Betsy and Jim's Marxist-inspired parent-child bickering is amazing. I never want to hear anyone argue against capitalism in any tone but John Krasinski pretending his mom is showing his new girlfriend his baby photos ever again. And ending this on a rimshot was perfect.
I will be *eagerly* awaiting your next project.
This whole story was just tons of fun as it progressed. We got to see some really great character development from Pam. A Jim who's at his best, and some fun interactions with other characters as well. And to think all of it was merely set up for that last line. Bravo.
Great job as always my friend.
Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat
I love this version of Jim and Pam so much, good job :)
Pam's mind going back to Mrs. Anderson as the Wicked Witch of the West is a great way to show her mindset now. Any good memories of that time are long gone and the reality of what it was like has sunk in, and she can also move past it quickly.
Her interaction with Betsy though was all sorts of charming. If she's able to so easily pick up bantering with Betsy, no wonder she was able to start in with Jim so quickly. Great to see Pam warming up to extended Halperts so quickly given what you also told us about previous extended family of significant others. Delightful as always.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Pam deserves a nice, healthy relationship with her in-laws, and in this world she gets it.
An ADORABLE meeting of Betsy and Pam, too.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you liked Betsy & Pam. More of them in the final chapter. And yes, I think you're entirely right, and shame on Mrs. Anderson for thinking so.
Great to see her get to this point in her life. Also, always great to see you're not dead too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am really glad the character growth I was going for is showing through! Pam deserves nice things. I hope you like our ending chapters!
It's nice to see Pam arrived at a good place here. It's been a bit of a journey, but she's rediscovered her people, and maybe a little bit of herself too. "It was, frankly, something she’d always wanted deep down inside and never let herself admit she wanted, because it had seemed so unlikely she’d ever get it" is a lovely line from this side of the ravine. "Being happy was all it was cracked up to be" is too.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best...I am currently working on about six different writing projects (not including fanfic) at once, so either I will get inspired and ditch them all for fanfic or it may be a while until I start another WIP. We'll see.
Glad you liked Pam's character growth! It's important to me with all the background hints of how bad I made her and Roy's relationship that she gets to be in a good place when this ends.
Author's Response: Thank you! Pam deserves friends! And honestly, so does Katy...not enough friendship in the Office, I sometimes think, especially for women.
Author's Response: Thank you! Pam deserves friends! Especially ones who support her professionally!
And in the end Michael doubles his offer. How very Michael of Michael. You know Pam there's a saying about looking gift horses in mouths. Seems like she needed that pounded into her head a bit.
Always a pleasure getting an update from you and this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel like the Pam & Katy friendship would have been really nice if canon had gone that way. But...what can you do. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you! Jim definitely, 100% puts that hanging up every night. And probably fantasizes about burning it, but he's too soft on Michael's foibles to actually ever complain out loud instead of by making faces.
And there he goes and surprises her in such a great way. Yes he's interested in her art, but he also wants to help advance her career. Well done Jim. That's how you show someone you support them.
Always glad to get an update regardless of how long it takes between them.
Author's Response: Jim is always on that Pam-supporting grind. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope you like our returning character next chapter...
Author's Response: Pam deserves all the support in the world, and I will die on that hill--more Pam support coming up next chapter, in fact!
"How's it hanging? Seriously, you said you were hanging pictures." This is wonderfully Jim dialogue.
Jim recognizing the Rothko influence in Pam is lovely... and also 100% Pam is heavily into Rothko. That has long been my headcanon. Great minds, my friend.
Author's Response: I'm glad you agree on Pam's artistic influences ;). Glad you like the Jim banter--he's so much fun to write...and thanks as ever for reading!
Author's Response: I'm having a lot of fun making this Jim and Pam actually get a chance to be a couple in ways that I don't think the show really did (with the hiding the relationship and then the drama). Thanks for reading!
The use of "frogboiled" as a verb is something I'm definitely going to try to work into conversation... clever, and I think a very solid insight into how Pam put up with Roy for all those years. And Pam talking herself into being hot and bothered through metaphor form was fun.
Author's Response:
Right? Transferring data is much more difficult than you think it will be. Thanks for the sympathy!
And I'm glad you liked it! Especially the vocabulary choice ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading with me!
Author's Response: Thank you! Jim and Pam as capable of being people in parallel and not just completely wrapped up in each other is one of the things I love about them.
Nice break in the romance to let Pam observe Comedy Roasters without Jim as a very pleasant distraction and get a sense of how much she's starting to feel at home here, forming new attachments in her post-Roy life.
Glad you're not dead!
Author's Response: Thanks! I intentionally made it not actually make full sense because...Michael...
Always fun bringing in the Vance's. Kinda wonder if they'll invite Jim and Pam to have lunch with them then take in inordinate amount of time in the restroom. A little bit of a bummer that Jim's not there. But as part of this new Pam that's awoken she's also found some peace and happiness in her situation even without Jim. Jim makes things better for sure, but he's not 100% critical to her happiness. Signs of a very Fancy New Beesly indeed.
Though of course I'm sure now that Jim is there things will be looking up. Wonderful update as per usual.
Author's Response: Thank you! I like the Vances as another couple for Pam to think about in respect to her and Jim--as you'll see next chapter!
And then the flirty texting with Jim was just great, as was Pam enjoying his typos in his speed to reply to her 😍 I’m greatly looking forward to him seeing her big walls….
Author's Response: I am glad you like that :) It'll be a bit until he actually gets there, but mostly because it's taking me longer than I thought to get chapters up...
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm doing my best to keep the fluff going fluffy here while also giving Pam a nice mental makeover at the same time.
I am *really* curious if we're going to get any flashbacks to Pam/Roy in this story... it feels like you've got a specific idea of their dynamic here I'm really enjoying the glimpses of.
Those two kids are darn cute together as always...
Author's Response:
I do not think we're going to get much if any actual Pam/Roy flashbacks, because I don't want to muddy my fluff, but yes, I do have specific ideas and they are not nice.
So, instead, fluff!
Author's Response: Yeah...Pam's dating life is something I'm not going to fully flesh out because it's not the focus but I do think it's fun to come up with ways Pam would date outside of canon...
