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“God, Jim. There’s been an…there was an accident and…Roy came back and he got upset and…God, he shot Della Jim, Roy shot her.” And suddenly Jim’s not even breathing.
So. Freaking. Amazing. I can't even say anything else. Keep going, I will definately be waiting by my computer for each chapter. Wow. :P
Jim gets fussy and Pam gets fed up.
Spoilers through The Negotiation.
I love the double meaning of the ending 2 lines. It makes it final but not, if that makes any sense :P Cool story, good writing style, I really got into it.
Fate is a tricky thing.
WWII based AU.
I love this story. I don't know what it is, maybe it's the writing, maybe it's the idea, I don't know. Whatever it is though, it's awsome.
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
Hey, I just started reading this story, and I love it! I decided, wut the heck, lets give it a try, and I'm so glad I did. The style is a little weird, but good weird. And you write the characters so well. Keep going, I'll definately read. (P.S. Your name, does that mean you love SVU? Cuz if you do that rocks!)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you tried it too!!! I know the style is funky, but I was trying to just explore a more artsy feel and see how it went. Hopefully it works.
And yeah SVU IS MY JAM (in a purely non Jim and Pam sense of that word)
This is somewhat of a departure from my last few fluffy stories. This one will be kind of dark, so be warned.
Post- The Job. Jim and Pam's new relationship is tested.
Update - finished! Sorry it took so long.
Okay, I wasn't quite sure if I liked this story, but I decided to keep reading (mostly out of boredom :P). I love this little plagerized ending, it just makes me love this story even more. I'm glad I kept reading, and I'm glad you did it this way instead of like 30 pointless chapters. Awsome job!
Wow, I didn't think they would be so smoking! Really cute story, I like the whole Jim-and-Pam-as-parents thing, and you write their relationship with their boys really well. Keep up the good work!
Here’s the poem Pam writes to Jim for their three-month anniversary. It is handwritten. On stationery she created with paintbrush in hand and Jim in her heart. Before she gives it to him she says “Please don’t laugh, it’s ridiculously corny, but it really is how I feel.”
By the way, please don’t laugh at me, this is ridiculously corny!
That is ridiculously corny, but amazingly sweet. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review bloomsgirl!
I'm liking this story, keep up the good work!
After a scare, Jim ends up in the hospital. Fortunately, pranks always make the day a little bit brighter. Spoilers for 'The Job'.
Except from Chapter Six:
“But Harry Potter is fictional,” Jim reasoned. “And he has Skelo-Grow.”
“I have Skelo-Grow.”
“No. You don’t.” Jim looked bemused.
Dwight pulled a bottle out of his pocket. “Oh yeah? Then what’s this?”
“Bleach.”
Dwight gave a slightly disturbing smile. “That’s to fool the Muggles.”
I guess it wouldn't be that hard.....TWSS! Great story, it makes me laugh, and people could use alot more laughter. Write more please :D
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, bloomsgirl! Happy to make you laugh and I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I love TWSS. ; ) My friend's last name is Harder, which frequently results a a really dirty TWSS, much to his embarrassment. I get a kick out of it.
I started writing a new story, which so far includes Rachael Ray and a heart defibrillator sooo... I don't know. ; ) I'll see where it goes and post it when it's finished. I hope you'll check back. Thanks so much for reviewing! It means a lot to me!
-Rose : )
Okay, this was cute. Disturbing, weird, will make me laugh histarically when I hear the song next, but I liked it. You should do each chapter on stupid songs that no one likes, but everyone knows. :P
Author's Response: I think you're on to something. Just associate all annoying, omnipresent songs with The Office. Sounds like a brilliant plan.
I got this idea from the JAM Therapy thread on the NBC boards. A fellow board member brought up an article stating the 10 ways a woman can best compliment her man. I am taking each one and implementing it into JAM. Pretty simple, really.
RC, this one goes out to you. ;) meow.
Spoilers thru S4 so far.
I don't own any of this. Don't sue.
I know how Jim feels. 16 years old, and size 10 feet. I hate taking off my shoes. I'm loving this story, keep it going :D
OMG you are so mean. I love it! Update soon please :)
Well you know what? I don't really like candy corn, but I love this story. Grilled cheese? Thats genius! Update soon please! :D
I like this story, but that seemed a little violent for Roy. I know, it's all fiction, blah blah blah, but please don't make him so violent in later chapters. Keep up the good work!
I like this style of writing, its an interesting way to pull me into it. I'm gonna keep reading because, 1) I like the plotty thingy, and 2) I like this style. Update soon please! :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thanks for your review.
I love how much you are into this story, it rocks. I love the site and the pics, the show stuff, really, it's almost like they are real. Your story is bringing them to life, and not in a completly creepy way. Great job, update soon please!
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much for your kind words. I appreciate your review. I'm working on an update now, so it shouldn't be too much longer.
What in the......I have no words. :)
Author's Response: really, I believe this is a case of "you really don't wanna know what goes on in my head"
The ring is gorgeous and the story is cute! Awsome :D
Two problems, 1) Why did Darryl have to die? That was so sad!, and 2) For a hard core Jammer, such as myself, it sucked that Jim and Pam weren't together in the end. But, aside from those tiny things, awsome story, I really liked it. And yes, maybe you did think it out a bit too much, but how else was it supposed to be so good? :D
Author's Response:
To answer your first question, I don't know why but I felt like I needed to kill someone off and Darryl was the only one that I couldn't really think of a story for. Heh... To answer the second question, as long as they are kept together on the show, I'll play with them in different situations. :D I tend to overthink timelines... ;)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
A phone call interrupts their Valentine's Day date.
That has to be the best way to ask someone to marry you, trick them into saying yes LOL! But seriously, so cute, loved it! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! And really, isn't it a Jim thing to do, to get her to say yes first, and then ask her? I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I liked it, it sounds like what I did after I watched 28 Days Later, only I didn't have a guy like Jim to protect me :D Really cute.
Kinda cool, it's been done before, and in my opinion out of character for Roy, but still, well written, grab's your attention. I would have thought Jim would know where Pam lived, but that's why it fiction :D I'll keep reading, so please keep updating!
Author's Response:
I figured that if I made Jim go and save Pam, the story would be over too quickly. I didn't want to take the easy way out. [x
But I'm glad you are reading it and enjoying it! Thank you!
Well, can't deny those angels. Very cute, I always love random fluffy pieces, they make me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The angels appreciate it ;)
I'm liking it, it's reminding me of the episodes, mind you in a very PamPOV/ Jam way, but whatever. It'll be cool for the new episode coming up on the 10th. Keep updating it!
It only took me 3 days to finish it (stupid work) but here's a little Post-Dinner Party action. Fluffy and short, just the way I like it.
Obvious spoilers abound. :)
That was so cute. I can't believe that it really is back, it's like waking up from a nightmare, in a world where there is no Office *shudders* I scared myself. Cute story, made me smile :)
Author's Response: I know what you mean, I missed our show so much and I'm so glad that it's returned to us. Thanks for reading, bloom, and your review made me smile. :)
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