Penname: time4moxie Real name: Moxie
Member Since: September 21, 2006

Bio:

 

Writer. Stalker. Hussy.  Not necessarily in that order. 

Reviews are like crack, without the degenerative physical manifestations.

Author of the Month: April 2018  


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Reviews by time4moxie
Maternity Leave by cheapcolouredlights Rated: K [Reviews - 24] 14
Summary: FutureFic. Pam is pregnant, (yes, with Jim's baby) on her last day of maternity leave at Scranton. Involves all Office characters.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1746 Read Count: 8380 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2006 Updated: July 28, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8
Date: November 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like Jim's talking head bits, but Michael seems a little OOC in relationship to Pam's 'condition'.  Why is he so angry? Definitely great potential though!

Let Go by falldownmore Rated: MA [Reviews - 14] 18
Summary: Together, they can let go. Takes place after The Secret.

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1524 Read Count: 3874 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2006 Updated: November 08, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Let Go

That was a great idea, and certainly a way it coulda/shoulda gone!!  

Strawberry Chapstick by Bennie Rated: K [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary: Past Featured Story

It reminds him of his first love...Contains spoilers for upcoming episodes.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1020 Read Count: 2145 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2006 Updated: November 08, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Strawberry Chapstick

I love stories that take a little item like lipgloss and make it mean so much.  Well done!


Author's Response: Thank you!  I shall never look at my Strawberry Chapstick the same way again. :)

First Dance by PuffingNoise Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 7
Summary: Past Featured Story

If Jim and Pam really had danced instead of just "swaying" in "The Client"


Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 337 Read Count: 3479 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2006 Updated: November 09, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ahhhh that's so good.  When is this damn reunion going to take place?  It's killing me!  ;-)

Portfolio by mixedberries Rated: M [Reviews - 22] 22
Summary: Past Featured StoryHis foot moves and she can hear the rustle of the paper bag.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Roy, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7701 Read Count: 4788 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2: Watercolors

what a great idea of how life could be for those two - Will there really be no more??

Author's Response: I thought about doing a Jim version, but I'm already working on another story for him. Thanks for reading! 

About Her by Bennie Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 7
Summary: A little insight into Ryan and Kelly.
Categories: Other, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 478 Read Count: 3419 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2006 Updated: November 10, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: About Her

Yes - very, very insightful.  I think if Kelly broke up with him, he would actually be quite heartbroken.    Good job capturing his wavering emotions!

Interpretation by Par5 Rated: T [Reviews - 9] 8
Summary: Jim angst. He thought he had moved on. Turns out he's moving back. Thoughts before the merger and to be continued...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2168 Read Count: 2854 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2006 Updated: November 29, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Before the Merger

ahhhh - I was feeding my angst very nicely just from the Pam perspective, and then I get thrown to the ground from Jim's.  You are heartless.  (But it was wonderful to read, in a masochistic sort of way!) :-)

Author's Response: But no worries Moxie! There's much room for improvement here. Off to read about Pam now. Figures, I take the male POV! Or maybe I just want to be in Jim's head... ;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Going Home

Ack.  It's angsty because I believe you've really captured how he feels.  Which actually is a good thing, as we know he's Just Not Into Karen/Her.  At least that's what I keep telling myself.

Author's Response: No, you're right Moxie. He's just killing time until he gets a sign from Pam. Any sign. (Pssst! Come on, Pam, that's your cue!) Thanks my dear!

Written by Bennie Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 12
Summary:

So they can remember...Spoilers through Branch Closing. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 703 Read Count: 2187 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2006 Updated: November 12, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Written

It's very well written, very wistful.  And you know they both really would be having a sleepless night the night before he comes back!

Rhythm by nqllisi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 20] 19
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam's awaiting the "Merger" (based on promos but mostly unspoiled).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200 Read Count: 1810 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2006 Updated: November 16, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely!

Author's Response: Hee, that's the spirit! (thank you!)

Merging by Par5 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 16] 14
Summary: Pam can't sleep and looks back on the merger. No spoilers, just speculation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 1722 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2006 Updated: November 16, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I wish it could be *your* way tonight!  

It looks like the editor messed up your spacing in the last block of text - FYI. 



Author's Response: Oops! Thanks I fixed it. I know, I'm crossing my fingers!

ok by kaywinnit Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 18
Summary: Set a few weeks from now--at the office Christmas party. Spoilers through The Merger.

Pam isn't ok.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1639 Read Count: 2159 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2006 Updated: November 16, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ah - the glimmer of hope I really needed today! thanks!


Author's Response: Glad to help out!

Not a Bar Fight by purplebelt Rated: M [Reviews - 9] 10
Summary: Pam meets her sister for a drink.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1077 Read Count: 1835 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2006 Updated: November 17, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ouch - good start.  Looking forward to chapter 2

Parking Lot Redux by sharky Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 17
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam try to fix what's broken in the parking lot the day he comes back from Stamford.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2718 Read Count: 5630 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2006 Updated: November 30, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The First Day Back

*sigh* if only!


Author's Response: We can hope, right?

Hindsight by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 26] 27
Summary: Past Featured Story

I'm sad.  Pam's sad.  Jim's sad.  Karen's waiting for him at Coopers. 

Something had to be done.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2038 Read Count: 5016 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2006 Updated: November 17, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Remembering....

definitely one of the best post-merger stories I've read today.  Thanks!


Author's Response: Glad to hear it.  And you're welcome. :)

Leap Year by justjaded Rated: T [Reviews - 12] 16
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost Merger - Except the years he waited, he was able to witness her falling out of love - She's getting to watch him fall in love. Pam reaches her breaking point and decides to take a leap.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4477 Read Count: 3592 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2006 Updated: November 17, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

really, really nice work!

Supposed to Be by Colette Rated: T [Reviews - 34] 28
Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-Merger. A little angsty, a little triangular, but fear not - it doesn't end there.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2195 Read Count: 11518 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2006 Updated: November 20, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You make it look so damn easy, you know that?  I wish I could write half as well as well as you do!  Thanks so much for sharing this.

Author's Response: What a fabulous compliment moxie! But you already write beautifully! In any case, I'm really glad you liked it. I wasn't too sure about it, to be honest. And thanks for your generous remarks!

Language Barrier by Paper Jam Rated: M [Reviews - 29] 29
Summary: Past Featured StorySeven different ways to say I love you.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Elements
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4829 Read Count: 26395 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2006 Updated: November 20, 2006
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Body Language

what a great series of snapshots - with the last one best of all!  :-)  great work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Lonely Days, Lonely Nights by Par5 Rated: T [Reviews - 45] 21
Summary: One drabble is lonely, two are better, three feels like a crowd. Look at all the lonely people in Scranton.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Creed, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Roy, Ryan, Toby
Genres: Angst, Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 979 Read Count: 13545 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2006 Updated: March 27, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Pieces

Damn it, Pam - just drive to Jim's, okay???

You do capture her shifting pain well, though.  Which is probably why it irritates me to read it.  ;-) 



Author's Response: She just needs a little encouragement. And she'll get it soon. Really.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 9 Dates

Okay, I'm going to buzz your review count, but I think each of these deserves a comment.  :-)

I love this line:  she understood the intricacies of his relationship with Jan - It made me wonder if he'd talked about Jan so much Carol thought there was something between them, or thought Michael was in love with Jan and didn't know it, or what.  I think Carol may have gotten Michael, but from this I'd say that Michael didn't get Carol, much less himself.



Author's Response: Maybe this is due to my new puppy, but Michael reminds me of an overexuberant pup. He has Carol and he licks her face and hangs around begging to be petted until finally she just yells at him to go lay down! I think he felt that Carol got him, but as you say, he sure didn't get her!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: March 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Aftermath

oh you are SOOO cruel.  Cruel, cruel, cruel.  Why must you continue Jim's lies?


Author's Response: Mostly just to torture you, Moxie! Sorry, but this hianous has just gone on way too long!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Thanksgiving IV

I think that there are so many real relationships out there just like Kelly and Ryan, where the guy wakes up and suddenly finds himself with someone. I wish they'd contrast the K/R relationship more with the J/P one - you know, tumbling into 'couplehood' vs. a decision to be together.  

I think you've captured Ryan's general awkwardness well here, though.  I wonder what Meredith was doing on Thanksgiving? 



Author's Response: I like all the "deep" stuff you said but all I can think about is that Meredith is off having a boozefest with her AA buddies, no doubt!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Thanksgiving III

Creed completely rocks.  There is nothing else to add.   This is my second favourite after the Roy one.  I wonder if Creed is actually a millionaire, he just can't remember where he put the money.

Author's Response: BAH! What if Creed is DB Cooper? Hmmm...that gives me an idea!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Thanksgiving

Now this one is way too sad.  I hate Toby's ex-wife. :-(

Author's Response: Yeah, man, she sucks! But maybe Toby leaves his wet towels laying on the bathroom floor and cuts his toenails in bed and never takes the garbage out so who are we to judge?! ;-)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: November 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Thanksgiving II

Sad, but it's still hard for me to feel too badly for Roy.  It's very poignant, though.  Maybe my favourite so far, stylistically speaking...

Author's Response: I don't feel bad for Roy at all! But I'm sure dealing with all the "where's Pam?" questions after so many years together would suck beyond belief. Thanks!