Snap.  Jim just got owned by Pam, and I loved every minute of it.  Seriously, as mad as I was that Pam didn't just leave Roy right then and there on Casino Nights, she makes such good points in this piece that for once I'm thinking "That's right!  Tell 'em girl!"  Very very well done, you rock :)

Oh my God.  Moxie, you have outdone yourself.  You might as well quit now because I have a hard time believing you're going to top this (but let's face it, we all know you will).  So well written, so unbelievably funny...I'm just at a loss for words.  This was fantastic!

That was poetry.  Absolutely stunning imagery and word choice.  Very very well done.

Pam!  My goodness, who knew the girl had it in her?  That was brilliant :)  And a little kinky, but in the good way haha.  This was a great story!  Hope to read more from you soon!

Damn.  That ring is...wow.  But this isn't about the ring, this is about your story...sorry, I'm getting sidetracked looking at the ring again.  You have excellent taste :)  But yes, this is such a sweet story, can't wait to read the last chapter!

Author's Response: LOL!  Thanks Wendy.  I think Pam deserves something...wow based on that Cracker Jack trinket Roy thought qualified as a ring. ;) I'm so glad you liked it (both the ring and the story!)

Okay, I really loved this.  I'm all for JAM, but I still enjoy a beautifully written story that ends with these two together.  You created a really great scene between them, kept it believable, and not ultra-fluffy or angsty.  Very well done :)

One more chapter!  Give the people what they want :D

You know how much I love this story, but maybe just a nice epilogue to wrap it all up?  Flash a few days/months/years forward to see how this all played out.  I admire them both for not immediately running into each other's arms; they know they need time to heal and to take it slow for the sake of the kids.  But a nice epilogue could take care of all of that, or maybe a montage, who knows?  You're the brains of this operation and I have so enjoyed reading this story!

Yikes, I was this optimistic when I graduated from high school, that's not a good sign...

 Only joking.  You captured a great sense of nostalgia between these two, as well as painting a great picture of their surroundings in life before DM.  You said a lot with very few words, great job :)

Ohhh this is going too be good!  I love your writing style, and Jim's letter rang so true to character.  Can't wait to see where this is going!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you found Jim's letter to have rang true.  When I wrote it I literally just closed my eyes and pretended for a second that I was Jim... what would I say.  I'm so relieved to hear that it works for you.  Thank you for the beautiful compliment about my writing- I think you just might have made my day. :-)

So basically, you rock the casbah with this story.  Aunt Matilda is hilarious and I cannot WAIT to see where you go with this.  As long as it doesn't mean Pam and Jim are weirdly related, I'm fine :)

So I started to copy and paste all the lines I loved in this into your review...but then it started getting really long and I figure the easiest way to say it is THESE NEED TO BE IN THE SHOW NOW!  Seriously, the Toby one, the thing about your brother becoming your dad with no dad experience, Jan's porn addiction, buying paper online is like buying a lightbulb at Yankee Candle....so freaking funny.  Please tell me there's more coming! (twss)

Wow.  Way to make me really unproductive at work.

 This story owns me.  Your dialogue was so incredibly perfect, I can't stand it.  You could give those writers a run for their money.

You have to write more.  "Jim and Pam Go Grocery Shopping in 55 Words"  I'll wait here while you write it :)