Penname: Crystalized Real name: Crystal
Member Since: February 07, 2007

Bio:
I'm turning 30 this year, a single gal in L.A. I really enjoy reading well written fan fiction like that found here on MTT. Jim and Pam are wonderful characters to play with because they have so many flaws, but are still enjoyable and nice people.
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Reviews by Crystalized
Summary:

What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas.

Sort of.

AU set in season 3


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6779 Read Count: 12917 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: June 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

Nooooo! I am going to kill you for real. But seriously, you have to finish this now, promise??

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: July 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: If you want me, you better hurry. I won't wait

YAY!!! I mean...YAY!!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: July 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: So you better move fast

LOVE IT! Sorry, that's as eloquent as I'm getting! Woo!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Don't take this the wrong way, but... you should go for that job.

What would have happened if Jim had taken that job in Maryland after all? Season Two angst - spoilers for Halloween through Email Surveillance, then goes AU from there.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23454 Read Count: 54216 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: September 17, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: June 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: you left me hanging from a thread we once swung from together

This is a very nice story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words, Crystalized.  I'm glad you like it. 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: August 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: but we have not hit the ground, doesn't mean we're not still falling

Your imagery is really terrific. This is a wonderful chapter and what a chapter ending!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind review, Crystalized

Summary: Occurring during the summer between season 3 and 4:
Pam doesn't change after she gets home and Jim has a little 'moment'.
Categories: Past, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1709 Read Count: 6063 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2008 Updated: June 22, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: June 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Work Clothes

Very sexy and hot!

Summary: Pam Beesly, Associate Producer of the reality show “The Office,” meets Dunder Mifflin Scranton salesman Jim Halpert. An AU retelling of season one. Rated T
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5884 Read Count: 15239 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2008 Updated: December 11, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: The Alliance

I like this story - very clever. But how long can she realistically resist the Halpert charm? Give in, Pam! That can be the 'angle' for the Stanford branch.

Author's Response: well, i don't know how "real" pam (er, the pam in the documentary we know, not the 'pam' in this fic - yikes, confusing) spent so many years not jumping jim -- but you know, people are cut from a different cloth, etc ;)  anyway, you'll know soon enough where we're going... thanks for the feedback!

Summary: What if Jim answered Pam's text from "Diwali"?  This is an AU look at what have might happened if, in his drunkeness, Jim texted her back. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7459 Read Count: 17809 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: July 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, first of all, love this first chapter and look forward to the rest. Second, I have seriously been looking to my Barenaked Ladies greatest hits CD all day - is the title in any way a reference to the song "Call and Answer"? Because if not it is a crazy accidental parallel:
http://www.stlyrics.com/lyrics/felicityvol2/callandanswer.htm
Thanks for the story. I really like the point about guys getting over people they were actually dating easier than Jim's situation.

Author's Response:

crystalized, I'm glad you like the line about the other guys.  I really loved that line and you're the only one to mention it.  But I do think he has to wonder why he can't move on.  I've done that anyway, so maybe I'm projecting. 

And yes, I totally forgot to credit them, which I will fix, but it is an homage to the Barenaked Ladies.  So, is this an appropriate time to show my love for all things Barenaked Chicks....LOVE THEM.  Break Your Heart is easily one of the most gut wrenching songs ever.   Ok, I'll stop now. :-)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: July 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ooh, knife to the gut!! yowser. but I think it was good for them.
"I hear your voice in my head all day like I’m freaking insane." I can hear drunkjim saying this so clearly.

Author's Response: Oh my ....put the knife down!  I liked that line too, glad you did.  Thanks for hanging in there.  It does get better from here....or at least happier.

Gifts by Vampiric Blood Rated: K [Reviews - 141] 54
Summary:

It's been three years since Jim accepted the promotion to New York.  After two years of silence, Pam sends Jim a gift.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11817 Read Count: 35871 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: October 16, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: August 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Wonderful Life

My thoughts are... I want more!! What is Jim going to do??

Author's Response: Not telling yet!  Next chapter will be up in a day or so.  Thanks for the note, Crystalized.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: August 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: What Might Have Been

I really love this story and can't wait to learn what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: An Intensely Personal Exploration

I am so excited!! Pam will be so shocked!

Yay to getting more of this one and CC :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized!  Yep, Pam will be shocked!  I was pretty excited to finally get another chapter up, too.  Thanks for sharing the excitement with me.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: October 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Finally

What can I say? Love it. Great ending, I can see them both standing on the stoop perfectly, ready to start another chapter of their lives. Thanks and look forward to more CC now (no pressure) ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked the ending.  Cardiac Care will start up again ... have to get back into that groove!

Summary:

He says he’s never loved her more than he does today, the first day she’s not wearing matching underwear.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2344 Read Count: 5816 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: September 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Car Crash Underwear

This is so lovely. Very in character and great moments that you've captured. It's very "slice o' life" - good job!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much Crystalized. I\'m so pleased you find this in character, I did worry the excessive fluff might just take over. :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam, Jim, a first date and lots of alcohol.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3779 Read Count: 11023 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2008 Updated: September 20, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

Very natural dialougue and I adore drunk Jim and Pam. Nice story! Thanks for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: Dialogue is one thing that\'s really important to me. I find myself writing and rewriting lines until they sound just right, so I\'m glad you thought it was natural. And I adore drunk Pam and Jim too. They\'re fun to write.

Summary: So, I'm re-watching S3 and hating how many missed opportunities there were. This will be a series of "what-if" alternatives which would have spared us some of the S3 angst.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4536 Read Count: 8536 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: September 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Return

Oh, very nice chapter! I am enjoying these "what ifs". Lovely last paragraph!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Sometimes I think I end this a bit too abruptly, but I\'m glad you enjoyed the ending. :)

Got Me by bashert Rated: T [Reviews - 28] 18
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost- "Weight Loss."

I'm jumping on the happy bandwagon.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 884 Read Count: 6924 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2008 Updated: September 27, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I can hear your heartbeat where I lay my head

Awwwwwwwwwwwww. Lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured StoryS3 AU. She twists the gold band on her finger around and around. She waits to feel regret or guilt or something else besides this buzzing excitement.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4207 Read Count: 5897 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Breathtaking. Wow.

Summary:

Please forgive me for this title. I shouldn't be posting at 12:37 a.m....it makes me name things really stupidly.  If you can come up with a better title PLEASE feel free to call it that in your mind.

My own little missing scene -- spoilers through Customer Survey

 

Don't own these characters, just admire them from afar. I mean no disrespect to NBC, the writers, actors, or any of those fine folks. This is just for fun. :-)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 808 Read Count: 4807 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bluetooth Blues

Great job, and I now totally believe this conversation took place, because that is the way to happiness ;) Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: hahaha...so glad I could point you in the direction of happiness! It's a fun place! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe title says it all.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24931 Read Count: 66129 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2008 Updated: March 09, 2009
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: It Worked For Han And Leia

Beautiful piece. Really a joy to read. Thanks for sharing!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, for reading and reviewing! :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryOne part for each season. Pam's p.o.v. Nothing could be more innocent than a freckle, right?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Mark, Meredith
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5981 Read Count: 27564 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: accidentally on purpose

Whoaa...nelly. I can *feel* the thick heat and the fluttering in Pam's stomach. Excellent descriptive work (as usual). Mesmerizing stuff.

Author's Response: 'Mesmerizing' is a great compliment - so glad you're really feeling this, Crystalized. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: mistaken identity

You are so right about S3, but I think it was necessary and well-done in hind sight. Thanks for another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized. Glad you're enjoying this!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: December 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: just this feeling i have

Aww, I am such a sap. How lovely! Thanks for the story Colette!

Author's Response: My pleasure. Thanks so much, Crystalized!

Summary: Past Featured StoryAn AU look at what might have happened, had Pam really thought about Jim's decision to go to Australia.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Mark, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4957 Read Count: 19105 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2008 Updated: December 16, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: December 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: impasse

I'm enjoying this story. "difficult to grasp" indeed :)

Author's Response: Pam\'s head is hard to get into, so I hope my take was realistic. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: acceptance

I really enjoyed this story! Thanks for writing and sharing it with us :)

I really FELt the scene where Pam arrives at the house and Mark's reactions are hilarious.

Author's Response: That means a lot to me that you really felt it, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking time to review and sorry I didn\'t respond sooner! :)