What would have happened if Jim had been a little later getting back to the office?
Im following this story very closely. I like it alot. Interested to see where you take it, and where the steamy sex stuff comes in. lol
Author's Response: I hope I can remember exactly what that's like so as not to disappoint you Dao. ;
My god. Jennifer Lewis is going to be...OHHHhhhhhh boy. You lost me a little bit with "flonkerton" but I am right back on board with this story... great stuff!!!!
What the fudge? You told me it wasn't Pam. At least...but...I'm confused...
Author's Response: Sorry i was sneaky...Pam is Pam, and Jenny is Jenny, it just happened that someone screwed up in telling them apart.
Jim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.I'll answer your chapter end notesthis ways
SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT SMUT!!!
Or, actually, do whatever you want. I really am liking this story. Draw it out if you fel so inclined. It's really a great read.
You are the Tease Queen!!! This story is amazing. Great, great great work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Daoust!
Sorry, I took the summer off, but I knew I had to come back to read the rest of this amazing fanfic. Thanks so much! It was truly a great read.
And the Dundie for most original fanfic in a long while goes to....
Author's Response: Thank you for this Dundie. I will immediately place it in the display case above my bed. Thanks for the review.
You're ideas are so original, Moxie. How do you come up with this stuff?
As for this story, you've got me interested...now where are you taking me?
Anyway, I'm on board.
“Here,” he murmured, “I hope you get a Q.”
As a scrabble lover, and scrabulous addict, I truly appreciated this little line. I'm really liking this story. Great job!
The Barry Manilow conversation just flows so seamlessly. It seems so natural. Only a very skilled author could pull off such a conversation with such an odd topic successfully, and you did, and more. Thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! Glad you enjoyed it!!!!
Jim and Pam surrender to silence after "The Job." A virtual smut-angst festival!
This is smut. Serious, hard-core, unapologetic, squirm in your seat, not-safe-for-work, wild and unhinihibited smut, punctuated by merciless and heart-wrenching angst. In a couple of chapters, there will be smutty angst, and in others, angsty smut. There's even a couple of chapters with no smut at all and some fluff-happy-funny mixed in! But it all ends with a happy bang! Haw. You were warned.
This is expertly written smut fanfic. Thank you for it. Very engaging read.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. I\'m thrilled you liked it. I was hoping to bring it in for a conclusion before the premiere, but I am swamped with work right now...
This is pretty good. I liked it. Well done.
Yep. This is hot. Very hot. Great job.
This is beautiful fanfic. Excellent job. Very well done. Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Hey...great story. Keep going with it. I am loving reading about all these events from Pam's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm enjoying writing it!
After their shower adventure, Jim suggests they try another fantasy to prove to Pam that their relationship is still magical. Unfortunately, things don't go as planned. Once again, don't try this one at home. A continuation of Tales from the Bathroom Floor.
Hey, nice story. I wrote something similar myself just today. Except yours is nicer and more sugary. Mine's a cold bucket of reality. But this is well done. Good job.
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
Oh shan! This is really good. I am enjoying it immensely! I cannot wait to read about their 'talk'!!! Thanks so much for a great story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Daoust! I promises I'm going to read your stuff! And I'll see you in the OTCR :)
I really enjoyed reading this, girl7. You're a fanfic master. I can't wait till it gets to the steamy stuff.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I just posted the next chapter, and the steamy stuff is included.... :o)
I am saying a lot of things, but I believe myself when I say that this is quickly becoming my new favourite fanfic. You are such a skilled writer. And its not just one line or one paragraph; it's the story as a whole. It's just really well written, and most importantly for fanfic, its really easy and fun to read. You know its a great fanfic when the end of the chapter comes too soon, and you are sad because theres no more, and you don't know if you can hold out until the next chapter comes up. That's how I feel about this fanfic. Well done.
Wow. Ending the fight with a marriage proposal. Pretty ballsy! Good story so far. I'll keep an eye on this one.
CompletedAn excellent ending to an excellent fanfic. One of the most enjoyable reads on MTT, in my opinion! Great job!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you for such a positive comment. I\"m glad you enjoyed this story, I\'ve certainly had a great time writing it.
And for the first time, she realizes why.
It wasn’t about bravery, or hope, or selfishness, or any of the things she’s let herself think it was.
It was desperation.
These lines made ME understand, all these months later, the greater significance of the coal walk. Thank you for this.
Excellent fanfic, shootingstars. I am enjoying this story very much. Keep it going. Don't goodbye it.
Really great work, again. I have thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful retelling of these classic JAM moments. Very well done, very enjoyable read.
This story is a pamgasm in my mouth. I just can't quit it.
Author's Response: AWESOME review!!!
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