Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
10 oh my god. well then. even though you've already written the story i can promise you a review every time the chapter includes some PAM AND JIM action! that seems fair enough...
10 lol! this is great! i love this, and it's so nice to see the little bit of jim/pam lust thrown in for good measure! great idea, amazing job!
a little add on, about 5 minutes later. for some reason MTT didn't let me review originally, and i found some really good looking stories to read after i was trying to get back to this. always good times here at MTT, never the question, what to read next. oh well. hopefully this posts now and i'll keep reading!
10 oh my god. what little karen knows about jim and pam! that would be very interesting, had jim and pam been engaged before... i think that would be a good story idea - maybe you could try it sometime. however nobody would like reading about their break up. that would just just be depressing. now that gets me thinking, has there every been a story here at MTT where jim and pam ever broke up??? i'm very curious now. oh well.
anyway, great chapter, as always these are hilarious and so well done!
lol - gotta love michael's reaction to the birthday cards! what a great story, and so many chapters! i love it!
adorable! that's all i've got for you!
It's amazing the magic a simple Valentine's Day card can hold. Throw in a troubled relationship and a good snowfall, and it's a holiday to remember.10 oh my... (audible squeal, then regaining a sense of composure) that was very nice.... seriously. :) i loved the turn of events, very well done time4moxie! i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! i really enjoyed how this was so similar to the job, only on valentine's day - but similar events occurred, it you know what i mean :)
10 oh my god - that was amazing. great movie choice, i love the old play a freaky movie so your girlfriend starts crawling closer and closer. lol! great story, so much fun to read, and the ending was perfect! nice touches of humor with the romance, and of course the little spits of anger. seriously, this was amazing!
At Michael’s infamous 80’s party, Jim discovers that Pam is, in fact, a very dorky dancer. 10 Oh my god that was hilarious! I can perfectly picture all of that, amazing job! So great!
10 Oh my god! That was so good! I don't think I've ever read anything on this subject, but this was amazing! Very well written and I love the bitter honesty and truth with the little bits of happiness added in for good measure. Fantastic job and this needs to go in my favorites!
I'd really try to give you an eleven if I could, but I just don't know if that's possible... sorry!
Pam calls Jim to warn him about Roy. Takes place immediately after Cocktails.10 Wow, you are really good at this stuff! I'm officially in love with your brain and the fact that your mind writes the stuff I want to read without me even begging.
Great job, and this was perfect!
The aftermath of Cocktails (NOT part of my AU universe).
oh my goodness. that's so intense! i really liked it, and i think you did a FANTASTIC job with getting describing her emotions, roy's actions, and everything. a great chapter, and it seemed really realistic - just thought you might like to know.
yay jim! that sounded a lot like karen, just wanted to point that out. i just realized i've read this story before, but it's good enough to read again!
oh my god! that was adorable! now i'm speechless. that was so great! hydrogen peroxide. if jim was anyone else we'd think he was stupid, but he's jim, so we just have to laugh and love him more!
please keep going. i'd love to see how pam's planning on sharing this lovely piece of info with him. maybe a wedding slideshow, perhaps?!?!
Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. OH MY GOD. I WAS ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THERE. MY JAW DROPPED, I THINK. WOW. SORRY ABOUT THE caps lock.
wow. wowy wow wow! god, that was intense. but so perfect. i love that line. okay, but i'll still love you tomorrow. i don't think i've read anything more perfect.
sorry, i'm blabbering, because i'm reeling in the awesomeness of this. this chapter was an awesome blossom, extra awesome. chessy but true.
i'll keep reading...
wow, you got the characters' perspective, dialog, everything down pat. congrats on that... i just love this story so much, and how jim is so clearly unhappy in his relationship. it's all so realistic, i'm just reeling at how impressed i am! i only worry that it might be harder for jim to tell pam how he feels now, because he needs to forget all he learned on irc or else he could get in trouble with pam for not saying the right things... oh well. can't wait to see what happens. and i probably won't review anymore. just realize i love this story and i promise i'll read the whole thing!
oh my god this is good! found this story in the top tens section - i think for most read... very impressive. love this story, great idea!
10 i'll just leave you with a 'NICE' - kevin style.
8 great end to such a fun story. nice job brokenloon, and i can't wait to read 'the third art show' and after that more of your stories. great job with this!
10 wow, this is a great idea for a story. i love seeing pam in such a different light, her insecurities, and finally something she's excited and proud about. also, very nicely written, absolutely typo-free, and smoothly done.
i like the breakup, and how it gets tied into the art show. finally they're done with each other! can't wait to see what happens between our favorite couple! lastly, i love how you don't spend too much time on one issue, and go only into the necessary amount of detail, not too much or too little. just right. i love the pace of this story too! nothing but love for this chapter!
10 whew. that was interesting. i do find it a little unrealistic that they'd choose the applebees parking lot as the location for their first time. i mean seriously, this is jim and pam, they deserve the best. but yet again, they always do the unexpected. it's all good.
great job with this chapter, loved the part with the art show, very well done!
Post "Ben Franklin," pre "Phyllis's Wedding." AU in the sense that...well, things go differently here between Jim and Pam than they went on the show.
This is what I'd wish for.
Also - this is a completed story.
awwwww! that was a great mini-story! nice job!
Pam comes clean at the Laudromat, which in case you didn't know is quite the hotbed of romance. :) Post-Cocktails fic.
oh my god, i loved that so much. it was just so comforting to see jim and pam go from havoc to understanding in such a short amount of time - without one of them losing it - too much! great job xoxoxo!
WOW! WOW! WOW! that was amazing - i loved it so much. great job for 2 hours! please keep going!