being enjoyed even though we really haven't seen her interact with her parents at all. Thank you so much again and again and again. :)
So cuteeeee. I love these little stories you write that take us in to their home. Always so in character and true to the show.
Author's Response: Thanks sally! True to the show is what I'm always aiming for so I'm happy to see I've succeeded! :) thanks for all of the support! Xx