Reviewer: MrsKHalpert Signed 1
Date: October 23, 2022
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Well I'm an idiot. I didn't realise this wasn't not a one shot, so I'm really happy to see it's not over yet!
Really liked that we got to see what went down at Athlead (loved your little reminder at the end, thank you for that!) and how everyone reacted. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! You’re not an idiot, I never made it clear that there’d be more to come.
Glad you appreciate the end note, it even helps me keep track of who’s who from what little we’ve seen of Athlead. I figured there’d be mixed feelings on the matter of Jim leaving, with even Darryl wondering why he’d ever want to leave.
Thanks for the review!