Penname: pamelamorganhalpert Real name: Claire
Member Since: May 01, 2009

Bio:

I'm a student living in Seattle. For a while I was only reading and reviewing, (I'm pretty shy) but then I decided to go for it and begin posting - albeit very sporadically. I still feel that I've got a long way to go in terms of my writing, but as I'm busy with school I'm content to just read, review and beta for now.

That said, I love to rock climb, travel (Europe in particular), listen to old 60's music, read all of your stories here and watch The Office, How I Met Your Mother and Gilmore Girls.

Email me anytime and I'll gladly beta for you - just know that I might be a bit preoccupied from time to time with school, but I'm still interested. My email is: pamelamorganhalpert [at] yahoo [dot] com

P.S. I saw Jenna Fischer in person in May 2010 at the world premiere of her movie 'A Little Help' and I've got a insy winsy picture on my phone to prove it (sadly no autograph...). However, I can say that I've been within a foot of Jenna, as she walked right by me to take pictures for the press.

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Reviews by pamelamorganhalpert
Summary: Pam's with Roy but things are less than perfect between them. Jim loves her and knows she doesn't belong with Roy. He'll find a way to save her, and show her she deserves to be loved. Warning: some abuse
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20796 Read Count: 28076 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my goodness, that was beautiful! Actually a happy(ish) chapter for once. Not that I mind the harsher ones, because they show the truth and reality of the story and the issues/problems Pam is having to face... okay... I'm sure you get what I mean! Anyway, I really liked this chapter, I'm so glad Pam is trusting Jim so much, it's great to see that!

I can't wait for another chapter - I love that these are getting posted so close together! And as always, this was really well written (if I didn't say that already!).

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that was so sweet! It's so nice to know that things are beginning to get a little bit better for them, or at least through their relationship. And as always, thank you for adding reality and not making the finding Roy bit as easy as possible. Nice touches to have them get away for a while.

P.S. I love the idea of Jim rustling through the kitchen, that image is staying in my mind for a little while!

Can't wait for more, this is such a thoughtful, creative and mind-opening story! I love it!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was perfect! I love how things are beginning to (somehow) look up for Pam (and Jim, too!). This was a great chapter, I loved the description and you did a great job jumping from one time period to the next, nice work! I can't wait to see the next chapter.

However, I did spot a few editing errors... The first being a think instead of thing about halfway through, then a too instead of to. Lastly, remember that in a sentence when referring to a character addressing another one add a comma before/after their name. Just a couple little things, but all in all this was really well done!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh darn.....Shit. This is not going to be good. GET WRITING NOW!!!!!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, this story just keeps getting better and better! This was incredible, fantastic job writing and now I'm curious - will there be another chapter assessing the damage? I'm sure the cops are going to be curious about the gun and the bullet wound on Roy, so will there be a follow up chapter? If so, I'm eager to read it. If not, thanks for writing such a realistic story about something that I'm sure is happening out there to a number of people throughout the world and now the rest of us are hopefully a little closer to understanding their experience. Great job writing and I hope there will be another chapter!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Aww, a kiss! That's exactly what our hero Jim needed! This was a fantastic chapter, and I'm so glad there's finally a satisfying completion to the whole Roy scenario. Whew, you know how to write a mean, violent Roy chapter. I'm giving you a 50/10 in my book for this story - and there's an epilogue!!! Yippee! I can't wait! As always, very well written chapter here, and thank you so much for mentioning me in your A/N, that is so sweet of you! I've enjoyed reading this story so much, so it's my pleasure. I think I'm in love with all the honesty you bring to this story, the bitter truth as to what some people's reality's and daily lives are like. My hat's off to you, lizzieloo!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my goodness, what a beautiful ending. Fantastic job with this story, I've loved every word of it, no matter how painful, sad, melancholy or lovely. Great job, and really, this has been incredible! You've really helped all of us readers to grasp such an awful reality that happens to some unfortunate people through at form that makes sense to us. Nice job, this has all been so well written. I can't wait to read your next story, lizzieloo!

Summary: Mrs. Beesly pays Pam a visit during Sexual Harassment. This time, she meets the one and only Jim Halpert.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7022 Read Count: 2931 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2009 Updated: December 17, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best

oh my god! i just read this when i should have been going asleep, but so what! absolutely worth it. great job! keep going please! or have a sequel, it would be incredible!

nice work!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm guilty of this as well! Haha. Thank you so much for the compliment, my goal is to write one of these stories for every episode that Jim and Pam aren't together... so we'll see! Thanks again!

light by moofoot Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 4
Summary: Moments between The Job and when they start dating. They take things slow.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 Read Count: 2784 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2009 Updated: December 18, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: light

not outdated at all! i love seeing them back in the day, i'm actually beginning to get sick of modern day stuff, it's nice to see them so experimental, because we don't know what actually happened so everyone is different. great job!

Snippets by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary:

Snippets of Pam and Jim - Post The Job and early S4.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1324 Read Count: 2980 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2009 Updated: December 18, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Job - Money

wow, that was beautiful, nice job seamlessly flowing through such a large part of their relationship in snippets - i didn't even realize that was the title until i had written that word!

i also loved the way you didn't use their names or have the story come from a certain perspective. i was very impressed at how you didn't slip at all! i especially liked the first part, as it seemed to have the most content, the rest were not as great, excluding the final part at dwight's home.

my only critique, i saw a couple of spelling mistakes - and i'm having a hard time relocating them, but there were i think two of them in the same paragraph - if you find them and fix them you'll be all set!

great job!

Author's Response: Thanks pmh!  I'd like to do more of these but the mood hasn't hit me quite yet.  Also - thanks for the tip on the typos.  Sometimes I catch them after I post - but I appreciate your letting me know. 

Girl in a Tutu by kaat Rated: K+ [Reviews - 18] 9
Summary: Jim, Pam, and toddler bliss.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Kids/Family
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3752 Read Count: 4702 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2009 Updated: January 11, 2010
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: bare feet.

Umm. hmm. let's see. GIGANTIC YES for this chapter!

Alright, so that doesn't really mean anything - but really, this was so sweet, realistic sounding (because I'd have no clue what it's like to be a mom. Don't get me started on babysitting little kiddies, though...). Really, this is just lovely. I love reading new chapters, seeing daddy Jim to the rescue. Also, I must add *whispers* I'm getting SOOO sick of all the baby and kid fic stories. Really boring now. But this is the only exception because it's so realistic and sweet and just perfectly done. So congrats, you're the only one I still want to read! lol. Another great chapter.

Author's Response: you are so sweet! :) that is such a great compliment - i will try my best to keep them as un-boring as i can! haha. thanks, pamelamorgan!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: ballet slippers.

oh wow, that was so adorable. lucy is definitely the right amount of obnoxious and over energetic yet so adorable and perfect, too.

i love the line where lucy exclaims 'it's beating' and how pam asks for the pretend jello giving explicit reasons why. and lastly, jim's looks just for pam, his concern and love - beautifully done!

great chapter, keep going with this, i didn't check to see if it's a one-shot or not, but i think you could really do a lot more with this adorable little clan of three (and four-to-be!).

Summary: Kids say all sorts of blasphemous, but cute, things.

Disclaimer: I do not own "The Office". I don't even own a car. 'Cause I totaled it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Kids/Family, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55
Series: J.D. & Mollie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1785 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: "Know what I learned?"

lol - that was adorable. and so is john krasinski! man i love him so much, if he'd just come be a marionette for me everyday or i could live in jimmy kimmel's house (so he could me my neighbor) i'd be just dandy.

and really, this chapter was awesome. please keep going just for the sake of john krasinski's gorgeous hands! lol.

really, i'm not THAT obsessed with him, i just have the strongest possible admiration.... you know...lol

Author's Response: this was just a little oneshot... i am working on another story right now... almost finished too!

Summary: Jim & Pam welcome their daughter into the world.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Other, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Kids/Family, Married, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: J.D. & Mollie
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4563 Read Count: 19848 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Welcome

awww, that was so sweet - great job, and good idea to break the last chapter where you did! this was so well written - J.D. was adorable and so gentle with his kiss!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Labor Of Love

great chapter!

okay, good that's over with - I LOVED THE DELETED SCENE!!! the kiss was so cute, but what was with the 'no not in front of the baby' comment! stupid jim, have they kissed once since the wedding??? i think not. anyway, great chapter! i'm reading the next now! i love calm pam, and mrs. h's lines are so funny! 'nah, i don't feel like playing with j.d. - take him with you while you have a baby!'

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Welcome

Aww, this is so cute! Have I read this chapter already, it seems so familiar? Did you have to repost it? Anyways, this was great! Nice job!

Author's Response: i had to re-post it. i tried to make some edits to it, but when i hit "preview", it deleted it :o(

Reverie by Dedeen Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 11
Summary: Jim re-lives some past angst. Season 6 fluff included. Jim's POV
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3630 Read Count: 3516 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow, that was really interesting at the beginning for lack of a better word! i liked it a lot, and this was a very unused topic, congrats for coming up with something new! great job, this was very well written!

Author's Response: This was definitely a different topic. I don't know why, but I'm always leaning towards "different" ideas. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary: NBC.com was kind enough to give us the 12 Days of Office Christmas.  I just riffed a little on Jim and Pam's day, after a few little birdies requested (with puppies, and kitties, and Johns) that I do so.  Thanks, ladies!  You are masters of persuasion. 
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2498 Read Count: 2733 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so cute. great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it!!!

Summary: Jim sends Pam on a scavenger hunt
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 836 Read Count: 1540 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Scavenger Hunt

Lol, this was really cute. I love the idea! I do have a little critique though. The third sentence, last work I think should be 'work' rather than 'worked'. Some of the sentences seemed a little abrupt like the American Idol one - I also would have loved to have seen this expanded a bit, but I'm not sure there's enough for a second chapter.

Sorry to sound so negative, I hate to critique so much when things are posted, but hey, I think we're supposed it give friendly comments in the reviews every once in a while. I guess they say it makes us better writers.

I loved Elaine and Pam's idea to call a friend, that was great!

Author's Response:

You know what, I read that sentence a thousand times after this comment, and couldn't figure out what you meant by worked/work. It took me searching for the phrase to find it. I guess I just kept reading what I wanted to read instead of what was actually written. And the AI comment, I tried as I might to expand it, even just a second sentence, but I never liked what I came up with.

Thanks for the review!

Fine by LoveFool Rated: MA [Reviews - 70] 34
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam are faced with the uncertainty of a future at Dunder-Mifflin. This is about the problems this might occur for our favorite newlyweds under these circumstances. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Inner Monologue, Married, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13878 Read Count: 18745 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2010
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

wow, jim's dad is great! this was a really sad chapter, especially for pam, and i do think gerald is right, women fill in the blanks! i sure do! anyway, i can't wait to see how this plays out, i'm really excited about the conversation they're bound to have! and really, what is it with the heart and question mark next to karen's name?... great story, keep going!

Author's Response: you will find out soon! I'm glad you thought Gerald was right! He was fun to write.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Wow, that was amazing! You are so good at touching at all the possible elements of emotion that Jim and Pam have in their relationship. Great job, this was really good. I'm looking forwards to seeing how you continue this!

Author's Response: Thanks so much PamelaMorganHalpert I hope you're handling all this stress well!  haha! I love your name.  

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Part 4

Oh my god, I just went from hating the word 'fine' so much (in chapters 1 and 2) to having never heard a more perfect syllable. That was amazing chapter! Fantastic! This was a wonderful story, and what a *happy* ending... hehe...

Author's Response: Glad I could change your opinion of that little word!  This was so much fun. I'm glad you had fun too! 

hearts beating by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 11
Summary: She laughs softly and says, “So is your heart going to burst?”

Jim/Pam post wedding fluffy things.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 602 Read Count: 3798 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2009 Updated: December 30, 2009
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was beautiful, I love how this all revolves around the heartbeat. What a sweet idea, and this really worked having so much of their relationship revolve around one aspect. Great job!

Summary: "Pam always thought dying was supposed to be a peaceful transition from the real world to a place of light and beauty. She thought that she would die an old woman in the arms of her husband, not right after hearing her child cry for the first time."


Pam knows she needs to move on after death but can't bring herself to leave behind her motherless daughter and heartbroken, grieving husband.



Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6700 Read Count: 12260 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2010 Updated: March 07, 2010
Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lace Curtains in Heaven

Oh my god, that's so sad! I really like this story though, and the idea is wonderful. It's so beautifully written, and heartbreaking all at once. What a combination! For some reason I had originally thought this was about ANGELA wearing Keds, but I'm quite wrong! I'll keep reading right now!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Paintings Among Gravestones

Wow, another beautiful chapter! This was so sad, yet again and for lack of a better word. I was at a funeral today, too, but not at the burial - but really, what a coincidence that I would be reading a story about funerals today! I'm just fortunate that my godfather died of cancer at 75 versus Pam dying at probably 30 from childbirth. What a difference. Anyway, this is a wonderful story, and I can't wait to see how you continue. I love all the flashbacks - keep them up!