Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: January 02, 2023
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So this is delightful! Sometimes we just need someone to push us and that happens here big time. It's one hundred percent believable that Pam would have all those fears and doubts about Jim. Why she would chicken out on contacting him. She's scared, like all of her courage got used up in calling off the wedding. Yet she still has some left, it just needs to be drawn out. Jan giving her that excuse fits the bill nicely.
And then Jim is delighted to see her. As if her being there sparked something alive again and he can't help but respond to it. Pam had the courage to show up and ask him out. Clearly all lights are green and he wisely hits the gas.
I kinda feel a little bad for Karen, but better she find out this way than get sucked into being used as a shield for Jim's broken heart.
Great job with this one. I like it a lot.
Author's Response:
In this story, what was clear to me was that things would be simple. If Pam was given a chance, she would take it, and if Jim met Pam, and understood what an effort it was for her to have come to him, he would take her in with no problem. As if nothing had happened.
Thanks for your lovely comment.