What if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?I absolutely love the last line. So perfect. The writing of their emotions into the letter seems so freeing and liberating. It feels very 'them' to do that. I love love love it. Can't wait to see what Pammy has in story :) Oh and one little thing, I think in this sentence the first part should be his not he:
He tongue is stuck in the corner of his mouth...
This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.
I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.
haha, Love it larrymcg! Poor Creed. He brings it on himself sometimes. I love that there's a pool at Creed' other funeral. *sigh* So great. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it.
9 Forget some stars in hopes I won't get punched in the eye this time :)
I sometimes like to think that I’m his type.
Who doesn't like to think that Phyllis?
Hee, I'm so glad you added in that bit in Dwight's! Get ready to sign your death certificates people. Which would be hard if you're dead..... oh shoot.....
“I bet Jim’s great in bed too,” she finished, nodding
I think you'll have a hard time finding someone who disagrees with ya there Kel ;)
Stanley! Puh-lease. Ha! Too cool for school, I see.
Andy is not equivalent to Big Tuna. no way, no how, man. Michael totally is their third wheel too.
Kudos on the name!!! So good. I love the little bits of action too, they really help make it flow better together. Gives a great visual too :) Great job BS! Hope to see more soon!!!
PS I'm SO glad you won't punch me in the tooth (or eye!) anytime soon! I would expect so since I wrote such a long review :)
I will never punch you in the tooth, ever! UNless you forget the stars....then I might...JK!!!!
THanks for reading and betaing and helping me out! I appreciate it! Now, let's get some more people to read it!!!
The kid?
Oh you rock. I love how Kelly doens't realize that Toby was talking about her and not just talking about people.
And Jim's is so cute!! *hee* it's so laced with meaning. And Michael. Definitely not the uh.... bigger man.
I can't believe you didn't even throw in one "Ryans new position" joke. No Kevin giggle or Michael snort or anything! Oh well. It still rocks my socks!! :) Great job my dear!
I totally forgot about the Ryan's position joke!!! Oops! I should have totally put that in there....Gah...you should have reminded me, beta! What am I going to do with you???!
Thanks for reading and reviewing this even though you've already read it and beta'ed it. It means alot....
Sweet dreams...
Angela: “The Lord‘s wrath….and, the group of Mexicans that moved in down the street from me.”
Ha!
Jim: “Introducing myself to Dwight Schrute on my first day of work here.”
Aww. you know you love him Jim!and I love Michael's rambling in the l ast one. *sigh* you write these charactesr like they're your own!! Lovely! It's great b/c I hardly remember reading these over so it's like second drink!
Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.“Yeah. I think it is.”
She doesn’t say anything else, just closes the space between us, with her arms around my waist and her head lying gently on my chest.
So sad, but so good. Gah. NOw works for me too. For a new chapter. I love this premise! And your 1st ch is packed with awesome (it's sad but funny but somewhat hopeful yet bittersweet) Can't wait to see where they all go!
Oh I'm so happy you updated this!
...like after Michael asks her to spend the afternoon researching the difference between Diet Coke and Coke Zero.
Oh I've totally been at work with projects like this! Love it.
And the last part about how they fall asleep together and gah, it's just great. I hope we get the last installment sooner than later ;)
"He approached her desk with a look that she had seen in his eyes a thousand times before. Though somehow, this time, she knew that it was going to be more trouble than usual for her."
This story has nothing to do with the poem by Christopher Marlowe. In case you were worried. ;)
Last month, the phrase had meant, “Meet me in the supply closet in the next ten minutes” since somehow she had been the one to keep the condoms in her desk
Ha. Thsoe two. Can I just say I love the Pam you have written here? It totally would make sense she'd be freaked out to get a key sans explanation from Jim. And about teh whole past with Roy and getting bored. It fits! Great insight there! And I can see Jim being (obviously) upset at the end but then Pam dangling the key. Ah. So good. You pretty much rock at life :)
And athough I was sad it wasn't a Computers update.... I love it just the same!
She loved the nights that he came over to her apartment and let her lay between his legs as they sat on the sofa and watched a movie. He would wrap his arms around her waist
Too bad this show is on NBC. Such a great moment there. *sigh*
Lovely job!
PS Any warning e-mails my way soon? *hint hint* Haha no pressure tho :)
Thank you so much! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I know I probably could have written the chapter in more detail, but the way that I've been writing things lately, I'll start them and then lose my train of thought and never finish them. So I made this as simple as possible and hoped for the best.
I'm still working my way through the next chapter of Computers, though I'm getting close. Every little push that I get from someone pushes me a little further. I really am almost done, but I'm at a point that requires a lot of insight and unfortunately, I keep getting sidetracked (and I want this chapter to rock. :) Soon! Soon! I'll go work on it right now, haha.I loved this! So great. Your characterizations were so genuine and that kiss! Whew. Can you plesae become a writer and make that happen on the show? Pretty please? on emillion schrute bucks and my eternal gratitude if you do.
And the TH are awesome. Kev, Kev, Kev.
Anyways. This was aweosme! Great job :)
Weekends with Jim can be a terrible distraction on Monday.
Oh a truckload? That should last like a week. :) hehe. And don't worry I love the food in stories haah, so keep it going.
Oh and I think I'm having some issues.... and only conditioning of the Halpert kind will be the cure. May take many treatments and therapy sessions to get normal again.........
Lovely job!! love it sweetpea ;)
Every single thing about you…is beautiful
*giggles and blushes as she slinks away from the computer*
I thought Phyllis’ eyes were going to bulge out of her head
Along with all the JK fangirls everywhere! I knew I loved Phyllis
So cute! I heart it :) great job
lisahoo issued a request for post-Fun Run smut. I'm breaking my self-imposed ban on posting this. See what you've made me do?
"Fancy meeting you here, Beesly."
I love this phrase!
And I'd like to believe that this happens before the part when Pam stares and then smirks to herself before Angeal talks to her. And she's reliving this moment when she is smiling at Jim. Yes....
And the last paragraph????? Whew.
And congrats on no food in a fic!!! Hahahha (i'm teasing) But this was so great sweetpea! So cute but hot. Lovely ;)
LOL! I should have had Jim eating a donut or something when he walked into the supply closet! I love that smile from Pam! Such a sweet moment. Thanks so much for the review.
MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.
Story now complete.
9 You automatically win for UWEC references but also becasue this story rocks :) Can't wait to see more.
And now i've reviewed like too many times to count. I promise I'm not that much of a stalker :)
oh yeah. I love the little bits that show us that it really is Jim and Pam. I can't wait to see how this will be revealed! *writhes hands in anticipation* great job yet again !!
Oh and I def. agree that Jim just texted Pam back at Diwali and we just never saw it. I am a firm believer in this theory :)
6. The sun will come up tomorrow.
Poor Jim. That sentence broke my heart.
Ooh interesting. What will Jim say when Pam spills her guts about getting shot done..... intriguing. Hee. :) I love this story. It's so great and I'm truly interested in seeing how it all pans out. Your Jim/Pam friendship is so true. And I love the 'lies i've told pam' e-mails Jim sends to himself as a kind of reminder of everything that he's being doing wrong and whatnot. I wonder how long that list would be if Jim made one in his real.... ficitonal life?
Stopping rambling now to say great chapter and as always, can't wait for more :D It's seriously like a drug addiction.
Gah. Everytime I see you update I get extremely excited (duh) and by the end i'm even more excited for the next chapter (that doesn't exist yet heh) Poor Pam for having bad days a work (trust me, I know how that goes) and I'm glad she finally found out about the 'yes' from Jim.
THe ending? So..... cliffhanger-ish. Gah *throws hands in air like Dwight in BF*
Can't wait for more (which is like the most obvious statment ever.... but whatever)
TeamJim: I love you too, Pam. I'm just afraid it isn't enough
gah! You know just how to rip my heart out don't you? heh. This was so.... hot but heartbreaking? if that makessense? I loved how they basically have figured it out now but it's just happened in a subtle way instead of like this huge dramatic reveal. Anyways, lovely as usual! :)
gah. Jim leaving? His e-mail doesn't work?
I love this chapter b/c it truly makes it seem that if the office characters were real life documentary what would be happening. people would be mad and frustrated if their lives were being exploited like this.
I know it's obvious that I want mroe..... but it still makes me excited every time I get an e-mail saying there's a new OE. I'm so intrigued by this! can't wait to see how ti allpans out. *awaits patiently*
50 ooh great. Who wouldn't love their lunches made by Jim?
I'm interested to see what Leikha is making Jim do for Pam.... *dreams of athe possibilities*
Lovely chapter :)
proving that those gigantic purses are good for something, even if the little ones are cuter).
Not only is this hilarious Kelly commentary, it's SO true!! haha.
And I love your Pam/Kelly relationship. Becasue as annoying as Pam may find Kelly I think she does like her as a friend. And yay for Kelly dating Darryl! Haha Love it! :) Great job!
Her first day at Dunder Mifflin wasn't the first time they'd met. Mostly AU with perhaps a bit of S2 or S3-related stuff...I haven't really planned it out yet though. Oh, and the title of the story is also the title of an old Zombies song.
Also, I'm new to this stuff so if I've mislabeled anything, please let me know! I don't even know what most of the labels mean. :-S
aw Poor Jim :(
Kids can be so mean sometimes. I'm intrigued, hope you continue.
Thanks for the kind comment. I've got a lot in my head right now and hopefully I'll update quicker than a week this time.
And I agree...kids are jerks. Also, most adults are too. Have a nice day, and thanks for reading! :)
Post-Benihana Christmas fic!
Remember when Jim and Pam convinced Dwight that a CIA helicopter would pick him up on the roof? Well, neither of them could resist showing up that night to see the prank to it's conclusion.
“So, Halpert… where’s my present?” she asks.
Jim feels a sudden twisting in his gut, and he stutters for some sort of an excuse.
Gah! I also loved when Pam is teasing Jim about knowing Dwights number by heart. I love that this is what we don't see on ABC and can we just assume this is what happens? Please? :D And the ending? They've def. got to go now. Love it!! I'm so glad you're writing again shan! Let me know if you ever need help ;) Great job and I can't wait to see more!
Well as long as you'll burst out into joyful song, I guess I'll leave a review....
But only because of a good song. Like ode to joy perhaps? haha. JK.
So. You already know how much I heart this and all that jazz so really I'm just reiterating the fact that you pretty much just rock at life and I love this story and I can't wait for more (even tho I feel special and have read more than others..... still!)
So to recap a) I'm lame b) You rock. c) can't wait for more :)
/end rambling.
aw I was halfway done reading the e-mail you sent and then I see you updated! Silies :) Oh well, I do love it!!
And this Tim Galpert guy sounds like quite the character! Haha I can see Jim doing taht to Andy. And Andy with crazy hair and piercings? That's hilarious!
And i like the addition of the Karen call.
we need to try out that new sofa
TWSS.
Oooooooh and I cant' wait to see what happens on Pam's house! Gah. Well. Sory about your midterm :( Tests are NO fun my friend. If it makes you feel better, I have to write 15 lesson plans for next week. Lame. Let's say 'boo school, yay office fic'! That's what I say.
Love love love it and don't feel like you can't write amazing stuff b/c you do!!!!!!!!!! Trust me :) I know :) haaha
awww! I suck! Sorry, I just got out of that midterm and I was like, I need to just post this thing and get it out of my head. lol. Plus, you were the person to read my very first draft of ch.3, so I felt like you already did a lot :)
Lesson plans. They were the bane of my existence when I first started writing them, and now they flow from the fingertips like nothin'. You'll get super good at it.
I have a bunch of random ideas for chapter 4, so you can expect an email tomorrowish :)