Reviewer: AuroraKat83 Signed 1
Date: December 16, 2021
Title: Chapter 5: Tuesday 26 December 2006
This was such a good read! You did a really great job with Jim and Pam's argument. Most stories don't have them really hash it out like that, we dont get to see them so angry but you showed that and ah *Chef's kiss* it was so great! I'm glad Karen got her chance to let Jim know how she felt, too. She didn't let him off the hook easily. Though I'll always root for Jim and Pam when it comes to the part where Karen and him break up, it's great to see her "Not leave quietly" if you will. A jellybean for you! Loved it :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I enjoyed writing the argument. I wanted to present how the unaddressed emotions and actions built up and it'd have to take them cooling off before they can think coherently. As for Karen, she got the short end of the stick, so writing her confronting Jim and him leading her on was good, but at least in this case since it's early in their relationship and neither are in denial.
Thanks for the review!