Azlin strikes again! I love the insight into Angela's world. Angela fics are always so unique, perhaps because she's so interesting.
"She’d been around pregnancy before, but mostly just with her cats." made me laugh aloud, and then I felt guilty, because it was such a serious story :-)

Great job!!! Keep writing!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I can't seem to go all the way angsty no matter how hard I try. But honestly, I never really try that hard. I'd really rather make someone laugh than cry. ;)

This is just beautiful. I love the first/second person points of view,a nd this would be a magical first/second date. LOVE IT!!

Oh, this was fantastic!! I love a well-written Kelly story, and you've nailed her: "Oh yeah that," she shrugs. "It was okay. He seems really stressed out about moving, but he did find my blow dryer when he was packing so that was rad. I had this awesome tilapia with crab meat and we had sex in the bathroom after. Oh! And tiramisu. Tiramisu is so fucking good right? What would you call that? It's not cake, right? It's more like cake-pudding."

That was hysterical.

Also, is it wrong to admit that I um, have the Lizzie McGuire movie soundtrack? Because if that's wrong, then I don't want to be right.

Aw, that was cute! I love the very last lines best, and I think it's hilarious that Dwight and Angela waited so long to get married and are having a cat for a ring bearer!
Nice job!


Author's Response: Thanks McGigi! Now get back to work! And you thought I missed the part where you said you were working on Pam of Green Gables. Not to rush you or anything.

ExtremelyGruntled, I LOVED this! You got the characters just right (I think my favorite description was Jan's) and you brought the funny and the angst, and I just really, really liked it a lot. I also loved that you thought out a timeline, because that's perfect. I hope you write a sequel!

This is beautiful and so in character! I can't wait to read the rest!

Nice job, Jess! I love it when they don't act their ages.
Now I REALLY miss being a nanny- getting paid to read and go swimming was so awesome that i can't remember why I sold out and started working for The Man.

Wow, this was a fantastic look into the life of Ryan. I loved it! You're very good at being inside his head.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I really appreciate that.  Being in Ryan's head is a little weird, though...  Especially since I'm not a horny (maybe?) gay guy.  Heh.

Oh, this was lovely. I love missing moment stories, and it was great to be inside of Jim's head. Very nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know, aren't missing moment stories the best?!

This is so simple and beautiful. I love how you use Pam's interest in art to look at the bigger picture. I can't wait to see the rest! You know you want to become a creative writing slut!

Author's Response: Yep, I'm beginning to see that once you've had a taste, it's hard to give it up.  I'm really enjoying the whole creative writing process.  The only things I've really written before were papers and reports.  This is definitely more fun and I'm finding it a little relaxing and cathartic.  I think I'm well on my way to becoming a creative writing slut!  Who knew!

I really liked this! I loved the scope of the story and how you got into little things, like the naming of Avery, while still preserving the epic tone. I also liked that it was a little grittier than we usually read around here, it was very realistic.  GO YOU!

This was fun! I like how porn sparked a great conversation between them, it's very believable.

Author's Response: Thanks, McGigi - I struggled a bit with this one, but the idea was too good to pass up.  :-)