Penname: Daoust Real name: Dan
Member Since: April 06, 2007

Bio:
A Office fan first and foremost, I discovered fanfic during the four week drought between Feb. and Apr. 2007. I heard about this site while chatting in OfficeTally Chat Room, where I met the author known as Time4Moxie. "The Love Song of Squirrel_McPants" was my first foray into fanfic, and I've loved it ever since. More a reader than a writer, but I have been known to try my hand at a few stories, with limited success.
[Report This]
Reviews by Daoust
Tired by GreenFish Rated: MA [Reviews - 9] 7
Summary: Jim has transferred to the Stamford branch, and Jan comes to check in on him to see how he is holding up.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Second Choices
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5587 Read Count: 1915 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2006 Updated: August 30, 2006
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: November 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

Deeeeeeeeelicious smut, Greenfish. I enjoyed every minute of it.

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 288961 ePub Downloads: 114
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: For I have known them all already, known them all

Moxie, you are a genius!  What an incredible, incredible chapter.  Pam knows!!!!!! Wow.  

 

Wow. Just, wow.  I cannot WAIT for the next chapter.  You could make money off this, Moxie.   

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach.

A wonderful ending to an utterly fantastic story. All hail Moxie, the queen of fanfiction.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

One of my favourite chapters! The interaction between Jim and Phyllis was a highlight for me. Still not sure how this 12 labors are going to go over, but I'm patient, and you've proven yourself more than capable 17x over so far.  Great stuff! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be

A very interesting and thought provoking tie up to the greatest fanfic cliffhanger in the history of fanfic!  

It does seem a bit rushed though, Jim dropping the love bomb, again, and on IRC no less. But I can suspend my disbelief for that.  Good work, Moxie.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Wow. I really liked this chapter, Moxie. It's rife with realism. 

Now, the question is, is "The Twelve Labors Of Jim Halpert" going to be a separate story, or attached to this one???

Summary: Beesley uses art as therapy and creates a new masterpiece for Michael; Halpert takes a hard look at himself.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Toby
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11737 Read Count: 22374 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2007 Updated: March 17, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 (Chapters 7-8)

Really hot stuff! A nice distraction on my lunchbreak!  Thanks

Summary:

Originally an entry into the Bad Fanfic Challenge but it grew a life of its own.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1385 Read Count: 5821 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: April 29, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Inside The Fortress

THE most original fanfic on MTT. Hands down.

“Thanks,” said Karen, like a Volvo.

 This is BRILLIANT!!!

 



Author's Response: Hey thanks for the kind words, I said like an Audi.

Aftershock by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 47] 31
Summary: Snarky!Jim has finally pushed Pam far enough to say something.... Takes place about a handful of days after The Negotiation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4258 Read Count: 35167 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Aftershock

Moxie, I can't believe I have to say this, but this chapter was a real let down for me. Chapter one had so much promise, and I feel you just gave up in this chapter. It felt like you just tried to wrap it up too quickly.  I don't know, maybe I'm too critical. I just had such high expectations after ch.1.  I didn't expect this fanfic to wrap up so fast.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: What does that even mean?

Moxie, I wasn't even done Squirrel_McPants, and then you hooked me on to Distance Learning.  Now, you start this story!  Moxie, what are you doing to me? I have a family starved for my attention. I have a body that needs food and proper hygienic care.  I can't focus on either of those things while you continue to write this brilliant fanfic. Excellent work!  Keep it up!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Anywhere But Here cover

Role Reversal Challenge: It's May 2006. Jim's wedding is approaching and a lovelorn Pam can't take much more. Starts during Casino Night (or an AU version of it).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance, Travel, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Role Reversal
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44755 Read Count: 80872 ePub Downloads: 23
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2018
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Bet I could really lose myself up there

Wow. I don't usually read AU fanfic, but I really was intrigued by this one.  Great concept.  I'm glad this story is TBC.  I can't wait until Pam gets back from Italy.  Great job! 

Author's Response: I almost don't want to call this fic AU Jim and Pam's relationship status is the only thing really different from the show. But anyway, I'm glad you were intrigued. And things will be very interesting when Pam gets back from Italy.

Summary: A flash back to Pam's first day as receptionist...and her first time meeting Jim. No spoilers. My first ever fic!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10317 Read Count: 10906 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2007 Updated: May 09, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like this story, so far, FNB.  I like the concept. Well written.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have been following your story, Reincarnation, but for some reason I just never reviewed...forgive me! I really like the story - very heavy. The thought of Pam being faced with the daughter of Jim and Karen is just heartbreaking. I definitely review the next chapter.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hey, you should keep going with this story. I really liked it, especially chapter 5.  I like where it seems to be going. I guess maybe you'd have to start a new story...Pam's second day, or something. I don't know. It was just really well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have indeed taken many stabs at writing "Pam's Second Day at Dunder-Mifflin." I haven't quite pulled it together yet, but hopefully I'll get it done in the next couple weeks. It is hard to think about a Jim/Pam "date" that ends with Pam telling Jim she's engaged when there are so many great post-The Job fics around of their REAL first date. I guess I just want to revel in the happiness for a little while longer before I revisit the heartbreak.

Falling Rain by bales Rated: K [Reviews - 2] 1
Summary: I wrote this story post Initiation and Diwali, but never got around to posting it. It's about Pam's inner monologue one morning on a park bench. I decided to post this now, as I think Pam's mind is in a similar place now in recent episodes, as back then earlier in the season. So, even though it's set quite a while back, I hope everyone will give this a chance and read it. Many thanks! This is my first Jim/Pam fanfic, so please be kind with any reviews. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2377 Read Count: 1642 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2007 Updated: April 29, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: April 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bales, this is a wonderfully written story. It has all the makings of a fanfic classic. Thanks for sharing!

Summary:

Sometimes you just have to try new things. A Pam/Ryan story that is more about Pam/Jim than you would think.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33752 Read Count: 58444 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: Crunchwrap

Pam Beesley, the queen of the relapse...

Great chapter, and great story. I'm glad I found this one again.   

 

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: July 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Mixed Berry Yogurt

This has been a fantastic story all the way through. I have thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it. I can't wait for the last chapter.  I wonder who she'll choose...hmmmm?

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: June 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chips, Veal, Happy Meals and a can of Coke

Hey. I just found this story, and I really like it.  I'll admit that it took me about 4 chapters to actually get used to the mental image of Pam and somebody-other-than-Jim, but your writing style is very persuasive. Excellent work.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Twix, Snapple, Yogurt Parfait

Wow. Great chapter. Do you actually intend to have Jim redeem himself in this fanfic? Cause I think you'd need at least seven more chapters to do that believeably.  Nice work, GITC. 

Summary: This was inspired by some chat on the TWOP boards. It's awful and weird but here it is....written in about 15 minutes during a study break and totally un-betaed.
Categories: Other
Characters: Angela, Dwight
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 530 Read Count: 2267 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: May 17, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story.  Fantastic. And so timely now. 

Stolen by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 169] 62
Summary:

Inspired by the finale and the seasons that preceeded it.  Enough said.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21030 Read Count: 69197 ePub Downloads: 26
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2007 Updated: July 06, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: June 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: You have stolen....

oh wow. Great chapter! This is one of the most well written stories I've read in a while.  Great work!!!

Author's Response: Eee - thank you so much! :o)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Clear liquor and cloudy eyed / too early to say goodnight

Hi Girl7. I just wanted to add my "great job" to your little story.  I really have enjoyed reading it, and am looking forward to its continuance.  Great work. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Daoust!  It'll continue on for a little while - I plan on following the date to its conclusion.  Thanks again for reviewing!

Summary: Just filling in the blanks in The Job. What we didn't see.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5199 Read Count: 21320 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2007 Updated: May 25, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! I haven't been back to MTT for a while, but this story will keep me coming back.  You've really got a good idea here.  Keep up the good work. 

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Holy crap. This is getting steamy. I like it. A lot!

Summary:

Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 Read Count: 48970 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: June 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Come Away with Me

Good chapter. I'm glad you picked this story up again. Excellent.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed
Date: May 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Train Wreck

Noooooo Jim! You should have kissed her! What are you doing?  He's gonna chase after her, I know it!!!

Great story, BeckySue.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Your enthusiasm for this story makes me excited! I like when someone else is as excited as I am to find out the rest of this story. The next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrow...and let me just tell you, it's my favorite chapter by far.