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Nobody's Business But Mine by GodInThisChilis Rated: M [Reviews - 244] 84
Summary: Past Featured Story


NOW COMPLETE!!!

"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?" 

 Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54070 Read Count: 70553 ePub Downloads: 32
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2009
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: April 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Interview: Media Training

I am big fan of your stories. I am sure this one is not going to disappoint. Yeah for trip to LA!



Author's Response: I sure hope it disappoint. I'm looking forwar to the LA trip. I don't want to spoil my own story too much, but it will involve Jay Leno, the Pacific Ocean and some steam.

Earth Day: Much Ado About Nothing in Scranton by Too Late Kev, Swedge Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 7
Summary: It's April 22, 2008. Nothing much is happening at Dunder Mifflin Scranton, so the employees are asked about Earth Day in Talking Head interviews.
Categories: Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535 Read Count: 3274 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: April 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I definitely think there should be "Dwight Day" that would be a day to celebrate. Great story.



Author's Response: The Dwight one was all TLK and cracked me up too.  Thanks for reading.

The Saboteur by wendolf Rated: K+ [Reviews - 23] 14
Summary: A look at why Jim is the way he is, especially when it comes to his job. Inspired mostly by Local Ad, Survivor Man, Branch Wars and Did I Stutter.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3327 Read Count: 3881 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: May 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such a sweet and tender story. What a great interpretation of how Jim and Pam communicate after hours.

Best part: It was such an honest moment for both of them. And so true.

“Then when I did actually leave, it was because of you, too.”

Pam swallowed and looked down. He knew she felt guilty about that still, about her rejection that night in the parking lot that led him to Stamford.

“And when I came back again . . . all you.” 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks Alamos! Glad you liked it. It wasn\'t exactly fun to write . . . but it was necessary for me, especially after seeing Jim\'s expression in Did I Stutter, after Ryan gives him his formal warning. There is just something going on inside of Jim and I can\'t wait to see what happens with his character. Anyway, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Graceless by Strawberry Fields Rated: M [Reviews - 102] 50
Summary: Past Featured Story“Pam and I have hurt a lot of people, but mostly we’ve hurt each other. There’s no coming back from that.”
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: David Wallace, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63735 Read Count: 53331 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: July 27, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: July 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What a wonderful dramatic heartbreaking chapter. I love how strong, yet vulnerable, Pam is in this chapter.   She is making Jim work for her love and respect. This story has just broken my heart -- but in a good way.

Author's Response: Thank you, Alamos! I\'m so glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was very difficult to write when my Jammy heart just wanted them to be together! Thanks for taking the time to review!

It Could've Been Worse by larrymcg Rated: K+ [Reviews - 48] 14
Summary: Yeah, we didn't get our proposal, and I was as upset as anyone else, but think about how bad it could've gone. Here are a few examples. These are meant to be as horrifying as possible, but hopefully in a fun way.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2597 Read Count: 11393 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Jim's Revenge

AWESOME! I am now officially the crazy-lady-who-laughs-in-her-cubby. This is so funny. Thanks for the afternoon pick me up. And the wonderful surprise ending, albeit disturbing ending.

More please...

Days Of The Office by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 3
Summary: This is just a silly post-finale story based on an exaggeration of the premise that The Office is becoming just like a soap opera.  Yeah, that is not an accusation that should be thrown around lightly.  ;)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Parody
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7341 Read Count: 15738 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2008 Updated: September 06, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Like sands through the hourglass...

Excellent -- as General Hospital fan loved the Anthony Geary episode. The scenes of the jungle reminded of a story on GH years ago. Great story, love the TH. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I would be lying if I said GH wasn't an inspiration.  :-)

Their Silent Language by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 23] 17
Summary: Past Featured StoryVery brief look at The Merger through The Job from Jim's POV.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2697 Read Count: 4936 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn! That was so great. I loved how you were able to tie in angst, w/ lust and love. Great job. In my mind this exactly how the date went.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn! That was so great. I loved how you were able to tie in angst, w/ lust and love. Great job. In my mind this exactly how the date went.



Author's Response: Thanks Alamos! I have several different versions of that first date in my head . . . most of them involving a lot of pent up passion. Glad you liked this take on it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

It's Always Been You by Mountaineers02 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 8] 9
Summary: Post "The Job" fic. Takes place immediately after "It's a date," but before the actual date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1633 Read Count: 2707 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: May 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet and nice story. I always pictured them saying something to each other right after Jim asked Pam out somewhere in the office. So this was nice.

On London Time by Blind Assassin Rated: M [Reviews - 80] 39
Summary: Three years have passed since 'Casino Night'. Jim didn't return to Scranton and Pam has left Dunder Mifflin behind. With more than just an ocean separating them, Jim and Pam struggle to find their way back to each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: David Wallace, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Holiday, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37585 Read Count: 23390 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2009
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: LDN

Great story -- just finished all three chapters. I hope there is more.

You did a great job of describing your town. I especially loved how they meet at the top of the escalator... very dramatic moment for both of them.   I visited London many moons ago and I loved the energy of the city and it appears that so does Pam.

The visual of Jim in a pub drinking a pint is hot!

And thanks for bringing Michael and Dwight for the ride.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review Alamos! \r\n\r\nI often get hung up on the \'Jim drinking a pint\' visual and find it hard to concentrate on much of anything else. Yummy!\r\n\r\nAnway, I am busy with Chapter 4 but won\'t get to finish it till next weekend as am off on a week\'s hols from tomorrow. Hope you like the next instalment. BA

Perfect by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 9
Summary:

It was by far, bar none, the best moment of Jim Halpert’s life. Another proposal story.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 575 Read Count: 3405 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: May 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a sweet and tender story. Thanks for combining an engagement and a prank. Well done.

Author's Response:

It seems strange to write "you're welcome" in a response to such lovely praise- thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dundies, Take Two by Nightswept Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 5
Summary: Onto the fourth episode in my series, created to hold us over until the Season 5 premiere. It's Dundie season, and Michael plans to make the annual award ceremony the best yet. His plan to distribute walkie-talkies around the office has its repercussions, and there's a proposal of sorts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Ensemble, Jan, Jim, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Oscar, Other, Pam, Phyllis, Stanley
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8527 Read Count: 11656 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2008 Updated: June 07, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: End tag

Great story -- I love reading script fanfics. I think you did a great job w/ the proposal. I was nervous about where you were going w/ Jim and Natalie, but everything looks good for Jim and Pam. (?)

Love Drunk!Dwight and the tag was spot on, true to the characters.



Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad that you enjoyed it. Ah, Jim and Pam own my heart. I wouldn\'t dare mess with them. ;)

The World's First All-Night Break Up Party by Azlin Rated: T [Reviews - 30] 17
Summary: A rainy Friday night, some tears, and plenty of junk food might just lead Pam to realize a few things, like how she really feels about her best friend. Set in the early part of Season 2.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4815 Read Count: 10374 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2008 Updated: June 16, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The Wake-Up Call

What a lovely story. I think you summed up in three chapters Pam and Jim's love for each nicely. I especially loved the part when they are on the couch together.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually a little surprised that it only took me three chapters to tell this story and in some ways it does feel like it could have been extended further, but in the end I'm really happy with how it turned out. Thanks again!

The Secrets We Keep by EmilyHalpert Rated: T [Reviews - 98] 39
Summary: An anonymous secret brings Pam and Jim together. Post Casino Night, Pre Gay Witch Hunt.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3949 Read Count: 42517 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: June 20, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Secret

Great beginning. I think it will be interesting to see how they communicate w/ the postcards.

Author's Response: The postcards definitely play a role. And I kind of had a lot of fun making some (Pam, Jims) and finding others that relate to the story!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Other Man

Thanks for the quick update. I think you captured Pam's sadness and frustration wonderfullyl. I have this feeling this going to be a lovely heartbreaking story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm glad Pam seemed realistic, its hard getting into that mindset (and rather sad).

Thanks again! 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Finding Myself

Nice... another update.  These postcards are killing me.  I am glad that you choose to write the break up scene between Roy and Pam simple, yet powerful: There was talking, yelling, crying, screaming. There were times Pam wanted to take it back, take the easy way and stay with Roy.

Author's Response:

Yep, I really am going to try to keep the updates regular. Hopefully I can get another one up tomorrow before work. 

Thanks so much for your comment about the break up scene. I really wasn't sure how to write that, as it seemed so unlike the Pam we saw in Season Two, Casino Night. The one who said she was staying with Roy. I didn't want either side to really be a loser, both of them I am sure were upset about the loss of he relationship, and I am sure it was hard on both of hem 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Free

Friday night update, love it. I have the feeling that Jim is going to see the postcards. The tone of this chapter is so still, quiet and sad. I think it fits exactly the way Pam would be feeling right after. I think it's totally in character with Pam to keep her secrets to herself. That's why the postcard thing works because it is so anonymous. So Pam.

Author's Response:

Friday Night is for fic. Pity the people who have real lives and don't realize that.

The thing I love abou PS is it is anonymous, so you still feel you ave a secret all to yourself, but, you still feel better because you've said it outloud.

I love your reviews and that you are still enjoying this! 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Imagine My Surprise

This story is just breaking my heart, in all the right ways. I loved how he carried the image of Pam's postcard w/ him everywhere. Like he was carrying Pam's heart w/ him. Keeping in character w/ Jim, I loved how he took a chance by replying w/ the post-it. The boy is always putting himself out there for her. I think responding to her using HER card was a great way of her seeing it.  

Author's Response:

Alamos, totally start to love getting your reviews. I probably was putting myself into Jim's shoes a bit, or Jim into my shoes, whatever. Because I've seen some secrets that mean a lot to me, and have saved them, and think of them often. And none were as close to the significance of the wedding one!

With the post it, its like, I figured Jim needed to do something. But I just don't think he was ready to call or take that big of a chance (ie what if it really wasn't Pam's card, and he called her on her honeymoon!), so the return secret would put the ball back in her court so to speak. And I also figured Jim would reply using her card. I honestly never hought of it another way.  

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Edge Of Something Big

This story reminds me of a U2 lyric "A secret is something you tell another person." from "The FLY.  I think that is applicable to this story. 

Even though this chapted is filled w/ Pam's sadness about Jim leaving, she still believed that she could move on. Until she saw Jim's response to her postcard. I think Pam's "hope" of moving on was reasonable at the time, and then Jim's response crushes the hope just a little. So typical of the characters. Just when they think they can get on w/ their lives w/o each other, something happens. Off to the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Can't place that song, but I may have to go listen to it, because it seems right for this story.

I figured Pam probably needed to believe she could move on. I'm sure it was heartbreaking, but it was like, even afer she sent off her postcard, she probably never thought anything would come from it. And, just she needed to move on, because Jim had. And then she sees the postcard.  

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Endless Opportunities

One of the things that I love about this story is that you are able to convey character descriptions w/ such simple, specific and exact words. Which I love. Like this:  Kevin giggled, Angela glared, Stanley sighed. This is exactly how these characters act.

I am looking forward to the conversation between Pam and Jim.

 



Author's Response:

Wow, and here I thought that was just laziness. ;). Really, I can't see it any other way, if it gets longer, it feels boring to me, so the short works. 

And I was a bit evil by putting off the conversation until he end hehe! 

Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Doesn’t Know It Yet

What a perfect ending, to such a sweet story. Again I think the simplicity of the words you choose is strong and powerful: The silence felt uncomfortable, a new feeling for them both. Without having to elaborate you set the tone of the start of their conversation.

Also I think it was nice that you did not drag out the inevitable to them getting together.  

 



Author's Response: Aww, Alamos, I love everything your reviews choose to be. They rock. I don't think I would be able to handle anything more drawn out than what happened. It would feel fake. I don't think it was an immediate "yay we're together and birds and butterflies and rainbows and everything happy" but, they had to admit that there was obviously feelings for each other, and sort of go from there.
Thanks so much for everything :)

Week's End by Talkative Rated: MA [Reviews - 47] 38
Summary: That must have been one heck of a week, hm?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7722 Read Count: 18497 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: June 10, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Week's End

SMUT! LUST! LOVE! Perfect combination. This is a wonderful story. I am pretty sure that Jim and Pam could not keep their hands off of each other in the beginning.  You wrote Jim's feeling w/ so much emotion and passion.

Wonder by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 30] 16
Summary: Just a fluffy slice of Jim appreciation, inspired by the mid-month hormone surge at the Treehouse.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2914 Read Count: 5049 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2008 Updated: June 10, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy Hotness Fanfic Writer... this is awesome. Thank you for doing such a great job of describing how I feel, I mean Pam feels. I love when Jim says "shit" it just adds to his hotness.

This was so perfect, great visual: When he raised his arms above his head to put a dish back in a high cabinet I couldn’t reach, I’d covertly watch his t-shirt rise up to reveal a narrow strip of irresistible skin above his jeans.

Just around the corner (if you'd asked). by Kestrel Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 7
Summary: A conversation between Pam and Ryan after the infamous invitation to dinner. Spoilers through Dunder-Mifflin Infinity
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Pam, Ryan
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1185 Read Count: 3358 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2008 Updated: June 13, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am a sucker for Pam and Ryan. And even though Ryan can be a jerk sometimes, I think you captured his vulnerability and sadness great. I think maybe in a galaxy far far away Ryan and Pam would have been a good couple.

Author's Response: That\'s a great way of putting it...I always felt like Ryan-the-Temp would have been up for a laugh with Pam if he didn\'t have to deal with both Kelly and Michael. She might have softened him up a little. Thanks so much for the review!

With Arms Outstretched by sillyrabbit519 Rated: M [Reviews - 42] 16
Summary:

What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas.

Sort of.

AU set in season 3


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6779 Read Count: 12918 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: Alamos Signed
Date: June 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: It's sixteen miles to the promised land

Nice! I was smiling the whole time. What a great premise. It is very funny, witty and filled w/ great sarcasm. I especially loved Josh hitting on Pam, and the universe playing a "joke" on Jim. I am looking forward to reading more.