Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 28, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God. Well, I'm sorry, but I have to marry this story. That's really the only solution. Holy...yeah. Awesome. So, so fabulous. I'm bereft now that it's over. This is so what should happen for reals.
This line killed me: She wants to scream that he just has to say the word, but he might have a whole new vocabulary now.
And this? Perfection:
‘Invite me over,’ he whispers.
‘I’m in love with you,’ she replies.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much, invis. Have to say, this one is close to my heart, so I'm especially glad it worked for you. And if there's anything I can do to help with the wedding plans, don't hesitate to ask. Would hate to leave you bereft. Thanks again for the wonderful comments!