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This was a great alternate ending to Drug Testing. I didn't expect Jim go give Pam the Christmas card so that was a great surprise twist. What your wrote in the card was simple and heartfelt. I love how they communicate telepathically with each other. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, bkwrm! The funny thing is: I didn\'t remember the Christmas card was in this one till I read your review. Bad memory :)

10

*squeee* I'm so glad I went looking in the Challenges section of the archive and found this delightful story! Summer rain is the best. Pam knows what she's talking about. I love how delighted Jim was that he discovered something new about Pam and how adorable they were, frolicking in the rain. The best part was what Pam said at the end. I mean, they have to get out of their clothes. Otherwise, they'll get sick!

Great story! I enjoyed it immensely! Also, thanks for this since it puts a smile on my face :D

10

First off, I just want to apologize for not leaving a review for each of the chapter until this one. My only excuse is because your story is so engrossing that I was reading at record speed and clicking on the next button until I realized that I need to write something to let you know how amazing I think this story is!

I love, love, LOVE the way Pam contacted Jim and they reconnect and became a couple. The fact that Pam drove to meet Jim at the convention and they ended up hanging out with his brother. The way you weaved some aspects of what really happened on the show into your story in such a believable and interesting way is just so incredible.

I can't wait to finish the rest of your story! Also, I want to take a quick moment to thank you. Besides the fact that this story is completed, but the sheer length and depth of it is just, for a lack of a better word, AMAZING! You are so talented and I'm very grateful that you shared this story.

I wish there was a way I can print and make this story into a paperback book or something. But, you know, trying to go green and all that.

I cannot wait to finish this story. Again, thank you!

10

I just can't stop gushing about your stories. I love the way you used so few words but managed to convey everything. The need, the want, the desperation that Jim and Pam felt. The sex was smoldering without being graphic, the happiness the next day was just right. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, bkwrm! I should probably go back and read some of these -- see if I can learn anything about how my writing\'s changed. Glad it worked for you!

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I don't know how you do it but you've managed to wrote a story about drunk Jim (which I love) and made it sweet, hot, and just perfect. The way Pam took care of him, the humor of the situation and of course, the hot sex ;o) Oh yeah, and the fact that he kept Pam's text after all this time? This is the second story of yours that I've read and judging by the ribbons on the other stories, I'm pretty sure I'll be gushing about the others as well :o) I really loved this. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh my, this is a really old one! When I read my older stuff, have to admit, all I see are the flaws ;-) So, of course, I\'m really pleased you liked it. Thanks so much for the very generous review, bkwrm!

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I'm so glad that this story was on "Story of the Moment" on the fanfic archive home since I would have missed it entirely.

This alternate ending to "Benihana Christmas" is just perfect since it ended with Jim and Pam together...in bed :D I loved how you wrote this, starting with the "In a rush of weakness..." and expanded on how Jim and Pam spend the whole night with each other.

And this ending: "And it’s not so much a weakness anymore."....so perfect!

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This story was really great! The lyrics to this song were just perfect for the scene you set up. I loved the way you wrote the little details that Pam noticed of Jim, the descriptions of the apartment and of the characters themselves were just so good! I thought the dialogue was spot on and in character and of course...the ending was just so sexy and sweet.

Thanks for sharing! Excellent job!

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This story was so good! Jim and Pam so obviously belong together and being apart just makes them unhappy. I love the happy ending and have to admit that I was a little sick reading that Jim married Karen. Overall, great job!

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This was so bloody sad! Really good but so, so sad! I usually prefer reading fluff and smut and avoid these stuff but it's a complete story from you so I naturally couldn't resist. I like the fact that Pam got to live her life, even w/o Jim. It's really too heartbreaking, especially the ending but I expected that because Jim can't live in a world without Pam. Thanks for writing (even if it's sad!)

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I love this story! So much that, in my mind, this is now canon ;o) I love that Pam confronted Jim about his jerky behavior because when I watched that episode, I wanted to kick him where it hurts. But in this wonderful story, you made Jim and Pam talked it out and then kiss and made up at the end. *sigh* Love it!

Thanks for writing this!

10

There are not enough words to describe how much I love this story. The sex is just so hot and steamy and definitely left me smiling and satisfied :D But even more than that, I love how they are finally honest with one another and the truth comes out. Of course Jim still loves Pam and of course Pam feels the same. The ending? Ah-ma-zing!!

fasterthansnakes, once again, THANK YOU for writing this story. It has everything from wonderful angst to wonderful smut to wonderful confessions complete with a happily ever after! What more can we ask for? Excellent, excellent story!

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This is a really great story and so different. It hurts a bit that Jim is with Karen long enough to be engaged & almost marry but that passed quickly. Jim and Pam are meant to be and the way you wrote them, trying to let each other go but couldn't do it...was perfect. I love the second person POV and Jim getting angry when he thought that Pam had given up on him (which is his fault). Thanks for writing!

10

I love the glimpse into what was going through Jim's mind when he made the decision to interview for the Stamford position! Now that I finally get the happily ever after with Jim and Pam on the real show, it's much easier to read the not-so-happy periods of these two.

And that last line made me ache for what they went through before Season 4. Great fic!