Reviewer: Fliz0nToast Signed 10
Date: June 01, 2007
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Our dreams assured....
Just had to review again...still so good!
I love the palpable tension in this chapter. You write that very well.
I still feel like these two are in character. I like that you have Jim describing how wrong it felt to be at corporate, I love that Pam felt bad about making fun of Jan, and I think it's nice that you actually mention Jim going to find Karen to tell her in person that it was over. (As opposed to glossing over it or on the phone.)
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hey, never feel like you have to justify reviews; they are sooo welcome, trust me!
THanks again for so many thoughtful comments. I'm of the opinion that Jim didn't just break up with Karen via telephone (and he damned sure wouldn't have just left her in NY without a word -- can you imagine??).
I'm really glad you enjoyed this; I have a ball writing sexual tension between these two (which makes me sound like a skeevy little perv, I realize, but...eh, well).
Thanks again for reviewing!