Penname: desert island Real name:
Member Since: January 15, 2007

Bio:
I like to avoid my job as an editor by reading anything related to The Office.
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Reviews by desert island
Summary: A first date, and a second chance for two people who never got much of a first chance.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13580 Read Count: 30857 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2007 Updated: July 16, 2007
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Date: June 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hey, It's Good To Be Back Home Again

Can I just say how much I love the appendix with map and apartment info!? Makes this well written story even better.
Am really enjoying this. It feels real and in character. Looking forward to teh date.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great and thoughtful review.  I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 126538 ePub Downloads: 51
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
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Date: June 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Intricate lace

Intricate lace... that's really beautiful. And Pam's story about the paints made me want to cry!
Loving this!

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Date: July 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Delicate and Fragile

Oh, that chapter was pretty exciting itself.
Loved both Jim and Pam's inner thoughts. Really spot on characterization.
And Mark was hilariously awesome!
Looking forward to more exciting things!

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Date: July 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Red light, Green light

Oh! Red light. So sad for Jim.
Really well done. Just like Pam to run away... she needs some time to think.

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Date: July 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Diners and Dreams

Wow. I found myself holding my breath through the end there. Just wow. Intense. And awesome. Loved Mindy. And Mark's read of Pam and Pam's read of Mark. Good stuff.

Author's Response: thank you!

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Date: July 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts

Buckle up? Like for a bumpy ride? I am excited for this ride, but a tad scared too... and am looking forward to see what you have in store.
That was such a fun and happy chapter. I loved all their interactions in the middle of the crowd. And I love your Mark. Nice work!

Author's Response: a little bumpy, yeah.  But don't worry cause it'll be ok lol.  Glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: New and different.

Pretty heavy, but my vote goes with 'loved it.'  As always, well done.  I just love your Mark so much especially his interaction and relationship with Pam.  

Author's Response: thank you for the vote.  I love Mark too.

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Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Mom and Muhammad Ali

Every chapter I read, i think the same things: 1. This is insanely gorgeously written. 2. I love your Mark so much! He is perfection. Hilarious perfection.
It is so nice how you emphasize that Pam likes who Jim sees her as, and the person that he makes her be (okay, you explain it so much more beautifully). It is just so true to these characters and just really lovely.
This story is a great combination of serious and fluffy. Well done!

Author's Response: thank you!!!! yeah I thought it was a really interesting idea to sort of write about the pedestal that Jim has Pam on, but write it in a positive way so that it helps her grow and try to live up to that.  Anyway, I digress, but thank you.

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Date: July 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Stories and Pam

Oh, yay! So good.
That was such a fulfilling ending to such a wonderful story. Seriously great.
Thanks so much!

Author's Response: no thank YOU.  lol seriously though thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Pam is Jim's houseguest for a few days. Smut ensues.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12154 Read Count: 55762 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2007 Updated: June 24, 2007
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Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Con el Dedo (beruco)

That was quite well done! Perfectly in character, and well... wow.

Summary: Even when he's got the girl, sometimes Jim finds himself being laughed at by the Fates....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11069 Read Count: 24166 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2007 Updated: June 25, 2007
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Date: June 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Labor Day Weekend

Oh, poor Jim! Looking forward to Jim's future thwarted attempts and his one success.
I love that Jim has a ring so quickly. I think this is just how he would act!

Author's Response:

hee - me too!  He's a man on a mission.  :-)

Thanks for the review! 

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Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: All in Good Time

I was really saddened by Jim's attempts... as he continued to fail, I just got sadder and sadder for him. I love how you had so much hope and happiness but with a bit of frustration.
And the end made all the frustration worth it. Nice work!

Author's Response: Sorry there was so much happening against Jim - but at least he did figure it all out in the end.  :-)  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!!

Summary: Pam and Jim learn why sex in the shower can be dangerous.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Married, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: The Sexual Misadventures of Pam and Jim
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5680 Read Count: 8044 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2007 Updated: July 30, 2007
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Date: July 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: The Truth About Trips to the ER

That was awesomely cute. Really glad you finished it! I think a series is a great idea. Would be a lot of fun!

Author's Response: Great name, desert island!  I think that the series would be fun, well maybe it wouldn't be fun for pam and Jim.  But in the end I could make it worth their while.  Thanks for the kind review and thanks for being patient with me taking so long to finish.

Summary: A little reworking of The Merger, in which everyone (that we care about) ends up a lot happier.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3601 Read Count: 4921 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2007 Updated: June 22, 2007
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Date: June 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. Perfect reworking of the ep (and added good stuff afterwards) with original events.
I just love that Pam wore matching underwear and then told Jim and was embarrassed. And when he ignored the IMs, so perfect because I think he would have done that that day. But with a little persistence from Pam he gave in. And eventually got what he wanted. Nice work!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes art captures life. Sometimes life imitates art. And sometimes that line between art and life becomes a little blurry.

 


Categories: Past
Characters: Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7882 Read Count: 11472 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
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Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Pens and Pencils

I just discovered this and think this forst chapter here is really excellent. The portrait is a really nice metaphor for Pam's life.
Well done losing your creative writing virginity! It usually isn't so good your first time!

Author's Response: Thanks desert island!  Yes, it may have been my first time, but it was still awkward and I was nervous, but I it was also exuberant and left me wanting more.  (Oh gosh, I've got to stop. )

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Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Blank Paper and Charcoal

'I'll start with myself.' Really nice. I love that she's determined yet insecure.

Author's Response: Thanks again desert island!!

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Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Watercolor and Negative Space

She completely understands about the negative space... hmmm. I wonder what she will do with this newfound understanding...
'She felt herself becoming braver as she learned that the attention was not something to fear, that it could, indeed, be helpful. ' I think this is really true of Pam. Nice work.

Author's Response: Oh, there are lots of things she can do.  :)  Thanks for the review!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Pre “The Job”… actually, pre a lot of stuff. Set sometime in Season Three, I guess.

Pam decides to take matters into her own hands.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6290 Read Count: 43980 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2007 Updated: September 08, 2007
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Date: June 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: New Trust

I personally believe this is just screaming for a chapter 2. You can't leave us hanging like that!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah, it really does end on a cliffhanger. Will try to write more soon.

Summary:

The story of Jim as a father and the legacy he leaves behind. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Married
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3281 Read Count: 2249 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2007 Updated: June 27, 2007
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Date: June 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Things We Leave Behind

Very epic while being very detailed. I really liked the sadness because it was mixed in with happiness. Nice job!

Summary: Past Featured Story"So, Jim," she started, setting the empty can back down on the table as she returned his cup to him. "Have you ever done drugs?" She leaned in towards him for even more emphasis. She grinned widely at him before sitting back in her chair. [Spoilers up to and including Drug Testing for part one. Part two and beyond set in an AU-version of season 4.]
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Drug Use/Abuse, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7511 Read Count: 17848 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2007 Updated: July 13, 2007
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Date: June 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: 11:30 on a Saturday night

This is hilarious. I love it. I could so see this scene unfolding. Nice work!
Would love to read more.

Author's Response: :D Thank you! Should have the third part up sometime next week.

Summary: "She tried to think of a time that she had totally agreed with anything that Ryan had ever said to her, but nothing came to mind." Kelly/Andy. Oneshot.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Andy, Kelly, Kelly/Other, Ryan, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1420 Read Count: 2228 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2007 Updated: June 29, 2007
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Date: June 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great. I love me some Kandy! really cute. Great detail that they went to TRL and H&M and that he bought her the dress! I love that. ANd a little added bonus of the Jim and Pam wedding. Happiness for all!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Two moments when Pam and Jim get together. Written in response to the 55 word challenge.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121 Read Count: 5752 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
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Date: June 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooo! That last conversation was perfection.

Author's Response: Why, thanks. So glad it worked for you, desert island.

Flaccid by time4moxie Rated: K+ [Reviews - 24] 9
Summary: A revealing conversation in response to the 55 challenge.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 3907 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2007
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Date: June 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hahaha. Too funny. I just laughed out loud and had to explain why to the roommates. I'd say that means I liked it.

Author's Response: Yay - so glad it made you laugh (even if your roommates are now convinced you're nuts)!

Summary: Jim/Pam decide that a little healing is necessary. Submitted for the 55 Word Challenge

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58 Read Count: 2339 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2007 Updated: July 01, 2007
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Date: July 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha. Love it. Very fun!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim passes on the family tradition in 55 words
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: Daddy Jim, 55
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 426 Read Count: 35979 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2007 Updated: May 02, 2008
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Date: July 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: 275

Hilarious! Love this! Go Pam!

Author's Response: :-D