Penname: Semby Real name:
Member Since: August 10, 2006

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Summary:

Pam tries to kill time when Sudoku just isn't cutting it for her.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 572 Read Count: 4736 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw! Let's hope she gets up the courage to share those reasons with him later. Very nice.

Summary: “I made an ass out of myself.” Michael taps his fingers against the oak kitchen table. “Take some advice from a man a little older and much more experienced than yourself, Jim. Never fall for two women at the same time.”
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1472 Read Count: 2572 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

These were all awesome, and genuine-feeling, and sometimes funny. The last one was especially laugh-out-loud funny. Andy rules.

Summary: Not everything is as it seems. During her first weeks in Scranton, Karen learns some things about herself and Jim and Pam. Jim/Pam/Karen
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1197 Read Count: 2883 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, that was lovely and intriguing. Love the progression of her changing thoughts towards Pam. And that ending was painful but believable.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Summary:

Fancy New Beesely's made some changes since...

Originally posted as just "Pillows", but then that spawned more ideas. ^_^


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2326 Read Count: 21683 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2006 Updated: February 11, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: February 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Tea

Oh, this was totally cute! And I love that ending. And I think even if there's conflict about the effects of caffeine, it makes sense to be cautious about it - it was a fun reveal method :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading! Yea, I heard the thing about caffeine once, and, whether it's true or not, I'm gonna avoid it like the plague if ever i find myself in the family way.. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A series of related drabbles that begin prior to The Merger and continue on from there.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Andy, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Pam, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14640 Read Count: 70495 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2006 Updated: March 23, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 48: Jim - 9 Crimes

I somehow managed to miss this when it was posted and updated in the past, so I'm glad you updated recently! I read them all so far in one sitting, and I love this version of past events. It's really nice to have Pam and Toby able to confide in each other, without any of the weird sexual tension they could potentially have. I also think you've done a great job with the conflicting feelings in Jim, Pam, and Karen, and while you haven't had much Michael so far, what you've shown of him has been pitch perfect!

And now I have lots of new songs to download too! :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  And there is more Michael coming up soon, so hopefully I can continue writing him well.  

And I hope you enjoy the songs. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 58: Pam - I Wish You Love

Oh, that's heartbreaking. Pam making the effort once again like the coffee, extending the invitation, and Jim unable to accept, again. Thank goodness for Toby!

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: March 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 68: Jim - Aside

Ooh, great update! I love the Pam/Toby stuff at his house, that they can recover from an awkward kiss so quickly because they're such good friends now, and haha - Michael's pep talk about Carols and Jans and becoming men... classic!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I have a secret desire for Pam and Toby to be BFF on the show.  And I'm so glad you liked Michael...he's so much fun to write.

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: March 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 77: Pam - Fewer Words

Ooh, see, it's good that you were "behind schedule" because you got to include the art contest storyline, and I love what you did with it! Those simple emails, such few words saying so much. Lovely. But I do also love that you had Jim acknowledging that he feels like he needs Karen - so often I see him portrayed as not really caring but you showed so believably *why* he's with her.

Author's Response: Thank you!  It was the newpeats, actually, that helped me get over the severe writer's block I was experiencing with regards to this story.  And I'm so glad you liked what I did with Jim, I mean, there is a reason why he's still with her.

Summary: Separated by distance and circumstance
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1229 Read Count: 2884 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2006 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: December 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool concept - very interested to see where you'll go with this!


Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: February 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is fascinating stuff - interesting to see how such tragedy would affect Kelly. And, oh poor Toby and Sasha - not knowing where her mother is. You're really painting a believably bleak picture of an ending world.

Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'd really hate to be over-the-top with the melodrama; calling this believable really makes my day.  ( I know - poor Kelly!)

Summary:

“Oh great.” Michael muttered. “Another Captain Jack.”

 

My attempt at a crossover...


Categories: Crossover, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3570 Read Count: 3133 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2006 Updated: December 04, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: December 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is seriously bizarre, and yet I'm hooked. Plenty o'giggles from this one!

Summary:

Jim proposes to Pam......I guess I should just include this in my alternate universe series (it's a bit of a prequal to Labor Relations and DVD Saturday), but haven't done that yet.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Andy
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3693 Read Count: 4561 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2006 Updated: December 05, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: December 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Indecent Proposal

Eee! You had me worried for awhile there, thinking Jim was going to ruin his shot because of his need to play around (no matter how fun the results). And the end - SO cute! :)

Twelve Days by xoxoxo Rated: MA [Reviews - 245] 117
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim, Pam...and a partridge in a pear tree.  There are 12 days of Christmas - there will be 12 chapters of this story. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Karen, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26401 Read Count: 57284 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2006 Updated: December 30, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Nine: Ladies Dancing

Ah! These are all killing me, switching between utter cuteness (the hamster thing!!) and painful angst. But they're very, very good and I'm looking forward to the rest :)

Author's Response:

I know.  I'm sorry Semby.  Trust me - it's just as painful for me as it is for you.  Rest assured I'll resolve this much quicker than we'll see on the show - so at least there's that!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: And a Partridge in a Pear Tree....

What a lovely way to conclude. The key-exchange was very cute, the couch interactions very hot, and the ending very sweet. I loved this story the whole way through!

Author's Response: YAY!!!  I'm so glad.  Thanks for reviewing all along the way Semby!  It means alot. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Two: Turtle Doves

Aw, I like the way you handled the Karen situation. I think she's mature enough to be this graceful about it. And the doves! Aw.

Also, if guys don't wear "outfits," what do they call their... outfits?



Author's Response:

I hope Karen is that cool.  Mostly - I wanted this story to err on the side of fluffy and a long drawn out breakup would just mess up my vision.

Um.  Gee.  I don't know.  Clothes - I imagine??  ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Four: Calling Birds

Mmm, yes. Lovely way to open a chapter. And great way to leave us begging for more, *yet again*, at the end of the chapter!

Author's Response:

Hee!  That opening scene still is giving me goosebumps. 

I don't mean to make you beg...but I can't say I'm not happy that you're anxious to read more!

Thanks so much for taking the time to review Semby.  I appreciate it more than you know. 

 

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Six: Geese a Laying

Good filler! Definitely, definitely good filler. Especially with that ending - and that was a very creative way to go with "Geese a-Laying".

Author's Response: Thanks Semby!  It was sooooooo tough to do.  But I'm glad it worked for you!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Five: Golden Rings

I'm incredibly slow and it took me till the last ring to figure out how the hell "five golden rings" were being factored into this, heh. Pam was a little evil, leaving him hanging like that! But very much looking forward to the results now that he's got her face to face again...


Author's Response:

HA!  There were a few of these chapters I knew from the get go - and this was one of them.  I always knew the 5 rings would be actual sounds - not bands of gold.  Sasha sort of sneaked in - and the goose thing?  Totally took on a life of it's own.  But Jim frantically chasing after her was always the goal.

So glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: December 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Eight: Maids a Milking

Ooh - that was the most painfully uncomfortable conversation ever. Poor Pam, and poor clueless Karen too!

This: "I sold $5000 worth of paper today.  What did you do?" Hee! Thank you for using a line where I could actually hear in my memory what JK would sound like while saying it. Classic :)



Author's Response:

HEE!!  You''re on to me.  That's a little trick I use.  Find things he says - and rework them a bit. 

Yep.  Poor Karen.  Thanks for playing.  Here's your consolation prize.  :)   

Reviewer: Semby Signed
Date: December 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Seven: Swans a Swimming

Eeee! Any appearance of Sasah in a story makes me all warm and gooey inside, and you certainly made the most of her here. So cute, and I love how she's like in awe of pretty, grownup Pam, and Jim totally is too. That last line just kills me.

Author's Response:

A long time ago a visited a friend and spent some time with her little girl.  A week later she called me up hysterically laughing to tell me that in the middle of dinner - out of the blue - her daughter looked at her and said,  "I love Krissy.  Can she come over tomorrow?"

And so - in this chapter - I decided Sasha feels the same way about Pam.  :)

Eggshells by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 35] 25
Summary: Pam tries to explain her choices to the biggest JAM fan there is.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Other, Roy
Genres: Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1306 Read Count: 3953 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2006 Updated: December 08, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: December 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, wow, I can't imagine how embarassing it would be to have your kids actually witness the "courtship" phase, but they seem to be handling it well. This was very cute, and I absolutely adore the egg analogy.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love the idea that they have video evidence of all of this- even the hard stuff.

Paper Boat by foxtoast Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary: Jim, Pam, an origami boat, and a kiss in a cold warehouse. (no spoilers.)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1690 Read Count: 1892 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2006 Updated: December 08, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: December 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This had all my favorite things: sweetness, cuteness, and a little sadness but still that bit of hope :)

Phyllis Was by Kittykat47 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 14] 14
Summary: This is the story of Jim and Pam (or at least what I hope will happen with Jim and Pam) told from Phyllis's POV.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Bob Vance, Jan, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Phyllis, Roy
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2660 Read Count: 1914 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2006 Updated: December 08, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I love this so much! It's so cute, and so Phyllis. She's the sweetest, and I'm sure one of their biggest 'shippers. It's so nice all the little things you have her do to help them find their way to each other.

My one teeny thing I noticed: in the line "it was just that she didn’t think Pam was good enough for him", I think you meant he wasn't good enough for Pam, right? 

Summary: A peek into the lives of the Office staff away from the office.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2366 Read Count: 5196 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2006 Updated: December 12, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 10
Date: December 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm just blown away. This was amazing!

Summary: A series of longer drabbles set during and after "The Convict."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Andy, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3457 Read Count: 8172 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 12, 2006 Updated: December 12, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: December 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: We Need To Talk

Ha! The twist of Pam convincing Andy she had a thing for Dwight was hilarious. This whole thing was very cute and fun.

Author's Response: Well, you know, I figured nothing would get Andy's nut more than knowing that he was competing with Dwight of all people.  It would be something Pam would do, I'd think.